Aside from occasionally signing in, I have been away from ADISC for some time (busy from school & a part-time job & such), but I finally caught up on v2.0 of Towing Wyoming; it was the first story from ADISC I've read in some time, & one of the best.
It really is excellent; your writing is so vivid. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen next.
Oh yeah, The Hooligan was great. It ranks near the top of my favorite DL-themed stories. Oh, I understand, I've been really busy with classes. I'll definitely be looking forward to it when you get a chance!
I'll let you know how I like The Dance; I plan to start reading it today.
Thanks again for emailing me The Hooligan.
I've been very busy for the last few months (& pretty much absent from ADISC), but I finally finished it the other day, along with Joseph Kross; they were both great. I really enjoyed The Hooligan; the alternating flashbacks worked really well, the characters were very well developed, & the plot was excellent.
I still need to read The Dance, but I just read the beginning of Towing Wyoming, & so far it's quite engrossing.
Oh, thank you for giving it a read, I'm glad you like it If you look in the finished section I do also have a story with a Male main character which you may prefer. As for what a dummy is the, it's just the British word for a pacifier, (also used in Australia I think) - I am very big on mine, I collect them
Hello, thank you for the message
I am really enjoying your story, and as someone who occasionally writes myself I know the importance of feedback. Although I have no idea what the issues might be I suspect that as you write so fluently and eloquently you will convey them in a way that ensures they make sense to the reader, and as you say many human issues transcend borders. So far I have understood everything in the story - I did have to look up the word Araphoro as it wasn't something I was familiar, but I like stories which sometimes require me to look something up and learn something new so that was definitely a positive thing.