Fur Camp (The story)

JessePup · 27-05-2009

This is a copy of my rp which was put in rp so I could get a story line but no such luck. Plus I dont think Ill get in trouble for copying my own creation.

The setting is an outdoor camp with cabins, a messhall, a playground, even a compputer lab with computers specially programmed to be nothing more than an online library. The campers normally wear shorts but it is not uncommon for them to go without.

the campsite cant be seen from the entrance to avoid people entering without being signed up for camp.

now the story...

Jesse had always been a little lazy and not one for the outdoors. He had just wanted to stay home all summer playing video games. But his mother had sent him to a summer camp called Fur Camp.
"You are gong to camp and you will get active. You are 14 and you need to be outside and making friends."

Jesse's mom just scanned the phone book and found the first camp she could and signed him up without taking the time to read the information about it.

He arrives at camp and goes to his cabin to unpack.
"Hmm. Ah. Cabin 7."
He enters and finds that only one bunk out of about eight bunk beds had a bag on it. Jesse find his own bunk and just sits there wishing he had packed some diapers.

Please I need to at least know:
1. should it stay third person
2. should I make a part about the mom knowing or not knowing about the diapers?

Laram · 28-05-2009

1. I Think, Like Thats Good.

2. Uh, Not Knowing.

Secret · 28-05-2009

It was an alright start but you need to make your chapters much longer and more detailed. Try and make it not so fast moving to, otherwise it was a goo start.

Laram · 28-05-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by Secret

It was an alright start but you need to make your chapters much longer and more detailed. Try and make it not so fast moving to, otherwise it was a goo start.

A "goo start" Was It? xD

MORE!

JessePup · 28-05-2009

thanks. its not a chapter and its all I used to start the rp. all i needed to do in the rp was provide a setting and a direction for development. anyway im going to copy it and add to it and show you what i come up with. also Id like to have comments on dialogue since im not good at incorperating that into a story.

JessePup · 28-05-2009

The setting is an outdoor camp with cabins, a messhall, a playground, even a compputer lab with computers specially programmed to be nothing more than an online library. The campers normally wear shorts but it is not uncommon for them to go without.

the campsite cant be seen from the entrance to avoid people entering without being signed up for camp.

now the story...

Jesse had always been a little lazy and not one for the outdoors. He had just wanted to stay home all summer playing video games. But his mother had sent him to a summer camp called Fur Camp.
"You are gong to camp and you will get active. You are 14 and you need to be outside and making friends."

Jesse's mom just scanned the phone book and found the first camp she could and signed him up without taking the time to read the information about it.

He arrives at camp and goes to his cabin to unpack.
"Hmm. Ah. Cabin 7."
He enters and finds that only one bunk out of about eight bunk beds had a bag on it. Jesse find his own bunk and just sits there wishing he had packed some diapers.
In the middle of his greiveing the cabin door swung open and a grey wolf walked in. He went over to the bunk that had the bag and started unpacking not noticing Jesse sitting across from the wolf's apparent bunk.
As the wolf was unpacking Jesse noticed him pull out a small bag of Pampfurs. Seeing this made Jesse's heart pump and mind to race. He decided to be discovered and ask the question on his mind.
"What are those?"
The wolf spun around quickly startled by the break in silence.
"These," he asked confused, "they're just some Pampfurs. Nothing speacial."
"What do you mean nothing speacial? You brought diapers to camp! Arent you worried someone will find them?" Jesse said trying not to let his words reveal his feelings.
"Everyone already knows, infact everyone here wears diapers. Its the only place where diaper wearing furs can get together. Dont you where them?" the wolf asked as if it were an everyday question.
"I uhh. Well ummmm-,"
"No need to worry, everyone here wears them, here even the adminestraitors." the wolf reasured.
"Well I... do but Im still in the closet about it. So you say everyone here wears them?" Jesse asked relieved.
"Uh duh! Its a diaperfur camp. Its why everyone came." he replied.
"Wow. Thanks for telling me all that. I think its gonna be easy making friends here, ummm... whats your name anyway?"
"My name's Peter. Call me Pete," the wolf raised his hand to shake.
"Jesse, nice to meet you." he grasped Pete's hand and shook it enthusiasticly, "you wouldnt happen to have any spares would you, I didnt pack mine."
"Sure. Hope you're a 29 inch waist."
Pete handed Jesse a crinkly, baby powder smelling diaper.
"Can you umm."
"Turn around? Sure." Pete turned and waited for Jesse to clothe himself.
Jesse hadnt done this sort of thing while someone was in the room but the feeling of having a diaper on him was enough to curb his embassment.
They both went to bed without speaking. Apparrantly Pete understood Jesse's position. Tommorrow they would talk.

