The Life of A-Renegade

[renegade-a]

ok, where to start.
well ive been meaning to write a story for a while and here it is.
now this story is baised on many things and if you read closely you can get to know me very well... however it wont be easy!
there are many things in this story that are directly the opposite from my life and there are many things in this story that are significant of my life, like i said it wont be easy and many of you wont even come close to getting to know who i am becase in order to do it you must follow the code but not over think.
just fyi things that might be of importance to getting to know me may include (but are not limited to) names, numbers, colors, repeated words, feelings, etc.

dont worry i have made some things obvious though! and for those who just want to read a story, well this may be a good one!

well plz leave comments and remember that this story is live and i am not ahead on any chapters. so as i finish one i will be working on another one. and i am extreamly busy in my personal life so i might be a lil slow to update but eh......


well without further delay i present to you:

The Life of A-Renegade

Prologue:

Through life I had always been a bed wetter and always hated the fact that I was a freshman in high school who still wet the bed, oh and on top of all that I was short, I could easily have passed for a 12 yr old. Not all was bad though, I was one of the most popular guys in the school being the only freshman to make varsity this year. I was very athletic in any sport, I was one of the fastest runners in the entire student body and also the captain of Jr. varsity soccer, and yes I was a receiver on the schools varsity football team, my speed made up for my “short-comings” if you will. On top of being athletic I was a A+ student usually in the top 3 of my class and I was on many academic activities like mathletes, and debate. I was that student who basically would most likely be Valedictorian and throw the best after party for graduation. Yes, I was a dj, a very good one at that, I did many school dances in Jr. high.

I got a lot in high school, I was very happy, however even though I was doing so great in school there was still one thing that I wanted to do, but couldn’t. I’ve always wanted to sleep over someone’s house. Through out my childhood I had only slept over one person’s house, which was my best friends (Albert’s) house. He was my neighbor growing up and I think I was about 12 when I finally decided I was ready to sleep over. My parents were always supportive of my bed wetting and always pushed me to be more social, and to attend more events like sleepovers or those library lock-ins (where u spend the night in a library), but I was never quite ready. However, (back to my first sleepover…) it was a total disaster, I had ended up forgetting to put my goodnite on because I couldn’t find it, and I wet my best friends bed. That next morning, I woke up crying quietly and ran home (he lived next door to me). He had came by my house later that evening and to my surprise he apologized to me. Apparently he was also a bed wetter but had been dry for some while. He explained to me that he was cleaning his room that day and had thrown away all his old goodnites that were still in his room and that when he went to move my sleeping bag that mine fell out and he threw it out before I had a chance to notice because he thought it was on his that he may have had missed. I still felt awful and to this day wasn’t ready for sleepovers. After that incident I never thought of sleepovers until the day that my mom had received a call from the doctor about a new pill that was being called the “cure” for bedwetting ……..

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well leave comments plz and feel free to pm if u got any ideas u would like me to incorporate into the story

[lostwinds]

Well it looks like an good start seem have enough. Thought the prologue does not make me want find out futher what happen. Though still read it since usually all stories posted anyway. As for constritive Advice that actual help you, you will has wait someone else to come long since to post.

Anyway I look forward seeing how actual story will start.

[NARU]

It seems like you kept writing it over in your head but not actually on paper, its still good, but you didnt even say what your name was, and you need a little more punctuation. Otherwise, just dont make another generic, half-assed diaper punishment story, and youve got a seller.