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Old 02-05-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Application story in the making...

Okay well i'm going to make my first application story and there will be no deadline. However, if you wish to have a chance of being one of the main characters you must be one of the first 7 people to submit their character, i am still unsure as to how many characters i will want to be the "main" characters. I will try to include everyone who submits though :P

The type of story that i will write will be a fantasy story forgotten realms style.

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Chaos is brewing in the entire multiverse and everyone can feel it from the Blood rift to the Abyss, even to Hell all the way back to the prime material plane. Several gods are beginning to investigate the situation but will the mortals be the ones who decide the fate of existence in the end?

Note* I need two "god" characters so first two people to apply for that status will be given it unless i do not like their ideas. Try not to repeat/be similar to previous posters. For the main characters i will not accept the same "types" of people, be CREATIVE!

** NOTE THIS IS NOT A TB/AB/DL/INCONTINENT STORY!

Submission form:
Name:
Age (Remember this is FR you can be old :P):
Gender:
Type of dresser (Flashy, Basic, etc. + Normal apparral):
Type(Wizard, warrior, etc. ):
Physical descriptions (Be as specific as you can, if you forget something i will simply add what i wish or I MIGHT, just MIGHT ask you):
Weapons + Trinkets, etc:
Personality (THIS IS REALLY IMPORTANT):
Back Ground (history of character):
Heritage (Drow, Human, Sun elf, etc. + I will accept races that from other games as long as i know what that race is and it's medieval based):
Religion (Describe the religion, ONLY ONE Aetheist character MAX for main characters):
Ambitions:
Innate Abilities (I.e. drow have the innate ability to make inpentreable darkness. *Humans have none to my knowledge):
Things that you wish to add that i might've forgot:

Thanks, i will get this running as soon as i feel i have enough people signing up. If you wish to see how i write i currently have two stories on this forum, The story of Lilea the Succubus and Threstul the Sun Elf (A dota setting story)

Have fun being creative!

NOTE
List of types of characters no longer up for grabs for MAIN characters
Rougues
Rangers
Mages (I already have 2)
Arch Angels
Gods
No assasins
No more Royalty unless it's a prince that isn't first in line for throne (And he would still have to be skilled)
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Submission form:What do you mean?
Name:his name is forever lost but he managed to come up with using the name joasifcain. A almost unpronounceable name so he is called the john by mortals but all others call him joas.
Age (Remember this is FR you can be old :P):no known age
Gender:male
Type of dresser (Flashy, Basic, etc. + Normal apparral):will dress anyway he must to look like the smartest being.
Type(Wizard, warrior, etc. ):god
Physical descriptions (Be as specific as you can, if you forget something i will simply add what i wish or I MIGHT, just MIGHT ask you):He used his knowledge to become able to shape shift and only once ever used his real form since. But in all forms has a long scar mark on his face somehow. His real form is a short male looking form and looks incredibly un-godlike
Weapons + Trinkets, etc:whatever he decides to use
Personality (THIS IS REALLY IMPORTANT): Mean and rough. Doesn't fool around ever. Likes a harsh punishment to mortals.
Back Ground (history of character): he though a god never liked the theory of gods being all powerful or being bigger than science.(if based after science became major) but he was hated by many for his lack of pity to anyone and never ever showing mercy if wrong was done.
Heritage (Drow, Human, Sun elf, etc. + I will accept races that from other games as long as i know what that race is and it's medieval based):god ( he is a knowledgeable and knowledge loving god.
Religion (Describe the religion, ONLY ONE Aetheist character MAX for main characters):my own unique one based off of scientific like theories and powerful knowledge
Ambitions:to be as powerful as I can. To know as much as i can.
Innate Abilities: i am god of all abilities
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i must be in this!!! MUST!!!

unfortunetly my knoledge of the forgoten realms is limited to the drow, and i hate the drow. so i will do my best at making something up. i guess i'll be a god.

