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LittlestRFK

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If anyone is good at making logo's for websites can yo let me know i need one for
Internet Safety For Kids - Powered by CO.CC my website about internet saftey for kids/party and i think this should be pinned has my sits has lots of info
kidssafety . co . cc for thos cant see links yet
i can even post all the info on anther topic if the amin' and mods will let me and they can pin it ? could a mod/admin pm me and we can talk about it plz?
ut i need a logo culd someone make me one plz thanks
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A few points/problems:

1) Spell check/grammar check! Please!!!

2) How is the site at all for kids? You can't market something with "This site is for parents and kids about internet safety" when it's all aimed at adults.

3) I don't think it will go down well here, considering you say that anyone under the age of 18 shouldn't be allowed to use a computer unless in a communal space in the house.
 

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well i have the site up for info as some parents one site was on the news called blogt that a 6 year old had her own pc in her room with internet and webcam and some perv told her to get get naked and she did and well the site is still up but that guy got charged lets just say but that is for anther topic
 

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That's not what I'm saying. I'm saying that many members here, say from 15 on upwards will have computers in their room. Do you really think it's appropriate for the last age section to have that written?
 

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it was on a offical website also so i just added more to it and easy for people to find it
 

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Not really and if you look it links back to the main website i got it from tons of times about 25+ times so it takes to the main page of where i got it
 

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I still think it's dissrespectful to take someone elses work and copy it without permission. Whether you count it as plagiarism or not.

What are you doing to make your site more accessible to children?
 

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one group on yt that does internet safty videos has my link on there page and some ther sites have it also and and 100% safe that is why i have no chat/forum that type of stuff n it
 

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That doesn't mean it's any less disrespectable to have copied someone elses work. If I copied your site, layout and all, and passed it off as my own how would you feel? Especially if you'd put a lot of effort into it?

Also, you *really* need to go through and sort your grammar out. Very little of it makes sense. Why would a parent listen to you if you can't form basic sentences, when there are hundreds of other websites out there telling them the same sort of things?

Sorry if I sound harsh, I'm trying to make this constructive.
 

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There are a couple of things that you really need to do to sort this site out. I appreciate the motives behind you making this, but as it stands it's very unusable.

What program did you use? You need to get a better layout, and a clearer navigation. If you want to make websites, you need to learn html as a language, not through a what you see is what you get editor. You need to learn how to edit tables. You need to be able to write CSS rules by hand.

As Talula said, you also need to write your own stuff with good grammar and flow! You can't plaigerise, nor can you hash together different sources from different places. It''s okay to take ideas, but not copy whole pieces without the author's permission.

Have a look at this. It's a simple layout that someone with a basic knowledge of html and css can do. It's functional with a clear navigational structure. It has it's flaws, including major rendering errors on some pages (it's for a school project, and I couldn't be bothered to fix it. Look at it in internet explorer.), but it has consistent navigation, and is easy to use and clear.

Hope this helps and good luck! Let me know if you need some suggestions on places to learn HTML and CSS,

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i did that e by hand but its a basic quick site nthen to fancey or anything but thanks fr the ideas
 

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i did that e by hand but its a basic quick site nthen to fancey or anything but thanks fr the ideas

Argh!!! I can't deal with it anymore!!! I've tried to hold my tongue but I just can't!! For goodness sake PLEASE type properly!!!

Exclamation point overload!!!! :wallbash:
 

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Thank you for saying what I wanted to say, Talula.

GRAMMAR IS IMPORTANT! I KNOW I'M NOT SETTING A GOOD EXAMPLE BY TYPING IN ALL CAPITALS, BUT IT MAKES ME FEEL BETTER! GRRRRR!!!

To stand a chance of having any credibilty on the internet, you need to check your work thoroughly. At the very least get a browser like chrome or firefox, and use their built in spellcheck features! It will make a huge difference. You won't bring your posts on a par to Shakespeare, but at least you'll make sense and sound like an intelligent human being.
 
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