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This is a new story ive been working on, Jasons attitude seems to change later on, but that is only because his personality was affected by being sucked into another world, anyways...This is a fantasy furry story, and im working very hard to have a good character and storyline. Hope you enjoy this first 4 parts




One Among Legends….
By Soulja F.



In a place, very far away, there is a terrible darkness, 2 races at enmity with one another, it was said that one from one side would be with the other, that this stranger would come from another world, and would either help the Empire (humans), or the Ver`u Dai (furs) Either choice, he will be one of them…

Chapter 1: From his world to our’s
Jason awoke from his sleep in the middle of the night. It was raining outside.
“(sigh) why’d have to rain and thunder during the middle of the night, I was just having a good dream”. Jason said. As Jason got up from his bed and walked to his bedroom door, he felt a tingling sensation in his body, he couldn’t move.
“Wha…RRG!...why can’t I move”!? Jason yelled. Just then everything went dark. He awoke when felt hard stone, knowing that his floor wasn’t stone; he looked around to see where he was.
“Where the hell am I”! Jason said to himself.
“By the gods…it worked”?! a mysterious cloaked figure said, about 7ft away from the confused Jason. Jason having heard the voice turned around.
“W-who are you”? Jason asked.
“I am Gaenor, and welcome to Iona”! The cloaked man said
“Well I don’t know where Iona is, but I’m from Providence, Rhode Island”. Jason replied.
“Providence? Rhode Island? I’ve never heard of such places, you really are from another world”! The cloaked man said with excitement as he removed his hood, but when Jason saw him remove his hood he almost fell backwards when he saw that it wasn’t the face of a man, rather it was a face of a gray fox.
“W-w-wha wha…what in the world are you”?! Jason asked, taken off guard by the creature that was before him.
“Oh my, I apologize if my appearance has startled you, I trust you have not seen the likes of my kind. But allow me to see just if you truly are from another world or from the Empire”. Gaenor walked towards Jason. Jason not know what he would do started to back away.
“Be still, I won’t harm you”. Gaenor said calmly as he went up to Jason, his hand outstretched and began to glow. Jason just stood there, trusting the grey fox’s words. Gaenor moved his paw/hand over his shoulder and black runes started appearing all over his left side, down the left side of his face was the only part that could be seen as Jason was wearing a shirt. It appeared as though they were tattooed on even though that wasn’t the case.
“Ah yes, so it is true, you are not of Iona”. Gaenor said as the runes receded and disappeared. All of a sudden a throwing knife flew past Jason missing him, barely.

“Hmhmhmhm, so the purpose of this ruin has finally been discovered”. A mysterious voice said coming from the right across the clearing.


Chapter 2: The decision and change

The man walked out from the woods across the clearing.
“Well well, it would appear that you did the work for me”. The man chuckled.
“Hey, what’s the big idea”?! Jason shouted.
“Sorry, I missed”. The man chuckled at his own words. “What is your name young man?”
“Don’t call me young man, I’m 18, and if you really need know its Jason. Why exactly did you try to kill me”? Jason asked.

“I tried to get him out of the way, before he did anything to you. Those Ver`u Dai can’t be trusted”. The man Replied. Jason looked over to Gaenor, assuming that was the name of their race.
Gaenor then spoke up. “Lies Filthy lies, how dare you say that Darius”. Gaenor raised an arm and it started to glow with a magical force.

“Wait…there be no need for any of that, I say we let him decide…whom to trust”. Darius pointed to Jason.
Gaenor looked at Jason and said. “Please, trust me I only want to help you. He only wants to turn you against me”.
“Oh please, listen to him, he’s trying to deceive you. He’ll only bring you to a weakness that will soon be exterminated”. Darius said smugly. Who are you going to trust? Jason looked at Gaenor then Darius. He could somehow see it in Gaenor’s eye’s that he was telling the truth. On the other hand, when he looked at Darius, he looked like a man with something to hide.
“Screw you Darius, I’m not siding with you”. Jason said.
“I take that is supposed to be some sort of insult”. Darius Replied. “You are a fool, From now on we are enemies Jason. Farewell Ver`u Dai”. And with that Darius ran off.
“Wait minute? Why did he call me Ver`u Dai”? Jason asked.
“Im…not really sure”. Gaenor said in a tone that sounded like he knew something he wasn’t not about to reveal.
“Are you sure”? Jason replied. Just then the Runes started appearing again down his left side of his face, around the left side of his torso, and along his left hand. A searing pain shot through his body.
“Ugg…W-whats going on, why are these markings reappearing”? Jason asked, his voice straining from the pain. (This began after they were walking towards the hidden village Terra, Gaenor’s home)
“Don’t worry it will be over soon”. Gaenor said in a monotone voice, showing he wasn’t really worried, knowing what was about to happen. Jason Then passed out from the pain. Gaenor picked him up and carried him the rest of the way to Terra.
Several hours later…Terra, Gaenor’s house.
“I wonder how he’ll react when he finds out what has happened to him”. Gaenor chuckled as he said this.

