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22-03-2008
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Bride of Hypnotoad
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The Dream Diary
Prologue
Dear Diary, I think I'm going to call you Zoey. That's a good name for a diary right? Well I think so. I had an okay birthday, well I guess turning 13 isn't very special anyways. But mom said it was, becuase I was a teenager, but I don't think I'm a teenager until I'm in highschool, and that isn't for another two years. I had all my friends over and we swam in my pool and threw water balloons, and just had lots of fun. I just finished school too! Horray for summer! I have had some weird dreams for the last few weeks. It's always about me getting lost. Mom said that it might be foreseeing the future, but I always look like myself, most of the time. Sometimes, I look smaller, but never bigger, so it must mean that I will get lost soon? I don't know. I might document them, that way I can show you what they are about. Maybe if I document them every night I can find a connection? What if it is a sign? What if the little girl isn't me, it just looks like me, what if, what if some kidnapped kid is trying to tell me something? Maybe I'm psychic!! It's settled, I will write down my dreams every day and then find the connection, there HAS to be one! Love, Daria. xoxo |
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22-03-2008
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Bride of Hypnotoad
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Chapter One
Dear Zoey, I had a dream last night. It was just like the other ones. This is what happened.... I was walking down the road, it looked like a highway. "Help!" I called, but no one was around. I was all alone. Then this girl came out of the forest. "It's okay sweetie, I'm here now." She said softly in a sweet voice, "Come with me Daria, come and you will be safe," she said holding her arms open. I walked towards her, right into her outspread arms. She wrapped them tightly around me, rocking me, telling me it's okay. Suddenly my pants were all wet. "Oh hunnie, you had an accident, it's okay, lets get you cleaned up." She turned around and we were in her living room. She lay me down and took out an over sized pampers, thick and crinkly and pulled it under my bottom. She taped it up and gave me a kiss. "There ya go baby, all clean now." We sat on the couch and cuddled, she rubbed my back as we watched Bambi on her television. Suddenly the door swung open and three girls walked in. "Oh she's adorable!" The one with the blonde hair said. "Definately," one of the two burnettes commented. "Daria, meet Heather, Jessica and Julia," The beautiful girl said. "They will be babysitting you while I go do some shopping," she said to me. She walked away and I cried, holding my arms open, wanting her to come back. “Oh it’s okay, let’s go sledding,” the girls said. I was instantly happy as they dressed me in a snowsuit and we went outside. We walked over to the hill next door and we all ran up and sled down, I took turns sitting on the girls lap. “I went pee-pee,” I said to one of them as we walked up the hill. “Okay, let’s go home!” she responded. When we got in she led me into my newly remodeled nursery and lay me on the big changing table. My pants were pulled down and I looked up to see my mother. That is where my dream ended Zoey. I don’t know what it means, they are all kinda like this. They make no sense. First it’s summer, then it’s winter, then my mom’s there, and people appear out of nowhere, along with a huge nursery. What does it all mean? I don’t know yet, but I will figure it out! Love, Daria, xoxo. |
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22-03-2008
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Bride of Hypnotoad
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Chapter 2
Dear Zoey, Today was a pretty good day, I have a tummy-ache from the cake I had last night, it was my friend Jessica’s birthday, she turned 13 as well. I have to go school shopping soon, I’m starting grade eight! I’m a little nervous, maybe that’s why I’m having these dreams, I might just be under too much stress, but I still like the idea of being psychic better! I had another dream last night, it was different, and I looked older, I was still the same size and everything, but my hair was longer, and I had boobies! I can’t wait ‘till I grow them, mom says I should soon, ‘cuz she hit puberty when she was 12, so I’m overdo! The train chugged and steam shot from the engine as we rolled along the country side. I looked out the window and rest my head against the cold, hard ledge. *Ring, Ring* I pulled out a pink cell-phone from my pocket. “Hello?” I replied to the person on the other end. “Oh, Hi Mommy!” “Yep, I’m on my way” “Okay, I will call you when I get back.” I flipped the phone closed and returned it to my pocket. I have to go to the bathroom, I thought. I let loose, and filled my pull-up, it felt nice. The train pulled up, and there was a cab waiting for me, I was in Chicago, quite a few hours away from my home. I got into the cab and it sped down the streets, my red, curly hair whipping through the window and hitting me in the face. Finally, we got to the hotel. I grabbed my bags and walked in, it looked like a house, there was a kitchen to the left, a bathroom to the right, and a hallway leading to the living room. I didn’t hear anyone, so I continued to walk. In the living room there were three more doors, two leading to what looked like bedrooms, with two beds each, and patio doors, leading to the balcony. I pushed open one of the bedroom doors and saw a pretty woman sleeping in one of the beds. I tip-toed to the empty bed, and dropped my suitcase and began to remove my shoes. I looked over, the woman was asleep so I took off my pants, I had a wet pullup on, so I took it off, I wiped myself, and took out a big thick diaper, and laid on the bed, I pulled it up and was struggling to do up the tapes. The woman woke up and began to do up the tapes for me. “There sweetie,” she said to me, doing up the last tape. Tears welled in my eyes, this was a secret I have kept to myself, no one knew about my potty problems. “Don’t cry, Daria, everything will be okay.” She said to me. I instantly felt better, so I started to let go into my diaper. That’s when I woke up, Zoey. I was actually peeing in real life! I quickly stopped and jumped out of bed, luckily I only got a bit on my pyjama bottoms, but wouldn’t it be crazy if that happened at one of my friends house, or while I was sleeping during school? I’d be soo embarrassed! Hopefully it doesn’t happen again, I don’t think it will, though! More later, Daria xoxo PS. Maybe I will be able to finish this dream tonight? I want to know what happens to me, the older me, in the dream, it’s all too weird! |
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23-03-2008
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well if you want to see realistic critique then keep scrolling down else just skip over my post, i don't want to make you upset since i realize this is a thing done for the fun of it. Critique.... Well what i thought about this story is that it should've used a LOT more details. Then there's a the whole transitions, i would've just left you alone since it could be counted as loose tale-telling, but when i saw "chapter X" i realized it wasn't just a diary thing. First Dream: You're dreaming about yourself- and then suddenly somehow you're picked up by a female? Like in a craddling manner????? I realize you indicated a smaller girl earlier. But that was about someone appearing in your dreams not depicted as you. Second dream: This was by far, THE MOST confusing of them both, it shows you with pullups and then if you are indeed that small girl then why would you be driving? And then to go the other way, if you aren't then how did the girl pick you up earlier? End of Critique.... That's it ~blarg |
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23-03-2008
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Bride of Hypnotoad
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Um.... did you read anything? The bold is a dream. It isn't supposed to make sense, I thought that was kinda obvious.
"They make no sense. First it’s summer, then it’s winter, then my mom’s there, and people appear out of nowhere, along with a huge nursery. What does it all mean?" |
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