A Simple Game of Cards (PG)

[Paxaman0]

Hi. My name is Lucas Diaz. I'm 14 years old and wear thick diapers at all times, a onesie, and have my pacifier attached to a belt around my onesie so I have to suck it consistently. Furthermore, I drink out of a bottle of plain milk just like a baby. You may be wondering "What is wrong with you Lucas?" Or "Who would be so cruel to do such a thing to you Lucas?" Well.......this is my story.

It was on the morning of April 21, 2008 that it all started. My parents were gone on vacation in England. I woke up early in the morning and got dressed; chugging a delicious drink of orange juice, and snarfing a bowl of cereal so fast it was as if my face was a vaccum. Even though this day began typically with me going to school on the school bus later tonight, that would all change. You see, I had been really mean and rude to my sisters over the past couple of weeks. Not only had I scribbled in their diaries, I had pulled off the heads of their plastic dolls and let my dog (Han) bury them in the yard for the moles to find and play with.

I had even taken one of their 10-page reports and flushed it down the toilet! Of course I got caught when the toilet clogged, but it was still worth it for many reasons. But I would get my comeuppance later tonight. School for me was a breeze as usual. I was pretty decent at Spanish, band, history, forensics, and had a little bit of a hard time with Math and Science. But after saying "Hi" to my friends and having lunch with my friends the day went by much faster as if it were a DVD skipping through scenes.

Before I knew it, the bell was ringing and I was up and out of my seat. [I]"Fridays truly were beautiful for everyone." I thought as I ran my hand through my short red hair. My saphhire eyes twinkled as the sunlight reflected off of my pupils. "This surely was going to be a day to remember." I thought on that day.

I ran upstairs as quickly as I could and threw my bags down on the floor next to the chair. I started playing Super Smash Bros. Brawl on my Wii and I beat the stuffing out of my school-friends as I played as my best character; Pitt. Then I heard a knock on the door and I said glibly "Come in."

It was my tall, thin, blonde haired sister Shelly. She and I always used to enjoy playing cards together. "Hey Luke" (That was my nickname that my sisters liked to use) "Wanna play black jack with us? I know you smeared us this time, but now we came up with a new strategy and Maria and I think we can kick your butt!" She said with a crafty smile on her face and her hands on her hips.

"I beat you 5-0 last time Shelly. This strategy had better be good." I said as I shut off my Wii and went downstairs snickering to myself. "I am going to epicly pown them." I thought to myself as I skipped the last 5 stairs with a big jump. As the game got started Maria had 3 glasses of cokes already set up on the table. We always drank coke when we played black jack; it cooled our game and made us focus more. We sat in a triangular position from each other. Brown-haired lime-green eyed Maria was the dealer. She dealed me 2 cards as was the rules of the game. An ace and a 6 not the greatest hand, it was too low. I took another sip of my coke and said "Hit me."

Maria pretended to punch me jovially, and skillfully flew a card over my way. It was a 5! "Blackjack!" I cried, as I grabbed all our bettings. It was only $5 dollars per preson so $15 total, but every bit counted. I took another sip of coke and she dealt the cards again. For some reason I was beginning to feel very tired and couldn't focus on my card....was it a Queen or a King? All of a sudden dark shadows formed around my eyes and I hit the floor with a soft "thud."

In the morning I woke up. For some odd reason, there were bars around my bed. “Why would that be?” I thought drowsily. “Strange…..” Then I turned around and stood, or you might say tottered upwards. Then it hit me. I was standing in a massive adult-sized crib! Over by my Wii I had a mirror because I practiced the trumpet, and had to check my ombischure frequently to make sure it was right. Well, right now I checked in the mirror and I was wearing a thick diaper!! Not only that, but the diaper had 7 other diapers on top of it, along with plastic pants covering it; finally it was finished by being stretched to be even thicker than it already was. I tried to put my hand down the diaper to feel what they had stuck in my crotch, and I felt absorbency pads. But….there was something on the plastic pants to keep me from taking it off….. it was a lock! “Maria!!!!” I screamed loudly as I realized that I was also wearing a Whinnie the Pooh shirt. Maria came in and said “You don’t have to scream so loudly. Do you need your diapey changed?” She cooed at me and walked over with a pacifier.