Im gona change it to first person veiw. Its easier that way. I need suggestions on this story please.

JessePup · 28-05-2009

im going to be working on the story off-forum and show you what ive got tommorrow. also if you read my story while im gone please leave a good comment. bye.

Laram · 28-05-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by JessePup

"Everyone already knows, infact everyone here wears diapers. Its the only place where diaper wearing furs can get together. Dont you where them?" the wolf asked as if it were an everyday question.

Uhhh, MORE! Also, "Where" Should Be "Wear" There?

JessePup · 28-05-2009

lol funny. ill fix that on my off-forum copy thanks.

JessePup · 28-05-2009

I woke up to the sound of walking on hardwood and felt a nudging on my shoulder. I assumed it was my little sister trying to get me to play with here outside. I rolled over and grumbled quietly signaling her to let me sleep. Then I felt her grab my arm and yank me out of bed. I hit the floor but my butt felt like it fell into some warm jelly. I opened my eyes expecting to see my sister but I was givin the image of a wolf, staring at me and grinning wildly. Then all the events of yesterday came rushing back. I wasn't at home, I was at a camp for diaper wearing furs. I felt embarrassed to be at such a place and at the same time I felt like I belonged. I also felt exposed as I was lying on the floor in nothing put a wet diaper.

"Get up," Pete said excitedly," we're gonna miss breakfast!"

He grabed the shirt I wore yesterday with a 1up mushroom on it and tossed to me. "Get dressed!"

"Okay. Keep your shirt on so I can get mine." I said, pun very much intended.
No sooner did we get our shirts on did he start for the door.

"Wait! What about pants? We can't go outside in just our diapers. Speaking of which Im wet. Shouldn't I at least change myself?" I said nervously.

"We don't have to wear pants. We are wearing diapers after all, It would be hard to squeeze them into pants. Plus by the look of it your only half full. No one really changes until after breakfast." Pete said flatly and out the door he went.

I followed him to the mess hall and upon entering i noticed that Pete was right. No one wore pants unless you count the select few who wore footed sleepers. Most everyone just wore a shirt and a diaper like me. Pete and I got some pancakes, eggs, and bacon. There were some milk laid out on the table at the end of the line. The milk was either in a baby bottle or glasses. Pete urged me to let loose and we got the very last two bottles left. Now everyone else had to take the glasses which no one previously had picked. We found a seat and started eating. Mid-way through the meal we started talking.

"So," he asked, "what are you anyway?"

"What do you mean," I replied confused, "it's obvious that I'm a husky."

"No. I mean I'm a Babyfur/Diaperfur,"he clarified.

"Oh. Just DF." I answered.

"Cool. So I'm finished eating, you?" Pete asked.

"Yeah, Im done. Can't eat anymore." I said picking up our dirty dishes and putting them in the return slot in the wall where they would be taken to be cleaned.

We headed back to the cabin slowly so we could enjoy being outdoors. This just made me nervous. When we got back to the cabin he started unpacking some changing supplies.

"Need changin'?" he asked.

Until now I hadn't realised how wet I was. This diaper looked like it was gonna blow.