i will be a good god, not like the spider queen.
Submission form: an archangle looking thing
Name: i'm bad with names, but i'll try to come up with something cool.
Age: make up an age for me that seems appropriate for gods because i don't really know. i'd like to be an older god though.
Gender: Male
Dresser: White robes. something like a trench coat but white.
Type: I'd like to be a mage/warrior mix. something like fire lightning, rush, slash, then fireball. i'm sure you can figure out how to make that work.
Physical description: human like, but with angle wings. toned, but not muscular. long, straight hair. above average hight and slender body.
Weapons + Trinkets, etc: one short sword with gem on the blade. the gem is enchanted making the blade able to absorb energy from spells casted by enemies and uses that energy in the next attack. the other hand will hold a staff which cannot be cut and makes casting spells much quicker.
Personality: ever changing. go from happy and funny, to subtle and mysterious, to angry. i will be very knowing, but not quick to give away any information.
Back Ground: unknown and unimportant. after the ranks of the devine have been achieved, i left my past to be forgoten by all. the only important thing is that i am presently a god.
Heritage: equaly unimportant.
Religion: i believe in myself
Innate Abilities: master of all the elemental spells. speed. and healing spells.

if you need anything else (which i'm sure you will) just ask me at school.
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Well, I am no one for these types of things but what the hell!

Submission form: Can I be like...The God of War...
Name: FullMetal
Age (Remember this is FR you can be old :P): 1093
Gender: Male
Type of dresser (Flashy, Basic, etc. + Normal apparral): Basic white and red robe
Type(Wizard, warrior, etc. ): ...God or Anteater
Physical descriptions (Be as specific as you can, if you forget something i will simply add what i wish or I MIGHT, just MIGHT ask you): POWERFUL MOFO...or...really long nose that eats ants
Weapons + Trinkets, etc: Ultimate Magical Really SICK Sword that can be....a laser...and stuff or a nose enlongator
Personality (THIS IS REALLY IMPORTANT): Funny and witty with a bad temper or...docile
Back Ground (history of character): He is a god...or an anteater...
Heritage (Drow, Human, Sun elf, etc. + I will accept races that from other games as long as i know what that race is and it's medieval based): A really big mountain...or a ant hill!
Religion (Describe the religion, ONLY ONE Aetheist character MAX for main characters):
Ambitions: He has a religion after him...its called war or...The Ant Bible
Innate Abilities (I.e. drow have the innate ability to make inpentreable darkness. *Humans have none to my knowledge): I don't know...
Things that you wish to add that i might've forgot: None

I am really bad at this if you haven't noticed so if you just want to ignore my application, t'sall good.

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Submission form:
Name: Mandi Danielle
Age (Remember this is FR you can be old :P): 17
Gender: Female
Type of dresser (Flashy, Basic, etc. + Normal apparral): Comfortable and practical, normal clothing I guess.
Type(Wizard, warrior, etc. ): I want to be a princess
Physical descriptions (Be as specific as you can, if you forget something i will simply add what i wish or I MIGHT, just MIGHT ask you): I want the character to look like me! (Check the gallery)
Weapons + Trinkets, etc: A magic wand, booya
Personality (THIS IS REALLY IMPORTANT): I want her to be a good natured character, she likes to take care of people. She's quite shy, and only outgoing when she sees someone in need.
Back Ground (history of character): She was born into royalty ^.^ She's always been nice and kind to people
Heritage (Drow, Human, Sun elf, etc. + I will accept races that from other games as long as i know what that race is and it's medieval based): Human!
Religion (Describe the religion, ONLY ONE Aetheist character MAX for main characters):
Ambitions: Strong believer in God
Innate Abilities (I.e. drow have the innate ability to make inpentreable darkness. *Humans have none to my knowledge): I'm a human, and look like a human, but she has the ability to heal people and she can command attention whenever she needs it, even with a very soft-spoken voice.
Things that you wish to add that i might've forgot: If you have any questions don;t hesitate to ask! Also wanted to point out, while I am a princess I do not really act nor dress like one. I am quite humble, and only villagers know Im a princess, those passing through (or whatever) dont really know.


What the hay, I'll submit one.

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no one answered my question. What does submission form mean?

Full i think blarg already has the only two gods he is going to accept because i think that link did his guy as a god.
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blarg already told me that i'm going to be an archangle. god's assistent really. so i'm not a god. but he also told me that fullmetal's character is going to be this insane comic relief character. i don't know who the gods are going to be.
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I would apply for this story but it's to late at night DX Maybe if I have time tomorrow then I will definetly take the time to go into detail about a character =) Good luck with the story Blarg.
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Forgotten Realms style. Nice! I've got to get myself some of this. I've gotta be evil too, if thats okay. Hope you don't mind if I make this nice and long. I'm a bit of a fantasy stories geek.

