Prison Of Diapers

**JackV** · 09-04-2009

"You James watz up, See that new kid over there he has like the biggest but ever". "Holy c**p". James thought it really was a massive bulge on his but. To big to be real he new something was odd and James had a perfect idea to expose what it was. James slowly strolled over to the new kid he walked up to him and ask "How ya doing I James you new". "Yes, My names Blake" James looked down and saw something that he did not know what it was at first but after about 5 seconds he saw it was A diaper James new he could have his chance he pulled down Blake's pants to expose a disposable diaper. Everybody started to laugh and laugh even harder a yellow patch formed on the Diaper. Soon a teacher noticed James honestly did not car he pulled down peoples pant's Manny times before.
The teacher grabbed him by his arm and pulled him to the office were he was thrown into the principles office were he soon walked in "Now son I am very disappointed with you and I am not sure if you know this put what you did is harassment and this is not the first time you have done this so I am afraid I am expelling you from this school district"."What" James retorted to the principle. Just as he said this a tall blond hair blue eyed young women walked in with Jame's mom. Now we have called in a social worker as you know by law you have to attend school so considering what you did and how many times you have done it The super attendant and your mom have decided you need to be retrained in all aspects.
With that the social worker grabbed Jame's arm and dragged him out of school with a few tears cumming out of his eyes. And put him in the backseat his mom ran up to the car crying "Dam you Jame's you don't know when to stop but you really are gonna be in a shock to what's to come".
As she Jame's mom was crying the car drove off. They had been driving for about 4 hours and Jame's started to fall asleep.
He woke up as the care hit the brakes they were going through a long road with Jame's looked around there was a massive concrete building with a brick wall and fields of barbed wired fences and he noticed that they past a group of 5 soldiers how had M16's. "What the hell is this place James thought". James really was getting worried now they stopped in front of the building to really hot women identical to the social worker opened the door and grabbed Jame's out. Jame's struggled but to no avail "Now, now, now we don't want little Bwaby Jamie to be tranked do we". One of the nurses coed to Jame's James they draged him to a dark room dimly lit and both left.
It was at that moment Jame's realized he had pee really bad. The one of the nurse women walked in again and opened a draw "Um I really have to piss" James stammered "that's why we have these" She joyfully said as she turned around holding a disposable diaper.

Mitsukuni · 09-04-2009

1) Grammar
2) Paragraphs.

If you fix this, maybe more people would be willing to read your stories.

**JackV** · 09-04-2009

I'm a crap speller and I wrote this on a I phone so it does not allow me to paragraph or have a spell check

on with the story
"No no please anything" James screamed "uh, uh, uh" she calmly said she walked over and Jame's kicked her she did not even stutter. She pinned him down and ripped off his clothes. and Jame's started crying she slid the diaper under him and went to the draw and brought out a blue Onesie. James was still sobbing to notice she place it on him and strapped it under his diapered bum. "That's a good baby" She coed She picked him up and walked down a to a room that read incubator as they went in Jame's notice other boys his age sucking a pacifier and some that were three she placed him in crib and shoved a pacifier in his mouth and turned a knob that said (Age set 5) Jame's slowly felt tired and the started to suck the pacifier he slowly went to sleep.
When Jame's woke up he was shocked to find he had wet and soiled his diaper Jame's immediately started to cry then he realized what was happening to him he tried to regain control but all he did was cry harder. 6 nurses came in and picked each kid up and took them out and led them down to a hallway that read came in Take Home his mom was standing his mom was standing there with the boy he panced and that boy's mom. Then Jame's noticed a stroller he struggled as the nurse placed him in it and toke off his onsie to expose his still wet a solid diaper and a short T-shirt James cried in embarrassment sobbing like a baby he now was his mom had actually put him up for adoption before his neighbors moved and they were moving here so they could live with there new soon in his brought up town. Come on baby let's get you changed after we get home Jame's was rolled out by his new brother and and mom to his new home.

satyrical · 09-04-2009

I would suggest that perhaps writing a story on an iPhone would not be the best idea. I can barely tell what it's about.

