Attends (plastic backed)

betagame · 08-10-2008

I made a new review:
Attends (review) (plastic backed)
Do you like it?? Please put your input.

DannyTheNinja · 10-10-2008

Hey, this is actually a pretty great article. Good job! Couple of suggestions for you:

Try to avoid using the ellipsis (...) a lot. It can be useful to follow your train of thought in a draft but when you submit a final copy you should try to use complete sentences.
The word "review" in the article title is unnecessary.
You don't need to manually include an article in the "Articles needing images" category. Just add the text:
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to the top of the article, and that will automatically categorize it and place the little box on the top of the article for you.
[edit] Try to avoid self-references (e.g. the sentence "I don't know the proper absorbency but I think they're like 4 Depends Briefs."). See the Wiki Editing guidelines for my statement on why this rule exists.

Great job on this article. Keep it up.

+1, you've earned it.

--Danny

Butterfly Mage · 10-10-2008

Well, the plastic Attends used to be so much better a few years ago. On the past 2-3 years, the company has made them really thin and less absorbant. The padding tends to bunch up and fall apart too. Also, the diapers are physically smaller than they used to be. My weight is the same (185) and my pants size is the same (34) but I can't wear a medium Attends anymore.

Oddly enough, I recently tried their new "breathable" style with the clothlike exterior and they are more absorbant and more comfortable as well as being somewhat thicker too.

Darkfinn · 10-10-2008

I edited the absorbancy section... one Attends is not equal to four Depends.

08-10-2008	#1 (permalink)
betagame Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Bay Area Age: 16 Posts: 708 Threads: 141 Gallery Uploads: 2 Wiki Edits: 208 Blog Entries: 7 Reputation: 4	Attends (review) (plastic backed) I made a new review: Attends (review) (plastic backed) Do you like it?? Please put your input. Last edited by DannyTheNinja; 10-10-2008 at 10:36 PM. Reason: Splitting off from wiki article guidelines thread (off topic)

10-10-2008	#2 (permalink)
DannyTheNinja Has fresh blood Donor Staff Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Rochester, NY Age: 18 Posts: 674 Threads: 45 Gallery Uploads: 10 Wiki Edits: 498 Blog Entries: 5 Reputation: 47	Hey, this is actually a pretty great article. Good job! Couple of suggestions for you: Try to avoid using the ellipsis (...) a lot. It can be useful to follow your train of thought in a draft but when you submit a final copy you should try to use complete sentences. The word "review" in the article title is unnecessary. You don't need to manually include an article in the "Articles needing images" category. Just add the text: Code: {{need-photo}} to the top of the article, and that will automatically categorize it and place the little box on the top of the article for you. [edit] Try to avoid self-references (e.g. the sentence "I don't know the proper absorbency but I think they're like 4 Depends Briefs."). See the Wiki Editing guidelines for my statement on why this rule exists. Great job on this article. Keep it up. +1, you've earned it. --Danny Last edited by DannyTheNinja; 10-10-2008 at 10:48 PM. Reason: Oops, that's {{need-photo}}

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Butterfly Mage VIP Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Baltimore, MD Posts: 988 Threads: 14 Reputation: 33	Well, the plastic Attends used to be so much better a few years ago. On the past 2-3 years, the company has made them really thin and less absorbant. The padding tends to bunch up and fall apart too. Also, the diapers are physically smaller than they used to be. My weight is the same (185) and my pants size is the same (34) but I can't wear a medium Attends anymore. Oddly enough, I recently tried their new "breathable" style with the clothlike exterior and they are more absorbant and more comfortable as well as being somewhat thicker too.

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Darkfinn Banned Donor Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Charlotte, NC Age: 25 Posts: 3,978 Threads: 84 Gallery Uploads: 18 Wiki Edits: 4 Blog Entries: 17 Reputation: 105	I edited the absorbancy section... one Attends is not equal to four Depends.