A story that has yet to be titled :)

[rae15princess]

Any and all commentary will be greatly appreciated, particularly in regards to the title. *hint, hint*

*Note * Just a little history on the characters: Lori (the mother) adopted Tom (18) then Jake (17) then Patrick (16) then Cho (15). Then, she had a one night stand with Rachel’s father (who she sees at Christmas, Easter, her birthday, etc.), then adopted Aiden (11) then Ming (7) then Gray (5) then Yuki (4) then Lacey (3) then Ali (2) and then twins, Ciara and Lee (2 months). Diana is Lori’s best friend. The two are very close and often hang out together with their children. Diana has three kids, Eric (15) Nick (15) and Zack (12).

Chapter 1
Once upon a time, in the quaint little town of Mendon, Massachusetts, 14 year-old Rachel Roberts woke up to a wet bed. She sat up and immediately felt that something was wrong. She noticed a big wet stain on her comforter. Just as she was about to cry, her 17-year-old brother Jake entered their room.
“Hey, Rachel, time to get up. Mom just made breakfast and she said she’d drive everyone to school to—What’s wrong?” Jake asked.
“I had an accident,” Rachel told him as tears rolled down her cheeks.
“ Oh. Here, get up,” He said as he helped her up. He took the sheets off the bed and then proceeded to take off her Barbie nightgown and panties. He grabbed some baby wipes from the bathroom and wiped her clean. Then, he helped her get dressed for school.
“Hey, it’s okay, it was just an accident,” Jake said to make her feel better.
“I’m fourteen, not four, I shouldn’t be having accidents anymore,” Rachel said. She had stopped crying, but it was obvious, that she still felt awful about the accident. The two went downstairs and ate breakfast with the rest of their family. After breakfast, Rachel’s 15 year-old sister Cho braided Rachel’s hair, and then their mother drove all of the kids to school.
At school, all Rachel could think about was her accident. She hadn’t wet the bed since she was eleven. Rachel was always trying to act like a grown-up, but somehow everyone always perceived her as being younger than she actually was. Her height didn’t make matters any better; she was 14 years old and she was only 4feet 6 inches tall. She thought about her accident all day and wondered if it would happen again that night.
When the last bell rang, Rachel raced all the way across the school to pick up a book she had left behind during math class, and then all the way back across the school to the bus. In the confusion of trying to get to the bus on time, she forgot all about having to pee, that is, until ten minutes through the forty-minute ride. As the bus made it’s way along the bumpy dirt rode, Rachel started to feel the effects of the large soda she had at lunch.
She squirmed uncomfortably in her seat as she desperately tried to hold it. She crossed her legs and grabbed at her crotch. They were twenty minutes into the ride before Jake saw his little sister looking very scared and uncomfortable.
“Rachel, are you okay?” He asked as he came to sit next to her. She mumbled something about being fine and then went back to looking out the window. She tapped her foot impatiently and crossed her legs even tighter. She didn’t think she could hold it much longer.
Finally, Rachel and her brothers and sister were the only ones left on the bus. Rachel felt like her bladder was about to burst as the bus pulled up in front of their house. The bus came to a stop and she bolted up the driveway, through the front door, and towards the bathroom. When she got there, she opened the door, entered the bathroom, closed the door and then locked it. She walked over to the toilet, holding herself as she walked and lifted the cover. But, by then she couldn’t hold it any longer.
Pee came dripping into her panties as she tried to get her pants unzipped. She finished up on the toilet and inspected her panties for the damage. She was disappointed to see that the stain was also visible on her pants. There was a huge wet spot, the size of a basketball there. She pulled up her pants and panties, flushed the toilet and left the bathroom. Before leaving, she checked to make sure that the coast was clear, and then headed back up to her room. Just after she got there, Jake entered the room.
“Did you have another accident?” He asked when he saw Rachel’s pants. She just nodded, looking at her feet in shame. He hugged her and then told her that it wasn’t her fault and that everything would be okay.
“Rachel, I know this is going to upset you, but I think it would be best if you were to wear one of Lacey’s Pull-ups for the rest of the afternoon. Just in case you’re sick or something. We don’t want you to have another accident, do we?” He asked her in the nicest way he could. Rachel just quietly nodded her head. She never wanted to argue with Jake.
“Okay. Then, wait right here,” He said as he left the room. A few minutes later, he came back, carrying with him one of their 3-year-old sister’s Minnie Mouse Pull-ups, a can of baby powder, a changing pad, a bottle of baby wipes, and a bottle of baby oil. He laid the changing pad on her bed, picked her up and laid her on it. He undid the button on her jeans and then pulled down her zipper. Then, he pulled off her jeans and Care Bear panties. He took a wipe out of the container and wiped her clean, applied large amounts of baby oil and powder. Then, he pulled the Pull-up over her ankles and slid it all the way up her legs and over her bottom. Then, he went to go put her wet clothes in the washing machine and replace the diaper supplies.