"Just teasing, I know you do." Pete chukled.

"Yeah thats true. Uhh... where do I go to get changed?"

"Well the camp has people for that but they're probably way to busy changing the kids who just got back from breakfast." He paused to consider the options though didn't look like he was thinking of that, "I can change you!"

This threw me. I didn't want a dude to change me, but then again I didn't have many choices and I needed a change, bad.

"You don't mind?" I finally said.

"Of course not. We are cabin-mates afterall." He answered a little too enthusiasticly.
"Lie down on your bed." he comanded.

I obeyed, still uncomfortable but thankful for a change. He undid the tabs and disposed of the wet diaper. With a wipe he quickly cleaned my diaper aera and went on to powder me and diaper me. The process took less than thirty seconds. He was good.

"Hehe. Now you do me." he giggled.

He lay on his bed ready for a knew diaper. I was a bit clueless but he instructed me on how to do it. I did pretty well if I do say so myself.

After I taped him up he stood up, laughed, and pointed at my diaper and said, "Looks like you enjoyed that more than I did."

I looked down to see that he was talking about the bulge visible under my diaper and quicky covered myself blushing maddly.

"I'm kidding, It happens to everyone after a change."

He loved messing with me.
We started playing connect four and started talking

"So what's your favorite diaper brand?" he started.

"I normally get Pampfurs but my favorite is Molihare."

"Molihare?"

"You know. They were named after their inventor, Charles Hare, a German rabbit. They're hard to find cause they're from Europe."

"Oh yeah. I tried them but my mom stoped getting them cause they're too expensive."

"Your mom knows?!" I asked surprised.

"Yeah dosn't your's?"

"No. Like I said I'm still in the closet about that."

"What does that mean?"

"It means It's still a secret."

We continued on like that for a while and I'm proud to say I won every single game of connect four.

Like I said I changed it to first person.

27-05-2009	#1 (permalink)
JessePup Regular Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas, United States of America Age: 14 Posts: 151 Threads: 14 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 5	Fur Camp (The story) This is a copy of my rp which was put in rp so I could get a story line but no such luck. Plus I dont think Ill get in trouble for copying my own creation. The setting is an outdoor camp with cabins, a messhall, a playground, even a compputer lab with computers specially programmed to be nothing more than an online library. The campers normally wear shorts but it is not uncommon for them to go without. the campsite cant be seen from the entrance to avoid people entering without being signed up for camp. now the story... Jesse had always been a little lazy and not one for the outdoors. He had just wanted to stay home all summer playing video games. But his mother had sent him to a summer camp called Fur Camp. "You are gong to camp and you will get active. You are 14 and you need to be outside and making friends." Jesse's mom just scanned the phone book and found the first camp she could and signed him up without taking the time to read the information about it. He arrives at camp and goes to his cabin to unpack. "Hmm. Ah. Cabin 7." He enters and finds that only one bunk out of about eight bunk beds had a bag on it. Jesse find his own bunk and just sits there wishing he had packed some diapers. Please I need to at least know: 1. should it stay third person 2. should I make a part about the mom knowing or not knowing about the diapers?

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28-05-2009	#2 (permalink)
Laram Regular Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: North Devon, England. Age: 14 Posts: 744 Threads: 13 Gallery Uploads: 2 Blog Entries: 3 Reputation: 4	1. I Think, Like Thats Good. 2. Uh, Not Knowing.

28-05-2009	#3 (permalink)
Secret VIP Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: none Posts: 853 Threads: 63 Reputation: 10	It was an alright start but you need to make your chapters much longer and more detailed. Try and make it not so fast moving to, otherwise it was a goo start.

28-05-2009	#5 (permalink)
JessePup Regular Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas, United States of America Age: 14 Posts: 151 Threads: 14 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 5	thanks. its not a chapter and its all I used to start the rp. all i needed to do in the rp was provide a setting and a direction for development. anyway im going to copy it and add to it and show you what i come up with. also Id like to have comments on dialogue since im not good at incorperating that into a story.

