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Old 25-04-2009   #1 (permalink)
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This story is about a 16 year old boy called Andrew who for the past 6 months has been seen by the outside world as a two year old. Who needs his diaper changed, cannot talk, can hardly walk and still needs to be dressed and bathed by somebody else. He is in this state because 6 months ago he saved a witchdoctor from getting run over at highway intesection who granted him one wish. Considering the face that he missed being a baby so much, he wished he could be a two year old again, the wish was granted but although the rest of the world see him as two years old, he still in his physical 16 year old body. Now 6 months have passed since he was first a baby again, he has enjoyed the experince a lot apart from a few situations that were a bit humliating for him. But his 16 year old mind and body is catching up with him, as being is his baby state means he cannot go out with any women. However this changes when a young 20 year old called Leah manages to see him for who he really is, in the most bizarre circusmtance as she is playing his mother in a diaper commerical Andrew has been cast in. Andrew is about to get a diaper chnage he will enver forgot and his two major passions merge into one, diapers usage, and the touch of a young pretty female girls, and this is all in front of the cameras to see!

Part 1 -The Commercial
I was in the car in my booster seat looking straight ahead of me, i didn't know what to expect. My mum was busy driving so she wasn't paying much attention to me. She stopped at the lights and then turned to me. 'I can't beileve my cute little Andy is going to be on TV. It's so exciting isnt it?' I tried to reply
'Yes it is' but of course all that came out was baby mumour. The light turned green and she continued driving on. I wasn't sure what to expect from today, I had been cast in diaper commerical. There was nothing I could do about it, I guess that's just what comes along when your in this situation. I just hoped it wouldnt be too humiliating, from the diaper commercials I'd seen on TV I guess it was pot luck.
For the commerical my mother had dressed me in the diaper brand I would be modeling for, a white singlet and a blue sweater since it was a coldish day, and a pair of runners. I had not pants on, I don't think I'd worn proper pants ever since I'd been in this situation, which I kinda liked. It gave me the feeling of being naked without actually being such.
That was one of my fears about today, the fact that I'll most likely be naked in front of total strangers, I know they only see me as 2 years old, I still see myself as the 16 year old I am. Which means it is still humilating for me to be naked in front of other people.
Luclkly the only times I'd been naked in front of people other than my mother was her friends when they came over and she changed me in front of them, and when my extended family visted where she did the same, and the time she took me to the beach and made me swim naked. That was argulbly the most humilating part of this experince, random people walking past staring at you with nowhere to hide. I don't care if they only see me as 2, it still feels like their looking at me in my current age. I guess I should be used to situations like that, being in this baby state for 6 months now, but its still a bit confronting sometimes. But would never have turned down this oppurnituy.

Okay Andy were here, my mother had parked the car and was now getting out. She went to the back oft he car to get my pusher out, and then unbuckled me from my booster and inserted me into the pusher. 'Okay Andy time to go in'. We went inside the building and my mum went to the reception desk to check in 'Hi were here for the diaper commerical, this is my son Andy'. The receptionst looked down
"oh I can see why they cast him, he's adoreable!' I giggled to myself, I loved being told I was a cute baby. 'Go right through to the room on the far left, that's the set,' she said pointing a set automated double doors. After we went through the doors it seemed like forever until we got to where the set was. As we entered the set the people in the room turned around. There for four of them, two girls and two guys. The two girls looked very young and attractive, definatly under 30. Suddently the though of being naked in front of them didnt scare me anymore. The girl at the front ame and greeted my mother 'Hi you must be Natilie, I'm Trisha the director, and this is Tom our camera opertor, and Nathan our boom mike operator'
'Hi,' both men replied.
'And you,' she said looking down at me 'You must be Andy, your just as cute in real life as you were in photo' she had a huge grin on her face. SuddenlyI became all aroused and felt a rush of blood down there. 'And over here is you mummy for the commerical, Leah,'
'Hi baby Andy, where gonna have a fun time today,'
'Oh my good you are hot as,' I said to her. The translation to her was just a few giggles from me and she rubbed me on the head. I now had a full erection, I was now very exicted about this commerical.
'Okay so how this is going to work is that I'll get Andy ready for the commerical by putting him in the correct diaper for the commerical, then well get started on the changing table scenes. So I wasn't going to just be in a diaper on a TV commerical I was going to be changed as well. This was a bit unsettling, because my genetails weren't just going to be on show to these four people in the room, they could possibly on show the whole country. I didn't know in the finished cut whatthey were going to show, hoopefully theyll want to maintain some modesty for me and edit out the shots showing my private bits. I know my only seen as a two year old, but mI'm still not comfortable with my bits being on show for the whole nation to see. Trisha took me out of the pusher and layed me on the table.
'If he's wet I'll change him now' she said to everybody. It's to distracting for Leah to be cleaning him and doing the shots at the same time'. The other four seemed to nod in approvemnt. I hadn't wet myself that morning, though now I wish I had, I liked the idea of her touching me on my penis, the though of it already gave me an erections. She began by taking my shoes and socks off and then moved on to sweater and my singlet, I was now just wearing my diaper. She proceeded to undo the tabs at the side and then stopped for a moment looking at me, she then lifted the front of the diaper exposing my naked penis, hard and erect. She then put her hand underneth my body and put it in between my butt cheaks and used them to lift my body up. The sensation from it was nice, after being changed and being touched in my private area by my mother for six months, so having it done by a hot young female was very much getting my pulse racing. She then disposed of the diaper in the bin next to the change table, I was now completly naked in front of her, if only she could see the huge erection I had she'd know how hot I thought she was. She then reached for the pile of diapers next to the change table a took one off the top, she lifted my butt again putting her hand between my cheeks again, I quivered again, she then put the front of the diaper over my privae parts and then taped me up, my erections was still rock hard. I had forgotten how attrractive women can be, Trisa was one stunner.
'So Andy is now all ready to be star,' she said to me as she rubbed her nose against mine 'Okay Leah were ready to shoot now' she continued moving away from the table. Leah proceed to walk over to the change table standing writing in front of it, looking down with a smile on her face. Now I had butterfiles in my stomach as well, I was glad that Leah was the one who would change me, I mean Trisha was hot but Leah was something else. 'Okay we are just about ready to roll now,' said Trisha from the directors chair 'Tom, Nathan, both ready?'.
'Yes', the both replied.Suddenly before Trish said anything else Leah leaned over me and put her mouth to ear and whispered it in
'I know that your really a 16 year old, I heard what you said about me before, and a I saw the massive erection that you had'. I was now in a state of total arousion, this girl could see for who I was, and by the way she whispered to me and smiled at me again, I got the feeling that she felt the same why to, and in a moments time she was going to be changing me, and because she saw that I was a red-blooded 16 year old boy, completed with a fully developed set of abs, hair on face, legs, snail trail, and of course down there, I knew she was going to make this change enjoyable for me.

