Kelly

**diaperedteenager** · 30-03-2008

Chapter 1

Kelly awoke at 6:00 A.M. to begin another school day. The alarm went off with the same annoying chirping sound as it does every morning.

“Ugh I hate school” Said Kelly in a groggy voice.

She slid her self out of bed and turned on her bedroom light. She headed off to her bathroom to take a shower. Kelly took off her shirts and slid her pants off. She then un tapped her soaked Tranquility ATN. Kelly had been begun wetting the bed just a month earlier.

“I hate these stupid diapers, I mean come on I am 16 freakin’ years old, I shouldn’t have to wear these things”!

Kelly showered and than began to blow dry her hair. She then opened up the cupboard under her sink and pulled out a Tena Ultra and a Tena Daytime pad to be placed inside her diaper. Kelly started wearing diapers in the day 2 weeks ago, because for some reason that no doctor could figure out she had developed incontinence.

Kelly tapped up the diaper and slid into a pair of jeans and a sweat shirt.
“Ugh, why can’t January just go away, I want it to be summer again” Said Kelly

She went down stairs where she found a note saying

Kelly,

Went to work early will be home around 7.
Love, Mom

Kelly didn’t react to the note, because it was very common to her to find those on the kitchen counter every so often.

Kelly wolfed down her break fast and hopped into her car and drove to school.

Chapter 2

Kelly pulled into the parking lot of James Parker High school. It was 7:10 A.M. she was earlier than usual, considering school starts at 7:30 A.M.

“ Oh S***, I didn’t put an extra diaper in my purse”!

Kelly scrounged around her car and found a diaper lying on the floor. She came into the lobby of the school, a grad ceiling that could punch god in the face if the ceiling wanted to. She got to her locker as people were staring at her, not because her diaper was sticking out or anything, but because she was HOTT!!! Kelly was medium height and slender. She had long flowing brown hair and a gorgeous smile.
Kelly grabbed her Geometry book and binder and headed across the school for Mr. Sternals Geometry class. On her way to class her friend Carrie came up to her and they talked about recent gossip on the way to class. Carrie was Kelly’s best friend for about 10 years. They told each other everything about their lives. Carrie even knew about Kelly’s incontinence. As they rounded the corner Kelly soon felt the common feeling of warmth spread around in her diaper, she just prayed that it wouldn’t leak because of her movement. She took her seat as the bell rang and heard the fatal words of Mr. Sternal

“Okay class, books on the floor and no talking during the test”

“Oh s***, I forgot to study, this is going to be a slaughter”!

Pojo · 30-03-2008

It sounds somewhat good so far...The writing could be a bit more indepth...And the "!" in some of you quote should be inside the quotes

**diaperedteenager** · 08-04-2008

Chapter 2

As Math ended Kelly thought

“Wow, I didn’t think someone could do that bad on a math test”

Kelly left is depression. The other hours of the day flew by, and a good thing too because Kelly noticed a wet spot forming on her jeans She arrived home to go change. Kelly rummaged through her underwear drawer to find not a sing diaper or pull up. She went into her closet, nothing as well, although to her relief she spotted a Depends Re-Fasten able under some junk. Kelly fastened it on and got in her car and drove to the Medical supply store.
She got into the store and went for the Adult Diapers, she knew she needed day and night diapers. She got some Tena Super’s for night time, but they were out of her usual Tena Ultras. Kelly searched for some other, discreet diapers but found nothing, only some Tranquility ATN’s, Secure’s and Abena. She decided to get the ATN”s

“This is going to be so embarrassing to wear these loud things to school.” She thought

To make matters worse there was a VERY long line and of course only one register open. While waiting in line she felt another very warm feeling spread around her diaper area. It was a unusually long pee that didn’t seem to stop. About1 minute later it finally did and Kelly inspected the damges, to find that her crappy depends pull up leaked all down her legs. She was very embaressed and hopped the line would move quickly. Once it was her turn at the register the cashier named Mark looked down at her jeans to see them soaked.