28-05-2009	#6 (permalink)
JessePup Regular Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas, United States of America Age: 14 Posts: 151 Threads: 14 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 5	The setting is an outdoor camp with cabins, a messhall, a playground, even a compputer lab with computers specially programmed to be nothing more than an online library. The campers normally wear shorts but it is not uncommon for them to go without. the campsite cant be seen from the entrance to avoid people entering without being signed up for camp. now the story... Jesse had always been a little lazy and not one for the outdoors. He had just wanted to stay home all summer playing video games. But his mother had sent him to a summer camp called Fur Camp. "You are gong to camp and you will get active. You are 14 and you need to be outside and making friends." Jesse's mom just scanned the phone book and found the first camp she could and signed him up without taking the time to read the information about it. He arrives at camp and goes to his cabin to unpack. "Hmm. Ah. Cabin 7." He enters and finds that only one bunk out of about eight bunk beds had a bag on it. Jesse find his own bunk and just sits there wishing he had packed some diapers. In the middle of his greiveing the cabin door swung open and a grey wolf walked in. He went over to the bunk that had the bag and started unpacking not noticing Jesse sitting across from the wolf's apparent bunk. As the wolf was unpacking Jesse noticed him pull out a small bag of Pampfurs. Seeing this made Jesse's heart pump and mind to race. He decided to be discovered and ask the question on his mind. "What are those?" The wolf spun around quickly startled by the break in silence. "These," he asked confused, "they're just some Pampfurs. Nothing speacial." "What do you mean nothing speacial? You brought diapers to camp! Arent you worried someone will find them?" Jesse said trying not to let his words reveal his feelings. "Everyone already knows, infact everyone here wears diapers. Its the only place where diaper wearing furs can get together. Dont you where them?" the wolf asked as if it were an everyday question. "I uhh. Well ummmm-," "No need to worry, everyone here wears them, here even the adminestraitors." the wolf reasured. "Well I... do but Im still in the closet about it. So you say everyone here wears them?" Jesse asked relieved. "Uh duh! Its a diaperfur camp. Its why everyone came." he replied. "Wow. Thanks for telling me all that. I think its gonna be easy making friends here, ummm... whats your name anyway?" "My name's Peter. Call me Pete," the wolf raised his hand to shake. "Jesse, nice to meet you." he grasped Pete's hand and shook it enthusiasticly, "you wouldnt happen to have any spares would you, I didnt pack mine." "Sure. Hope you're a 29 inch waist." Pete handed Jesse a crinkly, baby powder smelling diaper. "Can you umm." "Turn around? Sure." Pete turned and waited for Jesse to clothe himself. Jesse hadnt done this sort of thing while someone was in the room but the feeling of having a diaper on him was enough to curb his embassment. They both went to bed without speaking. Apparrantly Pete understood Jesse's position. Tommorrow they would talk. Im gona change it to first person veiw. Its easier that way. I need suggestions on this story please.

28-05-2009	#7 (permalink)
JessePup Regular Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas, United States of America Age: 14 Posts: 151 Threads: 14 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 5	im going to be working on the story off-forum and show you what ive got tommorrow. also if you read my story while im gone please leave a good comment. bye.

28-05-2009	#9 (permalink)
JessePup Regular Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas, United States of America Age: 14 Posts: 151 Threads: 14 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 5	lol funny. ill fix that on my off-forum copy thanks.

