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Old 28-08-2009   #1 (permalink)
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Default Just another ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE story...

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No one knows how the infection began. Rumours speculate it was a chance mutated virus originating from unaware DD.com whack-jobs trying to breach ADISC soil. Other more mentally unstable members suspect it was a genocide attempt gone terribly wrong devised by Moo to promptly purge the community since the first bid didn’t go exactly as he had set out. Whatever the cause deleted members started to browse the forums once again. At first others celebrated there return unaware that they were the cannibalistic walking dead! Sure they were pale, speechless (other than incoherent groans) and gnawed on human flesh, just like every other basement dwelling socially retarded furry. It was an easy mistake to make, but one that cost dearly.



Somewhere in the barren Roleplay Wasteland...

MaryMargaretBush was merrily skipping along. To all rational ears audibly talking to herself, but watching her body language you'd get the uncanny impression she was playing with a group of people, but no, she was definitely alone! That is until a lone vaguely human shape emerged in the distance dragging itself closer. MaryMargaretBush being quick to get friendly with anyone who walked into the roleplay wasteland (99.9% by mistake) to see if they wanted to play with her ran excitedly to the figure.

“Mister! Mister! Wanna play ‘Cruise Ship’ with me!” She exclaimed.

The figure held out it’s arms and started to groan wildly picking up pace, albeit sluggishly (though that had nothing to do with being a zombie) toward MaryMargaretBush.

“Do you want a cuddle?” Giggled Mary opening her arms. “Oh…” She came to an abrupt halt a couple of feet away from the fast approaching member. “Hey, weren’t you banned?” She politely queried looking upward toward Darkfinn.

Darkfinn towered over her eyes peering down unnaturally vacant. He began to violently swipe his grey hands out at Mary though her short statue and his lack of co-ordination made her a difficult target to lay one's hands on. His moans grew increasingly louder as if growing frustrated. Darkfinn subsequently tripped over his own cadaverous feet and plummeted face first to the ground in front of Mary.

“Sounds like someone’s cranky!” Mary said with a mock pout.

Darkfinn motionless let out another lengthy muffled moan.

“No, no! I will not take no for an answer! Mary scolded crossing her arms. “I think you need a nap!”

Mary dropped to her knees and reached out for Darkfinn. A seemingly automatic spasm of movement propelled Darkfinn’s body forward. His Jaw opened revoltingly wide he clamped his teeth on Mary’s thin arm and started to rapidly chew as if it were a particularly tough bloody steak.

“IIIIEEEEEEEEE-ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGG!” Shrieked Mary.

Darkfinn still lay on the ground chewing absent mindedly on her appendage.
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I can't even imagine her sounding anything but monotone.
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Brutal ending. I like how you added members from ADISc. I'll look forward to reading more.
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You did ask MaryMargeretBush before featuring her in this? The problem with featuring members without asking is they might not like how they are portrayed, and others might make deregotary comments.
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Left 4 Dead has made this and all zombie based stories obsolete. I am sorry.

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hmm it is a good storie and i can imagine mary doing those things but she can be really grown up to so meh and you had to add darkfinn didn't you?
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