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Old 06-05-2008   #1 (permalink)
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This is a RP between Connap22 and myself that was turned into story form and we hope you enjoy it. This story should be have atleast 1 new chapter a week.

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Kenshin and Alex are two brothers living in New Hampshire. Kenshin is 16 years old with long red hair with a good muscle build and stands at 6 feet tall and is usually seen wearing all black clothing. He is generally fun loving toward Alex and very protective of him.

Alex is 9 years old with short spikey bleach blond hair with visions of getting tattoos and piercings when he gets older and stands at 4 feet 5 inches. He loves to be around Kenshin and has the tendency to act like a toddler from time to time. Alex has been a bedwetter for all his life.
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Chapter 1
A Problem


Alex woke up in a wet bed - as usual. He got out of bed and took off his pajamas while he called out "big brother?!". He put on his bathrobe and walked to his brother's room, his short white hair spikey. He curled his thin, fragile fingers into a fist and knocked on the door.
"Big brother?!", he said, tears in his eyes.
Even though he always wet the bed, he wished just some morning he would wake up dry.

His big brother, Kenshin, heard the familiar sounds of his brother Alex waking up and knocking on his door - he had grown used to it. Kenshin sat up and rubed his eyes for a minute, then got up and streached. He walked across is bashe carpeted room, past his computer and anime posters, to the door and opened it.
"Good morning, little bro!" Keshin said with a smile.

Alex looked up at him.
"It happened again" he said, a choke in his voice, as he tried not to cry. His brother Kenshin was at least a foot and a half taller than him while Alex had a swimmer build.
"I'm sorry!" he said, a tear escaping.
"I tried not to!" He looked down and hugged his brother's waste.


Kenshin got on his knees and gave Alex a hug.
"It's ok, Alex. You're trying, and you know that's all I've ever asked of you. Look - go take a nice hot shower and I'll take care of you bed. That sound ok?"

"Thanks!"
Alex smiled and kissed his brother's cheek.
"I wuv you!"
He hugged him tight, wanting him to carry him to the bathroom like when he was younger.

Kenshin gave Alex a smile.
"I see what you want."
And with that Kenshin stood up and picked up Alex and set him comfortably with his head resting on Kenshin's shoulder. As he entered the bathroom, Kenshin set Alex down and started the water and stayed until it was nice and warm and then turned to his younger brother and said: "OK, it's all ready for you, little bro."

"Thanks, big bro, you always know what I want!"
He smilled and hugged him, then took off his robe and got in, not caring that his brother was still in the room.

"Coming alot nicely there!" Kenshin joked.
He then walked out of the bathroom and went into Alex's room, stripped the bed sheets off . He carried them to the washing machine and dumped them in, added soap, and then walked to the kitchen and started making breakfast.


In half an hour, Alex turned off the shower and wrapped a towel around his waste, then walked to his room. He looked through his drawers and picked out a blue shirt and black pants. He walked out of his room and into the kitchen
"Hmmm, what are you making, big brother?" he asked, pulling his thumb out of his mouth quickly.

"I saw that, you little sneak, you just can't seem to break that habit, can you? Well I wanted something simple this morning so I just thought of making French toast."
Kenshin made two plates and carried them to the table and set one infront of Alex, with a glass of juice beside it. He sat down to his own meal and began to eat.

Alex giggled, blushing. He started to cut up his food into small peices and ate them slowly.
"I realy want to wake up in a dry bed" he said softly as he took a sip of juice

Kenshin stopped and drank some of his own juice aswell, and then spoke:
"Alex, I know you do and I know you're trying but I think we should consider protection so I don't have to wash your sheet everymorning. You get what i'm saying?"

"Diapers?!?!" he half yelled in exitement but tried to cover it up by saying "I'm not a baby!!"


"Well I've been thinking this over, and I thought that Goodnights or Pull-ups would do the job ,but I think that diapers would be the best way to go. I know you're not a baby, but you need protection and I promise no one will know about this! I will have to tell mom and dad, but apart from them, no one will ever know."