Chapter 3: Not so Surprised…A New Identity!

Jason had been laid in a bed. He stirred, then awoke and looked around the room.
“Where am I”? Jason said.
“I brought you to Terra”. This is the home of the other Ver`u Dai, said Gaenor.
“Oh…well, thank u I guess”. Jason said. But his mood was short lived. He stretched and saw that his hands weren’t hands anymore, but were a combination of a hand/paw. His hands were completely covered in black fur, and up the rest of his arm was orange fur with a brownish tinge to it. His chest, what little bit was exposed by the shirt he wore; which was a little more baggy on him than before, Exposed a cream colored fur. And on top of that, he noticed his face had grown into a muzzle.

“Ok…What did you do to me”?! Jason asked.
“Well, you see, since you are from another world; you have the ability to be able to join any race in Iona, so as to allow you fit in via those black runes that are now permanently on your skin and fur. Any ways, since you were basically made an enemy of the Empire. They would’ve hunted you down and locked you away or worse. That’s the kind of power Darius had. So instead of letting that happen I gave you the chance to be able to go about without being recognized.

“Well, I guess I appreciate the thought and all, but, how the heck am I ever gonna get a girl like this. I hope im not stuck like this”?! Jason said, hoping he would be answered with a no.
“Well, you should be able to change back once you go back to your world, actually, since you’ll be of both races, from your world and ours, you should be able to change at will, but so long as Giliar rules the empire, you will not be able to return”. Gaenor Replied.
“Well any…wait a minute a tail too”? Jason said as he saw something move behind him.
“Well of course, I mean you are a fox after all”. Gaenor said in a matter of factly tone of voice.
“Sigh…I don’t think im going to get used to this appearance every time I stand in front of a mirror”. Jason replied as he was looking at how he looked in a mirror.
“Anyways Jason, follow me we have much to do, first we need to get you some clothes that are more fitting for your new physique”. Gaenor said, as they were walking. Jason had attained a slightly more slender and agile physique upon becoming a fox, so his normal clothes were a little big on him now. Jason followed behind still pondering exactly how things would work out in this new form of his.
“The clothes we made for you are made for quick movement and stealth. They are also quite appealing to the eye”. Gaenor said to Jason as he showed him the outfit on the table. It was a vest that seemed to be made out of some type of leather; it had a zipper in the front in order to close it. It was not a short vest, but one that would be mistaken for a shirt because of its thinness and the fact that it was snug against the torso. There were no sleeves; it was cut off right at where the shoulder joint was. There were also black pants to match, and special gloves. Jason was directed to a room, which he assumed was a private room of some kind and removed his old clothes and put the new outfit on. Afterwards he met outside again with Gaenor. Jason noticed his hair was different as well. It was now brownish red and straight, as well as long, a little past half ways down his back. It also spiked out at certain points.
“At any rate, it would also be a good idea for you to change your name, Darious already knows your name, and if you go by that name its likely he’ll find you and lock you away or worse”. Gaenor said in a stern voice.
“Hmm…change my name eh…heh heh. Well I see where you are coming from on this one, I mean, I’ll still use my old name, but just here in…Terra? That is the name right”? Jason asked.

Gaenor replied. “Yes, you are correct, that is the name of this city, but the name of the Empire Capitol is Valinguard”.
“Thanks for the tip, I’ll be sure to remember that”. Jason replied.
“So what name exactly to you plan on using”? Gaenor asked.
“Well, might as well have fun with this, so how about something cool. I think ill go by the name Arius then”. Jason said.
“Good, but as to what you said about still using your real name here, I wouldn’t recommend it. You would be better off just referring to yourself as Arius. Now Arius, why don’t you have a look around the city, if there’s anything you feel you need to ask about, feel free to ask around.
Chapter 4: A promising savior