“No!!” I shouted “Get me out of these cloth diapers and absorbency pads now!!!” I yelled as loud as I could. “Well”, Maria said “I’ll come back when you’ve realized who’s in charge.” She walked out of the room and closed the door on me.

It was then I realized how utterly hopeless my situation was. I had been tricked by a simple game of cards, and now I could barely walk my diaper was so thick. All because I’d been a horrible brother. I sat down in my crib, and cried until no more tears could come out. Then I couldn’t hold it in any longer and I flooded my diaper, but it didn’t matter because the diaper absorbed it up right away. But, it didn’t absorb my poop that came out just a second later. “Maria?” I pleaded quieter, but loud enough to get past the door. She came in and said with a smile “Yes Lukie?

“I need my diaper changed.”

“I’m glad you’ve realized who’s in control now. Come on, Lukie, I’ll get you out of there.” She reached up and grabbed me by my waist because I was a very light kid for my age. Then she stuck me on the changer and locked me in. When she took away my diaper my first reaction was to cover my private parts with my legs. But then she said “Do you want to hang around in a poopy diaper all day? That’s your choice if you do Lukie.” She said with a simpering mommy voice. Then I stopped struggling and she reached down and wiped my buttocks clean, and threw away the diapers and absorbency pads. Then she replaced them with newer, thicker ones, and unlocked me from the pad. She promptly threw the diapers away and turned to me and patted me on the butt. Then she stated with as much authority as I had ever heard her speak with “There are rules now. You will have to abide by them and if you violate them their will be consequences. Mom and dad already approved this treatment of you, because of your rudeness towards me and Shelly. Only 3 rules apply. Starting tomorrow, you have to poop in your diaper twice before we change it so we don’t use as many diapers. Second, you will crawl when you walk and address us in a baby voice for example “Mommy Maria will you pweese change my diapey?” 3rd and finally, the only TV you can watch are little kid shows that have kids wearing diapers in them or Barney or Telle-tubbies.

More will be coming soon. Tell me your thoughts though so far!

[teenbaby96]

A good story, but same plot and story line as some of the diaper stories I read before. But good try though

[junyour]

A good start. One small spelling error. Brease should be Breeze.

Let"s see where it goes

[satyrical]

It's not terrible, but at the same time it doesn't have a whole lot of originality. My main problem with it is that you say it takes place in the year 1990, but the guy owns DVDs and a Wii.

[Paxaman0]

OOPz O_O Sorry about the errors. I didn't know this story was unoriginal. Should I trash it and start over, or do you guys want me to continue writing it?

[mark]

I agree its a good start, but lacks some originality.

[Laram]

No Comment Yet.

But I Agree With Mark.

[teenbaby96]

Just continue and see where it goes, it's better to add your own ideas along the story to make it more interesting

[Paxaman0]

Luke couldn't believe this was happening to him. At least not yet. However, he did vaguely catch the rules as much as he didn't like them. So he decided that he was going to have to obey them otherwise punishment was going to occur. So he started to crawl. But he did find a loophole in his sisters law. No one could force him to actually use the diaper. It was his intestines after all!

Time passed slowly in the day and it seemed like hours as he played in his room with Spiderman toys and Star Wars toys, that it was finally lunch time. "Lukie!!!! Dinner time!!" Called Shelly from below as he heard some toast pop out of the toaster. Luke loved toast and he was excited as he crawled slowly and cautiously downstairs so that he wouldn't fall. But when he got there, he found something that really made him mad. It was a highchair! "I can feed myself Shelly thank you very much." He said as he crawled over to a chair and attempted to pull it towards him. Shelly was too fast for him. "You forgot rule number 2!!" Shelly said and became very angry. She reached over on the microwave and their was her spankerspoon. Luke tried to crawl away but the diapers slowed down his speed tremendously. Shelly grabbed his butt with 2 fingers, pulled down his pants and whapped him 3 hard times on hit butt. "WahhhhhhhhhH!!!!!!!" Screamed Luke and tears started rolling down his eyes. Then, after he stopped sniffling, he was so suprised that was the cry that had come out of his mouth! He hadn't screamed like a baby since..... well since he was a baby!