“Here these diapers are on the house, it looks like you could really use them” Said Mark

Kelly took the diapers and rushed home. She put on her Tena Super and went to sleep.

ThatKid · 08-04-2008

pretty good story...had some grammar issues I saw and 1 or 2 spelling errors but I am sort of a grammar cop...I spot things on others works when I can't find them on my own work

**diaperedteenager** · 09-04-2008

lol i had an English teacher like that, but she wasn't a grammer cop, she was a grammer Nazi!

Kovalchuk · 09-04-2008

Pretty good story so far. Just, as the others say, work a bit on grammar.

It's funny, my best friend's sister's name is Kelly, and she wets. I went into her room, and just to be an ass, I said, "Eww it smells like peepee!" in a Cartman-style voice. He nodded, and looked like he was gonna crack up. He said that she wet the bed, and then said in a voice that was supposed to imitate his mother, "One week dry. Good job Kelly!

**diaperedteenager** · 09-04-2008

lol, does she wear diapers?

Abigail · 10-04-2008

Hmm since others have told you your grammar and spelling isn't the greatest, I'm going to say something different, for the sake of being different.

Your concept is very thin... I feel like I've read this story a million times, because this idea has been used, a million times. I'm sorry to say, but it's too generic for my liking.

You also have very little description. I have no sense of your character, all I know is that she's pretty, petite, and 16. That's it... your character is really 2 dimentional. Try adding more to her personality, thoughts, feelings, and other things.

**diaperedteenager** · 11-04-2008

ya i know, it isn't that good of a story, because i haven't "gotten in to it" you know?

Abigail · 11-04-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by diaperedteenager

ya i know, it isn't that good of a story, because i haven't "gotten in to it" you know?

No.. not really. If a story is good it's good from the very first line, not several chapters into it.

30-03-2008	#1 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Posts: 136 Threads: 35 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	Kelly Chapter 1 Kelly awoke at 6:00 A.M. to begin another school day. The alarm went off with the same annoying chirping sound as it does every morning. “Ugh I hate school” Said Kelly in a groggy voice. She slid her self out of bed and turned on her bedroom light. She headed off to her bathroom to take a shower. Kelly took off her shirts and slid her pants off. She then un tapped her soaked Tranquility ATN. Kelly had been begun wetting the bed just a month earlier. “I hate these stupid diapers, I mean come on I am 16 freakin’ years old, I shouldn’t have to wear these things”! Kelly showered and than began to blow dry her hair. She then opened up the cupboard under her sink and pulled out a Tena Ultra and a Tena Daytime pad to be placed inside her diaper. Kelly started wearing diapers in the day 2 weeks ago, because for some reason that no doctor could figure out she had developed incontinence. Kelly tapped up the diaper and slid into a pair of jeans and a sweat shirt. “Ugh, why can’t January just go away, I want it to be summer again” Said Kelly She went down stairs where she found a note saying Kelly, Went to work early will be home around 7. Love, Mom Kelly didn’t react to the note, because it was very common to her to find those on the kitchen counter every so often. Kelly wolfed down her break fast and hopped into her car and drove to school. Chapter 2 Kelly pulled into the parking lot of James Parker High school. It was 7:10 A.M. she was earlier than usual, considering school starts at 7:30 A.M. “ Oh S*, I didn’t put an extra diaper in my purse”! Kelly scrounged around her car and found a diaper lying on the floor. She came into the lobby of the school, a grad ceiling that could punch god in the face if the ceiling wanted to. She got to her locker as people were staring at her, not because her diaper was sticking out or anything, but because she was HOTT!!! Kelly was medium height and slender. She had long flowing brown hair and a gorgeous smile. Kelly grabbed her Geometry book and binder and headed across the school for Mr. Sternals Geometry class. On her way to class her friend Carrie came up to her and they talked about recent gossip on the way to class. Carrie was Kelly’s best friend for about 10 years. They told each other everything about their lives. Carrie even knew about Kelly’s incontinence. As they rounded the corner Kelly soon felt the common feeling of warmth spread around in her diaper, she just prayed that it wouldn’t leak because of her movement. She took her seat as the bell rang and heard the fatal words of Mr. Sternal “Okay class, books on the floor and no talking during the test” “Oh s*, I forgot to study, this is going to be a slaughter”!