Jason was more interested in the movement of his acquired tail than he was in looking around the city.
“Heh heh, it feels weird”. He said as he swished it in various angles. But then something caught his attention. There was a panther that seemed to be his age, 18. He was tossing some kind of knives into a target, upon closer inspection they were knives designed especially for throwing. Jason went up the panther.
“How are you doing that”? He asked.
“Well its really easy after a while, its all in the throw”. He said, focusing on landing another knife in the center of the target. The black panther aimed and landed it right in the middle. Jason looked and saw he landed it right in the middle again.
“So what is your name anyway”? The panther asked.
“My name is Arius”. Jason replied. “And your name is…”?
“My name is Dehlas, but I’ve seemed to have earned the nickname Dehl Ghato, or Dehl for short. You can call me that too if you like Arius”. He answered.
“Sure, that’s cool”. Jason replied.
“Ugg, I’ve heard that word used like that before, but what does it mean again”? Dehl Gahto asked.
“Well, its like saying im ok with calling u that”. Jason replied
“Oh, yeah that’s right, I knew that”. Dehl put his hand to his head. Jason chuckled a little at this. He took a look at the knives and thought about trying to throw one. He picked one up and wasn’t even seriously trying to aim, he threw it, and it landed smack dead in the center of the target. Dehl looked at Jason very surprised.
“How in the world did you do that on your first try”?! Dehl Gahto said, absolutely astonished. Jason looked at where it landed and even he was surprised.
“How the hell did that happen”? Jason Exclaimed.
“You threw it, Arius, you threw it and it hit it dead center”. Dehl replied. Jason couldn’t believe his own eyes.
“Maybe it might have something to do with being a fox”. He thought.
“You know, your pretty talented if you can do that on your first try. Here, tell you what, I’ll you some of my throwing knives for u to keep. You’ll probably be better at that type of thing than I am in no time”! Dehl said, still excited at Jason’s result. “Anyways, I’ve gotta go take care of something, I’ll be seeing you later Arius”. Dehl said as he left. Jason held the knife in his hand and repeatedly tossed it and caught it again as he walked. He saw various others doing different things. He went through the city looking at all the things and places. Including what the inhabitants were doing, some where apparently making certain gizmos, some of which even seemed to be a type of vehicle. Jason eventually made his way to one of the city gates when an elderly fox who had come from his house made for Jason with a worried look in his eye.
Jason saw the old fox coming towards him. “Hello”. He said, not knowing exactly what the old fox wanted. The old fox’s face showed every sign of worry and anxiety.
“Please…Please! Help me”. The old fox spoke.
“W-wha?...What do u need me to help you with”? Jason asked.
“Please help…they’ve taken her”. The old fox replied.
“Who has taken who”? Jason replied to the old fox’s question.
“The Black Thorns, they ve taken her, they’ve taken my daughter”. He replied.
“Who or what are the Black Thorns and why have they taken your daughter”? Jason asked wanting to know everything he could about this strange and horrible happening.
“Well what happened was, that foul Darius had his henchmen came here, and my daughter was out of the city, and they found her they started beating on her for no reason at all, then she started fighting back, but when that started all of a sudden a figure shrouded in a crimson red cloak with black vines and thorns came out of no where. He knocked the henchmen unconscious, and took my daughter. I fear she might be made into a slave or worse”. The old fox said with concern and sadness in his voice. “I had to tell someone, could you please find someone who will be able to rescue my daughter”? he asked.
“Sure, as a matter of fact I think I myself should be able to help her, I mean I can’t just leave her there now can I”? Jason replied.
“Oh bless you young fox, bless you”. The old fox said after which he then turned back towards his house.
“Heh, now to go kick some black thorn ass”! Jason said arrogantly. Jason then went out into the forest in search of a place where they might have taken her. After walking for a while he found something on the ground. It was a bead of some kind.
“Hmm, maybe that old fox’s daughter left this to show she was here”. Jason said to himself. Jason took in a deep breath, and noticed an unusual smell, it was coming from the bead. It was similar to the sent of the old fox. How he knew this was beyond him, but he figured it had something to do with him being a fox Ver`u Dai. He then sensed the smell trailing off to his right.
“Hmm that way”! Jason exclaimed. As he headed down that direction moving at a fast pace, he chuckled to himself. “Heh heh heh, being a fox is awesome”! He said to himself. He began to run even faster and pretty soon he was in a dash. He was amazed at how fast he was running. He just smiled and kept on going. The smell he had gotten slightly stronger.
“Hmm, must be getting near the place”. Jason said. He kept up his speed until he saw some type of building in the distance.
“That’s it, that’s the one”! Jason exclaimed as he reached the structure. It wasn’t to big and yet it wasn’t all that small either. Jason arrived at the front of the building.
“Its no doubt the door is locked, I guess that means I’m gonna have to go up and over”. Jason said as he began to look for away to ontop of the structure. He found some bricks jutting out and decided to use those, slowly but surely he made his way ontop of the building. There were people on the ground that were apparently slave trainers and such and such. But there were no Black Thorn members to be seen. He continued over the top until he saw a dome with an opening big enough for him go fall through, he peered through it and saw a girl fox in chained to some sort of device, she was swinging around a metal pole, apparently she knew how to fight and was practicing. She had dark brown hair at medium length with a few tied braids down the front that had beads on them. Jason also recognized the smell, it was her.
“Alright now to get her outta this dome and back to her ol man”. Jason said. And something seemed to tell him to just jump, the thought didn’t really seem all that foreboding. He jumped and landed quietly with one hand on the ground. He turned around and was suddenly smacked really hard and knocked him out.
He awoke a few minutes later with the vixen standing over him.
“Ha I knew it…sent another one of the Ver`u Dai traitors after me did they, well this time im gonna…hey…ur kinda cute”. Her face quickly changed to a smile. Jason quickly jumped to his feet and responded to the vixen.
“Heh, sorry lady but ur really not my type, and second of all, I make it a thing not to date women who bash me over the head with a metal pole”! Jason said, rubbing the spot where he was hit.
“Wait a second, so I take it your not after me”? The vixen asked.
“Well I am after you, but im here to save you from being sold as a slave, can’t let that happen now can I”? Jason replied with a smirk. Just then some of the guards came in.
“Who are u and what is your business here”!? the guard asked tapping his hand with a metal baton.
“well I heard about the party you were throwing for this feisty gal,(points at the vixen),and it looks like ur having a lot of fun, heh, too bad I have to crash it”. Jason replied with a smug look.