Shelly put the absorbency pads back into his diaper (the ones that had fallen out when she had pulled off his diaper and patted him on the shoulder. "It's all right Lukie. If you obey us than you won't have to cry." Lucas turned towards her and said "Okay mommy, I use high chwair..." "Good Lukie!" Shelly said and then lifted him into his chair. She took the toast out of the oven and it was cool by now. She proceeded to to put jam and peanut-butter onto it. Then she started to feed Lucas and made sure that she wiped his face whenever he got some food onto it. When he was done with the toast, she had his favorite bologna sandwhich out for him also, so she fed that to him in little bits. Even after that was done, she gave him a blueberry muffin and let him chomp that to pieces. Then, she took out a baby bottle, and filled it with warm milk. She put it to Lucas's face and he tried to swallow it as best as he could. Somehow, it all got down but he felt like throwing up because he hated warm milk. "Mommmiee" Luke cooed. "Yes baby?" "I dunnit likey milkey!! Nastyyy!!"

Cried Luke as he felt his crotch area get warm. He couldn't believe it! He had just peed his pants even when he had told himself that he wasn't going to do it!! Then, came the poop and what a big poop it was too. It filled his buttocks, his genitals and went 1/3 the way up the diaper. There was still plenty of room to spare though. "Well" Shelly said holding her nose because of all the farts that he had given into his diaper "I guess I can give you chocolate milk instead. "Cmon, I'll get you out of this high chair." She said as she lifted him up by his bottom. She never minded dealing with stinky babies. At church, she had often volunteered in the nursery so she obviously wouldn't mind dealing with Luke now. She put him on the ground and asked him "How would you feel about teaching me and Maria to count cards so we can beat our friends?" She asked suddenly as Luke was about to crawl away and read a book.

"Ill tink aboot it moommyy." Luke said as he crawled in his room and sat on his leather couch, careful not to let his poopy diaper spill over. "Why would I teach them cards when they've punished me and put me in diapers?" He asked to himself as he uncontrollably flooded his thick diaper again, as if it was a reminder of their punishment towards him. Maybe he would though. "I'll think about it." Lucarez promised himself as he fell asleep on the couch. When he woke up it was 6:00pm and he had pooped in his diaper again in his sleep. Apparently, he had now lost all sense of his bowels and would be stuck in diapers forever. This thought made Luke cry as he tried to cover his nose because of his stinky smell. Fortunately, the baby powder and the special diapers helped cover most of it. He crawled towards the TV and turned it on. He started to watch Telletubies because he was so bored and after a few moments, he was enraptured by it. At 8:00pm, he peed his diapers for the third or fourth time and the muffin finally came out as he made a huge fart that he was sure everyone could hear and pooped in his diaper, filling it almost all the way to the top.

"Maria!!! Mommy, I need a changing!!" He said as he stood up so that he wouldn't drip poop on the floor. Then she came, and changed him carefully. She slipped off his diaper so that no poop came dripping to the floor. (She had him latched in so that poop wasn't on the floor, that was falling off of his butt. Luke had his butt lifted and Maria cleaned underneath it. After 45 minutes of cleaning she was finished and kissed him on the head. She put an even thicker diaper on him, with 6 absorbency pads on him this time. Then she put a footed sleeper on him and unlatched him. "Time to put you to bed Lukie." She said as she lifted him up and slung part of him on her shoulder. She lowered the bars of the crib and put him in. Then she raised them to make sure he couldn't get out and turned off the lights. "Sweet dreams" She said as she waved goodnight to him.

(Give me your new thoughts.)

[Dr_J]

Okay, just stop right there. Seriously. No joke.

You go from 1st person POV to 3rd person POV? Why would you do that? That's completely confusing and frustrating for me as a reader.

Not to mention that doesn't make any sense.

With that said, I must say that this story has gotten progressively worse...from another writer's standpoint, that is. It's got to be fixed before you continue, or the story will be for naught!