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Old 17-04-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default The (padded) ninja school!

Heya all, I'm making another application story, and I know this one will actually manage to get somewhere.

It's about a ninja school, where a large portion of the students are either infantilists or incontinent.

I'm writing part one now, which introduces the main character, and I'll post it after it's done.

Here's the application sheet:

Name (please make it sound ninja-esque):
Age:
Gender:
IF/IC: (Infantilist or Incontinent)
Clothing:
Weapon of choice/fighting style:
Physical features:
Eyes:
Weight:
Height:
Build:
Ninpo Element: Water/Fire/Earth/Air
Personality:


That's all! Make sure you don't skip on the details, I want to be able to get a clear picture of the character in my mind.

But here's how the applications will work- I'm only going to be making four extra characters, but I will be accepting ten applications. This means that yes, six of the applicants will be turned down. I'm doing this because I find it really difficult to write an overabundance of important people into a single plot, but I don't want to just take the first four applications presented, as this places a time limitation on it.

Applications are officially open NOW and will close in four days - that is, the 21st at 5pm CST.

READY GO

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Name (please make it sound ninja-esque): Kiliska(just sounds niga like if not i'll change)
Gender: Male
If/IC:
Clothing:just normal pair of pants with anormal shirt but always has a blakc and gold vest/coat like thing on too.
Weapon of choice/fighting style:Uses a verity mostly consisting of staffs and two handed swords for short range and a special style of throwing knife that is about 6 inches long not including handle and has two pieces of metal that come off the handle then curve toward the blade.
Physical features:Large scar that runs from the start off his right ear to just past is left eye going over the nose. Another that goes from about his ribs to the top of his left knee
Eyesne green one blue but turns red at night.
Weight:somewher from 100 to 175 pounds.
Height:4'6-5'2
Build:What do you mean?
Ninpo Element:Fire
Personality:He is rather nice but when in a bad mood he gets mean as mean can be. Never gives up at anything even though he fails almost things he tries. He's a loner.


ARe you picking age?

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Name (please make it sound ninja-esque):
Gender:Male
IF/IC:
Clothingnly pitch black pants, extremly small gold chain around neck, nothing else
Weapon of choice/fighting style:2 extreemly long swords
Physical features:black eye, scared right breast, bald
Eyes:dark blue like the night sea
Weight:150
Height:6'2"
Build:?
Ninpo Element: Water/Fire/Earth/Air: Water
Personality:keeps to himslelf, a tad shy, but feice and easlily annoyed.
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Name (please make it sound ninja-esque):Takashi
Gender:Mal
IF/IC:IF
Clothing:Black Karate uniform with the japanese symbol for pain printed on the back.
Weapon of choice/fighting style:A reverse-blade sword and kunei knifes
Physical features:Long black hair about half way down the back usually in a ponytail.
Eyes:Blue
Weight:175
Height:5'11
Build:Very develuped chest with muscular arms and sholders.
Ninpo Element:Fire
Personality:Is really tuff and usually looks pissed off and focused but is a real teddy bear once he gets to know someone. Perfers to work alone, but will work with people he likes occasionaly.

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Name:Saki Yue
Gender:Male
IF/IC:IF, moderately weak bladder
Clothing:He wears a moderately dark pair of pants, and a loose dark-green jacket that covers his his torso and arms. His jacket has many hidden pockets for storage and easy accessibility.
Weapon of choice/fighting style:Mid Range fighter who lets loose a barrage of long range attacks while advancing. Uses typical everyday knives in close combat. Loves to toy around with prey. Fond of all sorts of mind-games, and illusions.
Physical features:Straight black hair near shoulders, mole on his eyebrow, and a left hand covered in scars.
Eyes:Light Brown
Weight:150
Height:5'5
Age: 17
Build:Looks moderately slim, short.
Ninpo Element:Wind
Personality:Is a enthusiastic person who is happy to make friends with anybody. He's care-free and it can tend to show in his fighting, which is an issue at times. When he meets a serious set-back, he works hard to make up for it. When he is in serious trouble, he tends to be a bit bloodthirsty, and cares more about beating an enemy than his partners, though it still rarely happens. Looks happy all the time, but he's troubled by slight paranoia which he really has no basis to be worried about. The paranoia does nothing but make him depressed on a few lonely occasions though. Despite all of this, he meshes well with most other fighters, and adepts well to situations.

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Oh, shoot, I forgot to add age, thanks for pointing that out Gen.

However, the ages MUST be between 15 and 19.

EDIT: Also, for those who didn't know, the IF/IC is Infantilist or Incontinent.

EDIT AGAIN: Build refers to how physically strong they appear to be.
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Name (please make it sound ninja-esque): Toko
Gender: M
IF/IC: neither
Clothing: brown robes
Weapon of choice/fighting style: shaking broom angrily
Physical features: wrinkled old guy who always smiles
Eyes: blue
Weight: slimish
Height: 6ft
Build:slimish
Ninpo Element: broom
Personality: friendly but reserved old janitor who looks after the school grounds, occasionally shakes his broom angrily at the students who break things, and takes particular care of his flower garden. Known to enjoy sneaking up on the younger students to test their situational awareness skills, it is assumed he was never a ninja and has no ninja powers. He does, however, offer wise advice sometimes.
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Name: Ishuze Hiyaki
Gender: Male
Age: 17
IF/IC: IF
Clothing: White kung-fu robe with a red sash belt, white pants, sandals.
Weapon of choice: Still testing to find the right one, prefers bo staves and shuriken. Heavy on the offense, but lacks defense and has poor evasion.
Physical features: Light blue hair, long scar on his right arm.
Eyes: Gold
Weight: 140
Height: 5’10”
Build: Medium, not a lot of fat but not bodybuilder heavy
Ninpo Element: Fire
Personality: Highly friendly and outgoing, and sometimes too nice for his own good. Overenthusiastic about his schooling, especially the use of ninpo.
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