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Old 08-09-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default ZEF (Don't know if this will ever be finished...And it's not *B/DL related)

Ok, so I started writing this months ago...And I never got back into writing it...But uh, I thought I'd share what I actually did with all of you...There's only 3 chapters...

Chapter 1
As I lay there, thinking to myself, I couldn’t help wondering how I wound up with this job. All I could remember from that fateful day was a horrific explosion. You are probably wondering who I am, so I might as well tell you. Well my name is Jay, and I’m a specialized Zombie killer here at ZEF, the Zombie Elimination Facility. I’m about 6’1 with short black hair and a muscular body. I don’t know anyone here that I knew before the explosion, but I’ve come to know them through the years.
There isn’t a lot I know about ZEF except it is where I work, and it is my home. We specialize in the elimination of Zombies, that were formed from the BE, or Big Explosion. No one is quite sure where the BE came from, but it wiped out most of the world. Or so we thought.
It turns out anyone that was hit with the blast, was transformed into some kind of deadly Zombie. Some of us, like me, were changed. We didn’t turn into zombies, but we did get superhuman powers. Mine are still developing, but currently I have incredible strength and stamina. I am still liable to obtain more powers.
These aren’t your run-of-the-mill Zombies that can be eliminated with some kind of religious bullets, like you see in the movies. These Zombies can only die if they are pierced in a certain point in their brain. No one knows how this information was obtained, but we have it and we put it to good use.
It’s a good thing we were blessed with these powers; otherwise our job would be a lot tougher. We don’t have an unlimited supply of ammunition, seeing as most things were destroyed in the BE. We use what we can find, so I guess we can be considered savages. Do not take that title to the grave, though.








Chapter 2
Zombies. Zombies everywhere. No matter where you go outside, there are Zombies. No one leaves unless they must and no one leaves alone.
The Zombies can still infect us. Currently, there is no cure, nor are we trying to make one. We don’t have the resources to start any kind of medical research. The Zombie virus is transferred the same way as the post BE virus, AIDS. If any of us were to get infected, then we would have to be killed.
One of our own has been infected, but we didn’t get a chance to kill him. We have reason to believe that he is one of the Zombie leaders. We aren’t sure if they Zombies have the same thought processes we do, but we believe they have the capability to form social groups.
The problem of one of our own turning into a Zombie without being killed, is that he still has the powers he was given in the BE. We have named this “breed”: Super Zombie, or SZ. We haven’t faced him yet though, and when we do, I bet it won’t turn out well.
Out of the 30 men we started with, we are down to 24. The one that was infected, but got away, was named Cliff. Now we refer to him as SZ #1. We are afraid that there could possibly be more Super Zombies, so we have to make sure to kill our own on sight, if they are believed to be infected. Once infected, we estimate the victim has less than five minutes before they become a SZ.






Chapter 3
Zombie Record #281
We have reason to believe that SZ #1 has formed some sort of army, with him as the leader. We do not know his motives, or if they even have the capabilities to have motives, but if this is true then we are at a higher risk than we were before. SZ #1 (also known as the human “Cliff”) originally had the BE powers of increased speed and stamina.
SZ #1 is the only infected ZEF soldier currently knows that has been infected and escaped before a chance to be executed. SZ #1 is originally from the former state of Iowa, and is believed to have headed back to his home state. We believe that SZ’s or maybe Zombies in general, do have some sort of thought processes, or at least a memory of their former human states.
We have no way to confirm this, and we are going on assumptions alone. If any new information arises, then we shall add it to a later Zombie Record.



The third chapter is supposed to be like out of data logs, hence the different font (more noticeable on Word)...Gross...The chapters look so short on here D:
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Odd, you don't often see zombie apocalypse stories here.
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Hehe...Yeah...
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I’m about 6’1 with short black hair and a muscular body.
Really? I'm a 6'6, muscular tank of a man, with blue eyes and long flowing blond hair.

Sorry, but that line kills me everytime I read it in story.
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I can't believe someone made a zombie story on this site. All my thoughts about this community are strengthened ten-fold as of now. Im pretty sure Zombies isnt supposed to be capitalized outside of regular rules. Also, those chapters are so short I could...... make a short joke with them. Make spaces in-between paragraphs. Super-Zombie?
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Copying it from Word to here screwed up the layout some...For this story, Zombies are capitalized...I know they are short...They look longer on Word though...
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Meh, I don't care about most of the grammer stuff, just don't mess this up. I haven't read a good zombie story in.... about a year.
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