“Raaaaah! Get ready kid cause ur about to get ur ass kicked”! the lead guard yelled.
“Heh…am I supposed to be afraid, cause honestly, u guys crack me up”. Jason responded again.
“That it kid ur going down”!! the guard yelled, and then rushed at him.
“Alright then…C’mon lets dance”. Jason said as the guard was running at him. Jason adrenalin was surging through his body and he felt he could take them all on. He felt excited at finding out what his new agile fox body could really do. The guard leader ran at him and Jason step to the side. Jason then kicked up the metal pole on the ground into the air and it hit the guard leader square in the head. Jason caught the metal pole as it bounced from the guards head, and he quickly jabbed the guard in the stomach with it and swept his feet. The guard fell and hit his head on the ground, he was out cold.
“V-Ver`u Dai scuuuum”! the other guard shouted. They all rushed him. Jason started spinning the metal pole around and started hitting them all very quickly. He hit one in the stomach and a few more in the head. Eventually they were all down and out. Jason turned around to go see if the vixen was alright, when one of the guards got up and rushed at him from behind. He turned around and with a quick motion launched the guard into the air and slammed him out of the air with the pole and sent him into one of the walls.
“And its outta here”! Jason said while imitating a baseball swing. The vixen then walked up to him.
“My, someone is enjoying themselves”. She said with a giggle. “how did u do all that anyways, that was amazing”?!
“Well I don’t really know, I just sorta did it without really thinking”. Jason said with a chuckle.
“Well anyways what is your name”? The vixen asked.
“My name is Arius”. Jason replied. “And yours”?
“My name is Jade pleased to meet you”. She said with a smile. Jason then walked over to the downed guards and picked up the key from the lead guard.
“Alright time to take you back, but first we have to get out of this dump”. Jason said as grabbed another key from the guard. He went and unlocked the bracers attached the chains that were binding Jade and got here loose from them.

“But how are we going to get out, im pretty sure you don’t know the place that well”. Jade said in a concerned tone.
“No problem, we’ll make one”. Jason said as he grabbed one of the shackles and fastened it to a loose bolt in the dome wall. He then went in a room behind the binding contraption and found a lever with a key hole beneath it. He inserted the key and pulled the lever. The chain started realing in and pulled the bolt from the wall and the panel came off.
“There we go, ladies first”. Jason said with a chuckle pointing through the opening”.
“Oh whatever”. She said as she rolled her eyes and went through the opening.
“Heh women, even from different species, there all the same”. Jason said as he also went through the opening.
((from here on out Arius will not be reffered to as Jason and Arius, only Arius))
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Even though I'm not into most furry stories, I like this one. It reminds me of the fiction books I used to read. Please continue it.
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yup, im working quite hard on it, he gets some interesting weapons as well . And im glad u like it.
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Dude! You posted this on FTT, right? Yeah.... I dont have anything else to say.
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