The everyone writes the story story

[Thunder]

Okay, i feel really bad coz the only two threads i've posted are really stupid. But, I had an interesting idea. This is, the "Everyone writes the story" story. Someone will start the story to be whatever you want it to be (as their own part of a chapter,) and then someone else will write the next part of the chapter. Feel free to introduce any charecters, make plot twists, just have fun. Start new chapters at any point too.

Okay, here's my go at it.

The Everybody writes the story story.
By, Everyone

Chapter 1

My name is Justin. Justin Smith, to be exact. I'm fourteen years old and in my freshman year of high school. I go to my local public high school, in the town of Harwington. I have one sibling, a older sister who is in her junior year of college. I live with my mom and dad, in a 2 story victorian house. It's a light blue, a pretty nice place to live, and i live fifteen minutes away from my high school. (Fifteen walking minutes, actually.) Anyway, every teen has problems. Peer pressure, being picked on, embaressment, well... you get the picture. But I however, have a secret. You guessed it, I'm a TB. I've lived all my life hiding this secret, telling it to only my stuffed animals. Anyway, my mom's yelling at me to get off the computer, after all I have school tommorow. See ya' later.


Have fun guys. Hope this works out.

Fine, since nobody is cooperating, I guess it'll be my own story.

Yay for me!

Mod Note: Try not to double post

[Point Blanch]

It's only been 5 hours. I mean, yeah, only five hours, but that's not a whole lot of wait for this particular forum.

[Atsu]

I shall contribute! One moment!
=== Yea like point said, it might take a while dude. Just be patient people will contribute ^^ Great idea btw. Kudos =D



Chapter 2:

Ugh! What a day! God I'm so glad to be home and back on the computer away from all the troubles of my life. Thank goodness for this online journal. I can't even contemplate where I should begin on what's happened today... Well, maybe I'll back up about a month so you can know what's been going on.

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Ah, first day of high school! So exciting yet so nerve wrecking. As I walked up to the home room the principle announced I(as well as 28 other kids) would be at yesterday at the orientation, someone tripped me! I face planted right into the hard tile floor of the hallway as I heard some deep laughter. As I began to get up I saw three pairs of shoes now positioned in front of me. I looked up to see what seemed like giants. Three guys which were about six foot or higher towered over my small five foot four inch frame.

The first one, dressed in a leather jacket and some dark black pants with a flared up hair style spoke first. His voice was rather deep and very intimidating. "I've seen you staring at my sister. If you ever even THINK about doing anything with her, I will make your life here in MY highschool as miserable as I possible. Understand?" he finished with major emphasis on the part of me understanding.

"Clear as crystal..." I muttered lightly

The three guys walked away as the bell rang and I wiped the small splotch of blood from my nose and continued to walk to my home room.

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It sucked majorly! The first what, twenty minutes of my highschool life and I was already being bullied! And me, being my ignorant self, I ignored them and continued to somewhat, stalk this girl I had a crush on. Big mistake... It's lead to most of my problems this year. And not to mention that one very embarrassing and... wet day.

But that's a story for another time. Gotta do my homework now. Catch you guys later.

[Thunder]

=) Nice addition

[silent deadly alchemist]

here to 'your own story' idea titled monday-insanity

..but BRO.. do i HAVE to.
"YES,YOU DO"
but WHYY
"because i said so!"

"ah, just another day woldnt you say"....

"oh hi, m'names will, and THAT was my lil sis merissa. a lil bundle of joy, sadness and temporary insanity, take your pick if you dare.
anywho, you may have been wondering about that tirade just now, well it involves merissa, and a few 'issues' at school involving....*fwip* as i duck that..now quivering knife...and.*fwip* her fork..*looking up* aah yep its safe, shes run out of cutlery unless she decides to throw he plate but she had etter not because she KNOWS what happnes if she tries!!"

"anyways, it mostly involves her havng to wear a special amulet so she doesnt give her classmates nightmares with her illusion magic.. oh and the minor detail that by sheer willpower, and by dint of a large helping of magic REFUSED to tolet train. (yeah you knew this was coming) and as a result has to wear nappies all day long, and f course at school, so she has to goto the teacher to get her cleaned up after class.

Want my opinion, to be honest i dont mind cuz then theres less waitng in line for the toilets for her although the tradeoff is she can be a real stinker. and well its nice being close to your sis since we're all we have left, and shes like a doll anyway when she sleeps"

although she also seems to thnk that it gives her a liscence not to do the work a school under the ancient logic of nappy=baby and baby=no work, therefore if you cut out the middleman you get nappy=no work. in fact there aint much about her that IS normally aged, for one, the reason she hasnt grabbed more cutlery to throw, but is nonetheless fuming semi-silently, is by large dint of the fact shes in a highchair.... her idea not mine for those who were wondering.


Oh and yes you heard me correctly back there, she can use MAGIC, haha you thought we were just regular family didnt you, not by a long shot, for one, theres only us two since dad, mum and the middle child jasmine died in a car crash whle i was at home babysitting merissa/studying for university finals, and NO were not a family of wizards and witches, shes the ONLY one who can do it. but i swear that power in the hands of a 6 year old girl should be banned by the geneva convention under catagory of being a torture implement. "

oh and your thinking IM just a normal young adult, nope your wrong there as well, for one most teenagers dont walk around the house dressed like kenshin. featuring swords forged by yours truely.
"I HELPED!"...
"I KNOW YOU DID SWEETY NOW FINISH YOUR BREAKFAST".

...anyways, im finished, and have the day off, so the only issue is getting the princess of to school safe and sound, and reletively dry *bonk* "OUCH", good thng it was only a plastic cup...

(a tribute to the banter between me and mysi)

[Dr_J]

I see what you're trying to do here, and I commend you for coming up with an idea like this...but, I suppose because I'm a writer, I can't see this going too well. I'm already noticing differences in the writing styles, and it's causing me to sigh in frustration since I know that this will eventually become a vortex of madness.

I feel like you should have some sort of guidelines to do this story...that, or have an initial story idea instead of allowing people to just add in whatever they feel like, because I could very well throw my writing skills into the thread. And do you know why I don't? Because I feel like it'll bring my credibility as a writer down due to the lack of guidelines and rules.

I apologize if this sounds harsh, but I'm just stating my concern/opinion on this matter. You've got a good idea...I just see already that the plot twists are TOO much...they aren't subtle enough to make me want to continue reading.

[Thunder]

Lol... My sister is a witch... who refused to get potty trained.... yeah, you kinda screwed it up there, sorry man.

[Boogeyman]

The End. Rite beter necst teim, nuubz.

[Point Blanch]

I didn't see any input from you

[Boogeyman]

Originally Posted by Point Blanch

I didn't see any input from you

Hello? I ended the story!