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Abigail Bride of Hypnotoad Historical Donor Staff Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Windsor, ON, CA Age: 18 Posts: 2,156 Threads: 90 Gallery Uploads: 37 Blog Entries: 11	Hmm since others have told you your grammar and spelling isn't the greatest, I'm going to say something different, for the sake of being different. Your concept is very thin... I feel like I've read this story a million times, because this idea has been used, a million times. I'm sorry to say, but it's too generic for my liking. You also have very little description. I have no sense of your character, all I know is that she's pretty, petite, and 16. That's it... your character is really 2 dimentional. Try adding more to her personality, thoughts, feelings, and other things. Last edited by Abigail; 10-04-2008 at 07:11 PM.

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30-03-2008	#2 (permalink)
Pojo I rape your post count Historical Donor Staff Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Cow-Land, VA Age: 18 Posts: 3,883 Threads: 62 Gallery Uploads: 6 Wiki Edits: 98 Blog Entries: 19	It sounds somewhat good so far...The writing could be a bit more indepth...And the "!" in some of you quote should be inside the quotes

08-04-2008	#3 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Posts: 136 Threads: 35 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	Chapter 2 As Math ended Kelly thought “Wow, I didn’t think someone could do that bad on a math test” Kelly left is depression. The other hours of the day flew by, and a good thing too because Kelly noticed a wet spot forming on her jeans She arrived home to go change. Kelly rummaged through her underwear drawer to find not a sing diaper or pull up. She went into her closet, nothing as well, although to her relief she spotted a Depends Re-Fasten able under some junk. Kelly fastened it on and got in her car and drove to the Medical supply store. She got into the store and went for the Adult Diapers, she knew she needed day and night diapers. She got some Tena Super’s for night time, but they were out of her usual Tena Ultras. Kelly searched for some other, discreet diapers but found nothing, only some Tranquility ATN’s, Secure’s and Abena. She decided to get the ATN”s “This is going to be so embarrassing to wear these loud things to school.” She thought To make matters worse there was a VERY long line and of course only one register open. While waiting in line she felt another very warm feeling spread around her diaper area. It was a unusually long pee that didn’t seem to stop. About1 minute later it finally did and Kelly inspected the damges, to find that her crappy depends pull up leaked all down her legs. She was very embaressed and hopped the line would move quickly. Once it was her turn at the register the cashier named Mark looked down at her jeans to see them soaked. “Here these diapers are on the house, it looks like you could really use them” Said Mark Kelly took the diapers and rushed home. She put on her Tena Super and went to sleep.

08-04-2008	#4 (permalink)
ThatKid Away Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Midwestern USA Age: 15 Posts: 116 Threads: 6 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 1	pretty good story...had some grammar issues I saw and 1 or 2 spelling errors but I am sort of a grammar cop...I spot things on others works when I can't find them on my own work

09-04-2008	#5 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Posts: 136 Threads: 35 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	lol i had an English teacher like that, but she wasn't a grammer cop, she was a grammer Nazi!

09-04-2008	#6 (permalink)
Kovalchuk Czar of the Diaper Aisle Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: ✖✖✖ Hell ✖✖✖ Age: 15 Posts: 744 Threads: 101 Gallery Uploads: 7 Wiki Edits: 2	Pretty good story so far. Just, as the others say, work a bit on grammar. It's funny, my best friend's sister's name is Kelly, and she wets. I went into her room, and just to be an ass, I said, "Eww it smells like peepee!" in a Cartman-style voice. He nodded, and looked like he was gonna crack up. He said that she wet the bed, and then said in a voice that was supposed to imitate his mother, "One week dry. Good job Kelly!

09-04-2008	#7 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Posts: 136 Threads: 35 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	lol, does she wear diapers?

11-04-2008	#9 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Posts: 136 Threads: 35 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	ya i know, it isn't that good of a story, because i haven't "gotten in to it" you know?