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This is very good - interesting format used as well, I've not seen it used this well before. Aside from a few grammatical errors, keep it up
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We don't like shit from deeker.
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Where's the Deeker aspect of this?

Seems like some sort of regression story to me, not some sort of pedo-twelve-year-old-diaperz story.
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Uhh... why does a 16 year old look like a two year old and is thus treated like a baby? How do two-year-olds get erections? Why would a commercial show a naked baby, which would violate FCC guidelines? Why is the whole story just a pile of text? Why does much of the dialogue have no quotation marks? Did you spellcheck?

I think you should go back, answer the questions, and then post the story again. Because right now it's rather trashy, and the whole part on erections crosses the line we have for stories. This is an all-ages site.
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Uhh... why does a 16 year old look like a two year old and is thus treated like a baby? How do two-year-olds get erections? Why would a commercial show a naked baby, which would violate FCC guidelines? Why is the whole story just a pile of text? Why does much of the dialogue have no quotation marks? Did you spellcheck?

I think you should go back, answer the questions, and then post the story again. Because right now it's rather trashy, and the whole part on erections crosses the line we have for stories. This is an all-ages site.
I think we don't know that for a reason. I assume it's part of the "mystery" and "How did he get into such a situation?" aspect of the story.

Good point.

I didn't know that, interesting!

Piles of text are common, blah.

That would be thinking, I believe? Perhaps italics would be in order?

Can't answer that one.
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Uhh... why does a 16 year old look like a two year old and is thus treated like a baby? How do two-year-olds get erections? Why would a commercial show a naked baby, which would violate FCC guidelines? Why is the whole story just a pile of text? Why does much of the dialogue have no quotation marks? Did you spellcheck?

I think you should go back, answer the questions, and then post the story again. Because right now it's rather trashy, and the whole part on erections crosses the line we have for stories. This is an all-ages site.
For your infomation the boy is physically 16 year old, he is just viewed by others as a two year old, its part of the spell he is under. He is having the erections because he is a normal 16 year old boy who finds the young girls attractive, they cant see the erections because as you said two year olds don't have erections. Also this is a story written from the 1st person point of view, so he is not aware of all the FCC regulations, he is just aware of what is being filmed of him.

The accusation you are making I find very offensive as it clear my story is about a 16 year old boy, who is attracted to these two girls but they can't see that because they think hes just a baby. If a explict content warning is warrented for the story, then I will put one up.
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What aspect makes this deeker-ish?

Ignore these idiots staircase, you've worked hard for this, keep it coming.
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For your infomation the boy is physically 16 year old, he is just viewed by others as a two year old, its part of the spell he is under. He is having the erections because he is a normal 16 year old boy who finds the young girls attractive, they cant see the erections because as you said two year olds don't have erections. Also this is a story written from the 1st person point of view, so he is not aware of all the FCC regulations, he is just aware of what is being filmed of him.

The accusation you are making I find very offensive as it clear my story is about a 16 year old boy, who is attracted to these two girls but they can't see that because they think hes just a baby. If a explict content warning is warrented for the story, then I will put one up.
Just gotta say: It isn't clear at all, man. I just took up a "Benefit of the doubt" stance and assumed it would all be explained later on.

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What aspect makes this deeker-ish?

Ignore these idiots staircase, you've worked hard for this, keep it coming.
No, ignoring criticism makes you look like a stubborn douche.

Answer the questions, explain yourself in a way that makes them see what you're trying to do.

If it works, you're that much better because of it.
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Why would a commercial show a naked baby, which would violate FCC guidelines?
If that's a violation, it must be a somewhat recent one...I can remember seeing plenty of baby's butts on diaper commercials in the past. Now of course full frontal nudity is different. And maybe with people being afraid of pedophiles nowadays, maybe there was a change in the rules about what's allowed to be shown. But in that case maybe the story could be set in the past.
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