spectator

[gamebaby]

This is a story i planed on writing but it is not ab/dl related so dont expect any. but anyway this is basicly about a kid who dies in a car crash but is granted a week to see his parents but he can not interact with anyone being dead. Please leave coments on if its good or if i could do better. ok?

Spectator
Chapter one DEAD SON
I was reading the news paper because on the boring trip we were taking. I liked the vacation but when we had to wait in the car its no fun. So I was next to the obituary page and noticed some of the people that died. I then started to wonder what would happen when I died. I figured id best wait till I get older to worry about it. I mean I am only 14 there is no way I can die that soon. I had a good chill down my spine and tried to think of something else.

I start to play my game boy when my mom asks me if I wanted something form the gas station. I told her Id just wait till I got to Colorado. “Well ok but it wont be for another 50 miles”, she told me. I ignore her and play my game. Iv really never paid much attention to them when playing my game. I didn’t really do anything bad or good. I did pretty average like most kids. They finish filling up the car and we got going, I was owning my game which is hard to do when its on level 8. I started to get bored and asked how much longer till we get there.” Maybe about 35 miles I’m not keeping track.” She goes to look at the G.P.S and says she was right so just keep playing.

After I just lost my last life I got bored. I decided to try to sleep. I than started thinking again about what happens when you die. My dreams started taking over. I was in a grave in a coffin. I felt that chill again as I was dreaming . the coffin was closing it got dark and started hearing noses one sounded like a horn but I ignored it. Then I heard a scream and woke up. We where riding down an icy hill. I wasn’t wearing a seat belts so I flew to the front of the van. My dad was trying to fix it and hit the break . but the unexpected happened. I flew out of the back seat forward and hit something very sharp. I only felt a sharp pain in my head and blood coming down my fore head as I slowly blacked out.

I woke up feeling num as if I couldn’t feel anything . it also felt like I was floating . I tried to stand up but I didn’t feel anything below me . I looked down to see my mom and dad……..and me. They were both crying and looking at my impaled head. By then I realized what was happening. I was rising. I freaked out and started moving wildly but It was no use. I just kept rising and rising. I stopped at a cloud where I was able to step. Than a shining light started to shin next to me. I wasn’t able to make out who it was. “hey who are you”, I asked it as I got up. No response. I started to get angry. “Hey talk to me”. The light faded and out came a man in a white robe. He seemed to be a old man in his 50s but I couldn’t tell up here. “ I am god”, it said. I really didn’t believe it because I thought I was dreaming. “ your lying “,I told it. It started to wave his had and a flash came to me. When it passed I saw me in the emergency room.

There where too many people talking to know what was happening at this moment. But I could see me on a stretcher. I followed my body to my parents in the waiting room.” We will try to save him but there’s no guarantee he will live”, the doctor said. I really didn’t like that very much. I kept following myself to the operating room. I figured they would save me in time so I when to see my parents. “ mom dad”, I said to them. They didn’t responded only tears came out. Desperate I yelled “Hello mom dad”. Not ever a look came out of them. I started to cry and sat down on the chare. Some one else came in and tried to sit on me I let him. I basically didn’t exist in this world. I sat there for 2 hours until the doctor came in he called for my parents and they came. They where led to his office where he shut the door. His office was full of pictures of his achievements. Even trophy’s . the doctor sat down on his desk and tried to say something when my mom blurted out” Is my baby ok is he alive”, . my dad looked at him in worry as well.

The doctor sighed and looked at my parents. “I’m sorry to say this but……….. he is dead.”. I gasped in horror . I cant be dead I didn’t finish school, college , get a wife anything. My parent reacted the same with mom crying on dads shoulder. “We did all we could,” My mom got up to yell.” WELL YOU MUST NOT HAVE TRIED HARD ENOUGH.” She ran out in tears. While my dad in depression. They both walked down the hall to the waiting room. Than that aluminous glow came again. I turned to him and said,” why did I have to die? Why?”. he shook his head and said,” life is in black and white Chris. Some time things happen its not in my control.” I started to sob until he patted me on the back. “it is time to go to heaven.

I once again sobbed and told him I didn’t want to go.” Pleases don’t make me go. I will never see my mom and dad again. He looked at me and started to think. He than said’ ok I have a proposition. I will let you see you family for one week. But when that week is up you must go to heaven.” I thought about this and asked if there was a catch.
“No there isn’t but you may not interact with them being dead.” Why would I do that……… well I would get too see my parents but I wouldn’t get to say good bye. I though about this some more and agreed to his deal. He waved goodbye and disappeared in a flash of light.