Alex looked at the floor, smiling. He didnt want his brother to see how happy he was. He tryed to make it look like he was crying by folding his arms and puting his face in them.

Kenshin finished eating and took his and Alex's empty plates to the sink and then walked back to Alex and put a hand on his shoulder. "Come on, little bro, let's get this over with."

"Ok" Alex said and stood up.
He kept looking down as they walked to the car "Can I sit in the front?"

"Sure, just buckle up!"
Kenshin hated saying that but he knew he needed to say it, not just for Alex, but to remind himself. Once they were in and buckled, Kenshin pulled out of the driveway and turned on some Black Sabbath and started driving in the direction of the local drug store.

Alex watched out the window, feeling himself getting exited. He knew he wouldn't be able to contain himself. As they parked, Alex half jumped out the door
"Come on, come on, let's go" he said to his big brother

Kenshin got out and walked in with Alex, and they made their way to the diaper aisle.
"Well - what do you think, little bro? Do you want diapers or pull-ups?"


"Ummm..."
Alex grabbed a bag of thick diapers.
"These!"
He handed them to his brother as he looked at the pacifiers out of the corner of his eye, planning to take one when his brother wasnt looking.

Kenshin studied the package. "Alright, these should do the trick. Do you want anything else while we're here?"

Alex eyed the pacifiers then looked down blushing. "No!?!" he whispered
Kenshin looked at him and gave him a smerk. "Come on you can tell me."


Alex looked up, smiling, and grabbed a pacifier and handed it to him, still bright red.
"Aww!" Kenshin teasted "Does little baby Alex want his binkie?"
Alex looked down and started sniffling. "No" he said sharply feeling betrayed.
Kenshin got down on one knee so he was level with Alex. "I'm just messing with you, little bro, if you really want a binkie I'll get it for you."

Alex wided at his eyes "Please don't tell anyone"
"I promse mom and dad will know about the diapers, but not about the binkie." Kenshin said to reasure him.

"Thankies!" he said and hugged his brother, feeling a slight urge to pee "Let's go home!" - "Alright."

As they walked up to the counter, Kenshin eyed the candy bars and then looked over at Alex. "Want some?"

"Yeah" Alex smiled and ran over and grabbed a baby bottle pop and pixie sticks and ran back and put it on the counter. Kenshin grabed a Milkeyway and then payed for everything and walked out to the car with Alex. He put the stuff in the back seat but gave Alex his baby bottle pop. He started the engine and backed out of the parking spot and started the drive home.
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Its cute so far. Can't wait to see where it heads off to in the end.
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Ugh...another "I am..." (Baby blake wrote it) kind of thing will happen... Basicly, heres what hapens: when I LOVE a story like this one SOOOOO MUCH, THEN I NEEEEEED TO READ THE WHOLE THING NOT JUST ONE CHAPTER A WEEK! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS CUTE AND FLUFFY, MAKE IT 2 CHAOTERS A WEEK!

EPIC!

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P.S. If you didnt get that, I was saying how frickin' AWESOME and CUTE this story is.
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personally, I hope this gets updated often. Like the title, Brotherly Love is sometimes hard to come by now a days...
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This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute and the title describes the story in every way Brotherly Love.
I can't wait to read the rest hope it comes soon

Edit:reading this makes me forget all my worries

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PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS CUTE AND FLUFFY, MAKE IT 2 CHAOTERS A WEEK!
What he said !!!!! (chapters, even )

Brotherly love makes me all fuzzy inside

PS you need an editor, and I'm available
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Actually skinny he doesn't need a editor only a few mistakes if any and he only needs to get ms word or open office.
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Actually skinny he doesn't need a editor only a few mistakes if any and he only needs to get ms word or open office.
He already has an editor. *coughs* *coughs*

I guess I missed a few typos when editing it, although it was late (like 23:00) and my brain was not working correctly any more

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He already has an editor. *coughs* *coughs*

I guess I missed a few typos when editing it, although it was late (like 23:00) and my brain was not working correctly any more

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