Name: Tain Djet (the Foresaken)

Age (Remember this is FR you can be old :P): 113, the dragon blood prolongs his life past human levels

Gender: Male

Type of dresser (Flashy, Basic, etc. + Normal apparral): Pretty simple. He typically wears non-descript clothes so that he won't stand out in his targets environment. When not on a job he wears lose fitting tunic and trousers and a cloak. Many of his clothes have hidden compartments for concealing items. He often wears a hood and gloves to hide his more draconic features.

Type(Wizard, warrior, etc. ): Mage/Assassin

Physical descriptions (Be as specific as you can, if you forget something i will
simply add what i wish or I MIGHT, just MIGHT ask you): His skin appears tanned, though towards the extremities of his body (lower arms, legs and face) these become deep red scales. His face is ridged and his teeth are sharp. His hands and feet are clawed.

He is lithe, not heavily muscled but sure footed and quick. When he takes antoher form, he prefers a human male with dark hair and dark eyes, though the exact details often change to suit his mission.

Weapons + Trinkets, etc: The intelligent dagger Hlept. This dagger has problems about it's size compared to other blades and is often sulking. It can summon unnatural darkness or read others minds at will.

As well as these, Tain often fights with a handbow (crossbow requiring one hand to fire) and a longsword and he is competent with many weapons.

A magical staff imbued with a number of spells to confuse and disrupt enemies.

He often carries wands, scrolls, potions and poisons that are helpful to his mission.

Personality (THIS IS REALLY IMPORTANT): Tain Djet is a sadist. He takes great pleasure both in hurting people and in making them realise they are going to die, not to mention killing them. He is also very cynical about the world and quite depressive.

He is very destructive, and is prone to losing his temper. He has no qualms about doing whatever he wants to get him where he wants to be. The only people he feels any connection to are the Cult of Kasjik, and one day he hopes to release them from there slavery. He would protect them if they were in danger.

Back Ground (history of character): Tain is the only surviving half human offspring of Kasjikta, a red dragon who took pleasure in taking human form and seducing the women of noble families, whatever race they be. The rest were slain at birth by there respective families, but a servant enslaved by the dragon managed to save Tain.

He was raised by the Cult of Kasjik, formed by those enslaved by the dragon to protect the results of his forays into mortal form. Here he was trained, developing the magical ability that was granted to him by his draconic blood. He became an accomplished mage, revelling in spells that disrupt, confuse and inflict pain (but do not kill).

In time he became obsessed with death, the immortal dragon blood meaning he will live far longer than the longest lived mortals, even if human blood will eventually take over. He learnt how to kill in as many methods as possible, and through this became an assassin. He will hire himself out if it is profitable from him, but he also kills just for the fun of it. He likes for his targets to see him before they die, and often tortures them to make them aware of there mortality, but wouldn't show himself if it result in him getting caught.

His obsession with death has also led to him studying necromancy. Recently he has been hunting down practicioners of this branch of magic and killing them, so he can steal there research into this branch of the Art. He is rumored to currently be on the look out for his next target. He has also recently taken the name, "the Foresaken" because both of his parents have left him.

Heritage (Drow, Human, Sun elf, etc. + I will accept races that from other games as long as i know what that race is and it's medieval based): Half Human, Half Dragon

Religion (Describe the religion, ONLY ONE Aetheist character MAX for main characters): He worships any and all Gods related to death, and often kills in their names. He asks them for luck on his missions and then sacrifices his targets for the pleasure of his gods.

Ambitions: To become the greatest assassin and toturer of all time (yes, he really is that twisted)! Also to track down and kill his parents, his mother for trying to kill him and his dragon father for refusing to meet his son.

Innate Abilities (I.e. drow have the innate ability to make inpentreable darkness. *Humans have none to my knowledge): He can breath fire, and can cast a spell at will to make himself appear as any humanoid creature of similar size

Things that you wish to add that i might've forgot: Anything you are unsure about, just ask.
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Oooh... trying you're hand at the popular literature style this forum uses...
It will be nice to see a proper writing person make something like this.

Mandi: I'd assume story wouldn't have this reality's bible. You'll have to make one... and I don't know how you interpret god... So I wouldn't know whether to suggest a god popular to paladins or a more for the people god...
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