I know its been a month or so now, but here it is.yes!! a update, keep them coming.
Thank you, I'm surprised how well they're working out together.This story idea is working well. The boys work well together.
Working on it.Keep up the good work!!!!
More to hopefully enjoy.Loving it!
Here ya go.more please!
Next part is here :biggrin:Browalla must satisfy poofhoof's hunger for more of this story or you get tkspanking:!
Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it. I'll be honest, I'm really surprised how this is all coming together.This is a good story. I really like how you combine true to life storytelling with supernatural elements and diapers.
I'm glad you're liking it. I know there's more questions than answers right now, and this next parts gonna make it even more mysterious. But rest assured, all will make sense later.An other nice part. I like the mix between the diaper friendship and the mysterious community with super powers. I'm looking forward to read the next part.
Glad you're liking it. Next parts here.Nice cliffhanger there. I have a thing for sci-fi as well though I usually don't read about it. This however is really good I hope to see another chapter. :smile1:
I actually had to look that one up. Still not sure if that's a good or bad thing to be Orwellian. Next parts up.very Orwellian
Don't worry, there's plenty more to come. I'm glad to see I'm getting some things right, because even though I try to do research on stuff like the psych unit, I'm still not sure if what I put out is plausible.Wow I like the mystery about this. I think I know what's going on but I don't want to ruin it for everyone else so I will not talk about that anymore. This is exactly how they try to break you down in a psych ward actually depending on the location. I can see plot twists in unexpected ways happening. I hope there's more! :smile1:
Yes, I will admit, that I usually try to include a brief summary at the start of any story. Unfortunately this is one of those stories that's writing itself so the end product is guaranteed to not be what I originally planned to be. If that makes any sense. And, yes, I completely understand and respect your position in regards to finding what looks to be a promising story, only to feel put off by something that was completely unexpected. I've had that happen plenty of times when I've found some new reading material. From this day forwards, any new story I work on *will* have a summary or short snippit about what the story might contain.Great story and very well written I will say, you're an amazing writer. My only "critique" so to speak would be the addition of a brief synopsis as to give an idea of at least the genre of the piece. Because it is certainly enjoyable, but I am not really a fan of the sci-fi/fantasy type novels or stories and so it came as a great disappointment to me when I felt the need to stop a-reading when the trash can got a-lifting.
You got it.more please!
Plannin' on it.Keep your imagination in this way!