While he was gone, Rachel slid her hands over the Pull-up. It felt strange to be in a diaper again, after eleven years. The Pull-up felt soft and comforting. If she was going to be stuck wearing this thing for a while at least she could be comfortable, she thought. She pulled a pair of shorts on over her Pull-up and went downstairs to get started on her homework.
Rachel walked down the stairs, past Cho, who was making everyone a snack, and into the kitchen and grabbed her backpack, which she had thrown onto the floor in her hurry to get to the bathroom. Then, she sat down at the kitchen table and started her homework. While Rachel was bent over, Cho had happened to notice something sticking out of her shorts. It looked just like one of Lacey’s Pull-ups, but why would Rachel be wearing one of those? She decided not to press the issue. She finished making the brownies, put them in the oven, and then went to go ask Jake about Rachel’s change of undergarments.
Cho found Jake doing his homework in his and Rachel’s room. She walked in and sat on the edge of his bed.
“Hey, Jake, umm, is Rachel wearing a Pull-up?” She asked in the most casual way she could, considering that her fourteen year old sister was wearing a diaper. Jake looked up, shocked that Cho could have found out.
“Yeah, she just had an accident and she wet the bed last night, but how did you know?” Jake asked.
“She’s wearing really tight shorts over them and you can totally see it through them,” Cho informed him, “And Mom said she’s picking us up in twenty minutes for dinner at T.G.I. Friday’s. And, Diana’s coming with her kids.”
“Oh. Okay.” Jake said. He was about to go back to his homework when Tom and Patrick walked in.
“Dude, why is Rachel wearing a diaper?” Tom asked. He found it extremely odd that his usually mature teenage sister was wearing training panties.
“Because she had an accident when she got home from school and she wet the bed last night. Please don’t say anything, she’s already upset,” Jake told them. They swore not to and Patrick, Cho, and Tom left the room, and moments later, Rachel entered.
“Hey, Rach, I think you might wanna change out of those shorts, cause they kinda make it obvious that you’re wearing a Pull-up,” Jake told her nicely.
“Oh. Okay, I was gonna put on a skirt, anyway,” Rachel said. She took off her shorts and put them in the laundry hamper, and then took out a pair of her Barbie panties and tried to get them on over her Pull-up. It was not working, as her Pull-up was too thick to put underwear on over. She was getting frustrated, and Jake was laughing at her, “What are you laughing at?” She asked fiercely.
“Nothing,” He said, waving it off as nothing, “Umm, what exactly are you trying to do?” He asked.
“I’m trying to put panties on over this stupid Pull-up, because if anyone looks up my skirt, then they’ll just see the Pull-up, and then they’ll know I’m wearing one,” Rachel explained.
“So, why don’t you just wear pants?” Jake asked, trying to reason with her, but he knew it was hopeless. Rachel had always had the logic of a preschooler.
“Cause they won’t fit,” Rachel said, still desperately trying to pull her panties on.
“Okay, well, then do you have any bigger panties?” He asked, knowing where this was going to end up.
“Nope. They’re all the same size,” She said, finally giving up and putting the panties back in the dresser.
“You know, when Ming has to where Pull-ups on trips and stuff, she doesn’t want people to see hers either. So, we usually put her Pull-up on, then a onesie, and then her clothes. That way, it makes changes easier, and no one can see her Pull-up,” Jake explained, as he riffled through her drawers for the onesies and footie pajamas that Grandma had bought her last Christmas. He smiled when he found them, and selected a onesie that had little Winnie the Pooh characters all over it.
Jake picked her up, carried her over to the bed, and set her down. Then, he lifted her shirt up and pulled it up over her head.
“You do know that I can dress myself, right?” Rachel said as she tried to squirm out of his grasp.
“Uhuh. Says the little girl in the Pull-up,” Jake said jokingly, which shut Rachel up for the time being. Seeing her in nothing but a Pull-up, it was hard to believe she was fourteen. She had no pubic hair, no leg hair, no armpit hair, and her breasts hadn’t even started to grow yet. He put the onesie on like a shirt, and then, while he was snapping it up at the crotch, he felt the crotch of the Pull-up to make sure that she didn’t need a change.
“What are you doing?” Rachel asked as he pressed his fingers against the crotch of her Pull-up.
“Just checking to see if you needed a change. What a good girl you are, keeping your Pull-up dry all afternoon!” Jake congratulated her sarcastically. Rachel turned red with embarrassment, and Jake continued to dress her. Her slid her denim skirt up her legs and over her butt. Then, he helped her pull her Hollister t-shirt over her head and down over her tummy.
“You guys!! Mom’s here!! We’re leaving!!” Cho shouted up the stairs. Jake picked up his fully dressed little sister and carried her out to the car and strapped her into her booster seat. When Rachel noticed that she had to keep her legs apart because of the car seat, thereby exposing her onesie to whoever happened to look, she was extremely happy with her decision. It just looked like she was wearing Winnie the Pooh panties.