28-05-2009	#10 (permalink)
JessePup Regular Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas, United States of America Age: 14 Posts: 151 Threads: 14 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 5	I woke up to the sound of walking on hardwood and felt a nudging on my shoulder. I assumed it was my little sister trying to get me to play with here outside. I rolled over and grumbled quietly signaling her to let me sleep. Then I felt her grab my arm and yank me out of bed. I hit the floor but my butt felt like it fell into some warm jelly. I opened my eyes expecting to see my sister but I was givin the image of a wolf, staring at me and grinning wildly. Then all the events of yesterday came rushing back. I wasn't at home, I was at a camp for diaper wearing furs. I felt embarrassed to be at such a place and at the same time I felt like I belonged. I also felt exposed as I was lying on the floor in nothing put a wet diaper. "Get up," Pete said excitedly," we're gonna miss breakfast!" He grabed the shirt I wore yesterday with a 1up mushroom on it and tossed to me. "Get dressed!" "Okay. Keep your shirt on so I can get mine." I said, pun very much intended. No sooner did we get our shirts on did he start for the door. "Wait! What about pants? We can't go outside in just our diapers. Speaking of which Im wet. Shouldn't I at least change myself?" I said nervously. "We don't have to wear pants. We are wearing diapers after all, It would be hard to squeeze them into pants. Plus by the look of it your only half full. No one really changes until after breakfast." Pete said flatly and out the door he went. I followed him to the mess hall and upon entering i noticed that Pete was right. No one wore pants unless you count the select few who wore footed sleepers. Most everyone just wore a shirt and a diaper like me. Pete and I got some pancakes, eggs, and bacon. There were some milk laid out on the table at the end of the line. The milk was either in a baby bottle or glasses. Pete urged me to let loose and we got the very last two bottles left. Now everyone else had to take the glasses which no one previously had picked. We found a seat and started eating. Mid-way through the meal we started talking. "So," he asked, "what are you anyway?" "What do you mean," I replied confused, "it's obvious that I'm a husky." "No. I mean I'm a Babyfur/Diaperfur,"he clarified. "Oh. Just DF." I answered. "Cool. So I'm finished eating, you?" Pete asked. "Yeah, Im done. Can't eat anymore." I said picking up our dirty dishes and putting them in the return slot in the wall where they would be taken to be cleaned. We headed back to the cabin slowly so we could enjoy being outdoors. This just made me nervous. When we got back to the cabin he started unpacking some changing supplies. "Need changin'?" he asked. Until now I hadn't realised how wet I was. This diaper looked like it was gonna blow. "Just teasing, I know you do." Pete chukled. "Yeah thats true. Uhh... where do I go to get changed?" "Well the camp has people for that but they're probably way to busy changing the kids who just got back from breakfast." He paused to consider the options though didn't look like he was thinking of that, "I can change you!" This threw me. I didn't want a dude to change me, but then again I didn't have many choices and I needed a change, bad. "You don't mind?" I finally said. "Of course not. We are cabin-mates afterall." He answered a little too enthusiasticly. "Lie down on your bed." he comanded. I obeyed, still uncomfortable but thankful for a change. He undid the tabs and disposed of the wet diaper. With a wipe he quickly cleaned my diaper aera and went on to powder me and diaper me. The process took less than thirty seconds. He was good. "Hehe. Now you do me." he giggled. He lay on his bed ready for a knew diaper. I was a bit clueless but he instructed me on how to do it. I did pretty well if I do say so myself. After I taped him up he stood up, laughed, and pointed at my diaper and said, "Looks like you enjoyed that more than I did." I looked down to see that he was talking about the bulge visible under my diaper and quicky covered myself blushing maddly. "I'm kidding, It happens to everyone after a change." He loved messing with me. We started playing connect four and started talking "So what's your favorite diaper brand?" he started. "I normally get Pampfurs but my favorite is Molihare." "Molihare?" "You know. They were named after their inventor, Charles Hare, a German rabbit. They're hard to find cause they're from Europe." "Oh yeah. I tried them but my mom stoped getting them cause they're too expensive." "Your mom knows?!" I asked surprised. "Yeah dosn't your's?" "No. Like I said I'm still in the closet about that." "What does that mean?" "It means It's still a secret." We continued on like that for a while and I'm proud to say I won every single game of connect four. Like I said I changed it to first person.