My Poetry :) wat do you think about it :)

[BabyLovePoetLorent]

-Memories from The Heart-
2/10/09 “Keeping You Safe” [name removed for security reasons]

If you were near every night I’d make sure you were safe
With soothing words I’d give you faith.
I’d lock the doors and shut the windows
I’d cover you up and hide your shadows.
I’d give you a kiss and say goodnight
I’d leave on one light so you won’t get a fright.
I’d say I love you and walk towards the door
You’d want another kiss on the lips just one more.
So I’d do it again then smile in a light
I leave your room leaving some to shine in your sight.
I come to you when you scream in your nightmare
I’d lie next to you until there’s no more fear.
Then I whisper sweet words while you lie asleep
This so for the rest of the moon you make no sound nor any peep.
In this warm summer darkness you get hot and again awake
So I open up your window slightly as my heart you take.
You smile in the moon light and hold out your hand
I hold it in this moment but still in front of you I stand.
You pull me to your bed and lift up the covers
This angel opens her eyes as we become closer as lovers.
We cuddle unclothed in this hot room filled with memories
Now on this day I for fill your wishes and turn real your fantasies.
Your breath on me in this room feels so good
Like when we were in the rain by the bus we stood.
We face each other as you give me another smile
I don’t try to get up I guess I could lay a while.
You rub your legs in between mine and giggle then we kiss
Your eyes light up so beautifully with love and bliss.
You moved in quickly in the dark and didn’t miss.
You were moaning as you moved in and out
I whispered your name as were shifting pleasurably about.
I’d call you cawala bear in such a sweet gentle tone
You’d call me teddy bear and say never leave me alone.
I want this memory to last forever never ending tonight
You’d do this thing were you nibble on my lip trying not to bite.
This distant love is a long burden to bare
I’d keep you safe if only you were here.

[BabyLovePoetLorent]

-Memories from The Heart-
1/8/09 “Run Away To Memories” By: Name removed for security reasons

I love you so much so please don’t tell me you’re going home soon.
Instead, stay with me you are special to me.
I wanna run off somewhere with you and leave everything else behind.
I wanna go back to that one summer day, ever on the grass against each other we lay.
The wind blowing caressingly through your soft hair, feelings of love and lust filled the air.
Your skin so tender and pure, just one kiss opened the door.
Your body so warm and sutle, in the sun we gently cuddle.
To me sweet words you whisper, you always were a good kisser.
Thinking of you makes me smile; hating you, this will be denial.
You always are my day’s lover, the shyness in you I now uncover.
Like then I meet the day’s end, our love and your heart I will defend.
Your life and soul you would so willingly give, for you I would end what I live.
Never again Lucia will I leave you alone, pushed up upon you do you pleasurably moan.
I give you my love and take some for myself, being with you now to me is my only wealth.
Now it is time to go, to stay I want this so.
The light now left dark, soon I will be alone in this park.
We part with sweet words and a passionate kiss, the taste of your lips with you in my arms I will miss.
I love you so much, you say forever in love is such.
Gone today wait till tomorrow, till then I’m waiting in sorrow.

[BabyLovePoetLorent]

Sorry if the pole questions are a little off :P

[mzkkbprmt]

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Moved to stories in progress, so more can be added if you wish.

As for the poems themselves I didn't get a chance to look at them. I'll get round to it some time though, I like poetry after all.

[r4di0sensitive]

your poems are good, would you mind if i shared one of mine?

[Takashi]

Wow, very impressive.