The Most Badass Story Ever Told Ever

[Dethklok_still_rules]

Prologue

I don't talk about my clan that much, as its awesomeness shadows mine. However, I think I'll treat you guys to a great Cicada Clan tale. That's right I am of the cicada lineage. What other animal is awesome enough to be my ancestor than an animal that has a 17 year nap, wakes up, scrams all day, ****s, and then dies? The story is about the greatest ninja to ever live, my ancestor, Spinal_tap_rules. It's a story so awesome that it takes a ninja just to tell it. You could die from reading the epicitude.

[lostwinds]

Even good at give helpful advice can give you some.

First you do not have actual title for story. I do think not saying Most Badass Story Ever Told Ever because reader to decide not you. Reader will also figure out that you are try to get people to read it so may result in people not reading it.

Second disappoint me by your Prologue. For you actual did not give an Prologue you give is summary of your story. For Prologue is to give important information about story before it actual begins.

[Chillhouse]

WTF to both posts.

[lostwinds]

Originally Posted by Prometheus

WTF to both posts.

Would of have edit but since it seem restrict what level person is then I could not edit the post.
Reason for what I posting was help person who start thread improve on actual have a story.

[Baby Jake]

I read the first post... then took a look at the replies - and suddenly my nose started gushing out blood from the confusion.

My work here is done.

[Dethklok_still_rules]

Originally Posted by lostwinds

Even good at give helpful advice can give you some.

First you do not have actual title for story. I do think not saying Most Badass Story Ever Told Ever because reader to decide not you. Reader will also figure out that you are try to get people to read it so may result in people not reading it.

Second disappoint me by your Prologue. For you actual did not give an Prologue you give is summary of your story. For Prologue is to give important information about story before it actual begins.

You're telling me how to write? I don't know where to begin. I can't even justify this post with an ass whipping. It's that sad. But I will say this: It's not up to the reader to decide how badass I am or my stories are. They're not cool enough. And if that insults you, sue me. Gee guys, this internet thing is real serious, huh?

[genbaby]

Originally Posted by lostwinds

Even good at give helpful advice can give you some.

First you do not have actual title for story. I do think not saying Most Badass Story Ever Told Ever because reader to decide not you. Reader will also figure out that you are try to get people to read it so may result in people not reading it.

Second disappoint me by your Prologue. For you actual did not give an Prologue you give is summary of your story. For Prologue is to give important information about story before it actual begins.

Lostwinds you don't critize writing styles. That is not a suggestoin to help readers understand it's you saying "you have to write stories my way". That is just mean and stupid.

[Dethklok_still_rules]

Originally Posted by genbaby

Lostwinds you don't critize writing styles. That is not a suggestoin to help readers understand it's you saying "you have to write stories my way". That is just mean and stupid.

It's okay, You guys can be mean and stupid around me. I'm mean and stupid to all of you aren't I?

[Shodai]

If this is going to be the most badass story ever told as you claim when will I be mentioned?

[NARU]

Im going to love this story.