Stay tuned for much, much more

[blues_clues_baby]

I like the story thus far, very interesting introduction and grabs interest quickly. can not wait to read more.

[NARU]

Originally Posted by rae15princess

Any and all commentary will be greatly appreciated, particularly in regards to the title. *hint, hint*

*Note * Just a little history on the characters: Lori (the mother) adopted Tom (18) then Jake (17) then Patrick (16) then Cho (15). Then, she had a one night stand with Rachel’s father (who she sees at Christmas, Easter, her birthday, etc.), then adopted Aiden (11) then Ming (7) then Gray (5) then Yuki (4) then Lacey (3) then Ali (2) and then twins, Ciara and Lee (2 months). Diana is Lori’s best friend. The two are very close and often hang out together with their children. Diana has three kids, Eric (15) Nick (15) and Zack (12).

Thats a lot of children to have been just adopted.

[soxfan08]

I liked it, the only problem is the girl seems more like 11 than 14 in a number of ways, and a 14 year old would never be in a booster seat...ever...no matter how small. Lastly, there may be too many characters, but I'll figure it out.

[genbaby]

sox incoorect again after 9 no one would be in a booster seat. And a 14 year old at 4foot 6 inches i don't think there are any. Too many kids. meaning this will be ahrd for you to write.

[soxfan08]

Well, Shawn Johnson is only 4'8 and she's 16 and about to win a gold medal so that's fairly realistic.

[Kovalchuk]

Originally Posted by genbaby

sox incoorect again after 9 no one would be in a booster seat. And a 14 year old at 4foot 6 inches i don't think there are any. Too many kids. meaning this will be ahrd for you to write.

Genbaby, please don't correct him for things you don't know for fact either. Besides, he's new. Cut him a little slack.
Booster seats have to do with SIZE, not AGE. My sister is almost 12, and she just stopped using one.
And some people who are dwarfs are smaller than 4'6''.

[genbaby]

Originally Posted by The Russian

Genbaby, please don't correct him for things you don't know for fact either. Besides, he's new. Cut him a little slack.
Booster seats have to do with SIZE, not AGE. My sister is almost 12, and she just stopped using one.
And some people who are dwarfs are smaller than 4'6''.

Well in country's like the U.S. that have restrictoins you can get out of it three ways age hight or weight. I owuld know i was 4'6 2 years ago.

[Babyjames5]

Ok so to get this back on topic...I really am interested to see how this story ends up but I am a little curious why a 14 year old would have a onsie that fits her?

[Dr_J]

Mmm....too many characters. There, I said it. Oh, and please format your post better. Better as in add an extra space between paragraphs. My eyes hurt. I suppose you should keep going in order for me to give you a more detailed review.

So, go on.