Squeakers

[Zodiac Pup]

Meh, just felt like writing something and sharing it. Dunno if I'll continue to write this. I was bored in the bank, so I took out a note pad and started writing randomly, and this came out.

I know it will sound awkward, but although this is nothing bad, if you're not into it, I'll kindly ask you to stop reading and move on to something else. Any comment that I find offensive will be immediately reported.

Also, since I'm a human being (disregard anything my user name might tell you), I tend to comment mistakes. I'll appreciate if you politely adressed any mistake you find. I don't like people rubbing my failures in my face.

Thank you in advance,
Zodiac Pup

So here we start.

Note: you'll find out that it does not have a clear beginning. This is mainly due to 2 reasons:
- It is my style.
- This was the only (good) thing that came to my brain.

If you come up with a beginning I like, it can be added later when the story is finnished, if I decide to finnish it.

2nd Note: My original thought was to make Squeakers "The Squeaker", a mythical creature that can do who knows what against who knows who, who is making the world (possibly our world) an evil place. The main character is now adressed in second person (don't ask why), but it may be changed later, once I have a cool name for him.

With this you can say I have a defined plan for the story [sarcasm] anyway, thanks for reading.

[Zodiac Pup]

Photo of the actual Squeakers

You feel the warm water flowing in all directions. It is so calm, it is so simple. The thick fog makes everything hard to see, if not impossible. She smiles at you, staring with her blue eyes. You want to stay there forever. Everything is very comfortable. "Will you catch me this time?" She asks you and with a wag of her fin, she swims away. For a moment you don't care, the water is so relaxing, but suddenly you feel afraid. You call her, and she comes back in a rush. You hug her with a soft squeak. You look at her, she smiles again. You two watch the sunset and wonder what the next day may bring.

Your adventure has just begun, and now you're not alone.

[BabyGrizzy]

A poem or short story? Did you know Dolphins, which also have blowholes and are thus related, feel like really tight rubber? They are also a tastey alternative to your cat.

[Zodiac Pup]

Uhm, yeah, I think it will be short. And uhm... I don't think I'll ever eat a cat or a dolphin in my entire life...

[Jeffy]

It seems almost like a romantic version of "Equune" or "Eqqun" Or however you say that plays name, but pure and simple, Daniel Radcliffe has sexual fantasies about a horse. But I like this better cause it's just so sweet and heartwarming n.n

[Zodiac Pup]

Actually I want it as less, uhm, erotic as possible, but still romantic.

[Jeffy]

Originally Posted by Zodiac Pup

Actually I want it as less, uhm, erotic as possible, but still romantic.

Oh it wasn't erotic for me at all n.n All I got was romance. Great job.

[ShippoFox]

That was cute! I think I read it on your flickr or something. Make more!

[Zodiac Pup]

As the sun rises next morning, you realize she isn't by your side anymore. The thick fog is gone as well. You look around desperately and try to see her. The sun rays start getting hotter, to the point where the temperature is unbearable. You see some rocks on the left and swim to them; there you wait, hoping that she's able to spot you. The shadow is cold, but in a comfortable temperature.

After a couple hours you see two gray spots, far away. They grow bigger and bigger until they aren't two dots anymore, but two dolphins. You're glad to see her again, but who this new friend might be?

[Zodiac Pup]

I need more advice on how to keep this thing up