I AGREE, CLAPS AND ALL, VERY GOOD STORY.Wow. A lot of death at the end of this one. You're our own George R. R. Martin!
Seriously, BabySamantha, congratulations on finishing a project that took almost as long as "A Song of Ice and Fire" to complete! You started this puppy in 2013, and now, here in 2017, you've seen it through to an end. Do you have idea how many stories have been started and abandoned in that time? I've just indexed the site, so I do: the answer is a ton. What focus to see it through! And what a wonderful story has resulted.