Mandy · 09-04-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mitsukuni

1) Grammar
2) Paragraphs.

If you fix this, maybe more people would be willing to read your stories.

I agree completely... I kinda got bored rather quick. Also moves really fast

Pojo · 09-04-2009

That's it the shortest story I have ever read. Oh, and iPhones do have spell checks...

baconbit · 10-04-2009

You need to use gramme and paragrahs. No writting story's straight on here please get on you computer and use MS word or open office. Oh and this sory is so unrelistic and flawed.

Mesmerale · 10-04-2009

I've got to agree with everything said about this already.

For some reason, I've really been in the "Editing" mood lately.. Some here might have already noticed that on other threads. ^_^ So I really want to edit this and post it..

Not sure if that'd be a great idea though.

It wouldn't be a habit or anything. It'd be kind of like a "Get out of jail" card. One use only, then you're on your own.

Point Blanch · 10-04-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by JackV

Dam you Jame's

This story could do with a plot that made sense.

Dreamaker · 10-04-2009

What do you mean the iPhone has no spell checker or paragraphs? It does. You use the "return" button (to the right of the spacebar) to make a new line. The spell checker goes from word to word.

FYI, more than half my posts have been written on my iPod Touch.

09-04-2009	#1 (permalink)
JackV Newbie Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 3 Threads: 1 Reputation: 0	Prison Of Diapers "You James watz up, See that new kid over there he has like the biggest but ever". "Holy c**p". James thought it really was a massive bulge on his but. To big to be real he new something was odd and James had a perfect idea to expose what it was. James slowly strolled over to the new kid he walked up to him and ask "How ya doing I James you new". "Yes, My names Blake" James looked down and saw something that he did not know what it was at first but after about 5 seconds he saw it was A diaper James new he could have his chance he pulled down Blake's pants to expose a disposable diaper. Everybody started to laugh and laugh even harder a yellow patch formed on the Diaper. Soon a teacher noticed James honestly did not car he pulled down peoples pant's Manny times before. The teacher grabbed him by his arm and pulled him to the office were he was thrown into the principles office were he soon walked in "Now son I am very disappointed with you and I am not sure if you know this put what you did is harassment and this is not the first time you have done this so I am afraid I am expelling you from this school district"."What" James retorted to the principle. Just as he said this a tall blond hair blue eyed young women walked in with Jame's mom. Now we have called in a social worker as you know by law you have to attend school so considering what you did and how many times you have done it The super attendant and your mom have decided you need to be retrained in all aspects. With that the social worker grabbed Jame's arm and dragged him out of school with a few tears cumming out of his eyes. And put him in the backseat his mom ran up to the car crying "Dam you Jame's you don't know when to stop but you really are gonna be in a shock to what's to come". As she Jame's mom was crying the car drove off. They had been driving for about 4 hours and Jame's started to fall asleep. He woke up as the care hit the brakes they were going through a long road with Jame's looked around there was a massive concrete building with a brick wall and fields of barbed wired fences and he noticed that they past a group of 5 soldiers how had M16's. "What the hell is this place James thought". James really was getting worried now they stopped in front of the building to really hot women identical to the social worker opened the door and grabbed Jame's out. Jame's struggled but to no avail "Now, now, now we don't want little Bwaby Jamie to be tranked do we". One of the nurses coed to Jame's James they draged him to a dark room dimly lit and both left. It was at that moment Jame's realized he had pee really bad. The one of the nurse women walked in again and opened a draw "Um I really have to piss" James stammered "that's why we have these" She joyfully said as she turned around holding a disposable diaper.

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09-04-2009	#2 (permalink)
Mitsukuni what is this i dont even Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: The Darkside of the Moon Age: 16 Posts: 752 Threads: 29 Gallery Uploads: 8 Wiki Edits: 1 Blog Entries: 2 Reputation: 13	1) Grammar 2) Paragraphs. If you fix this, maybe more people would be willing to read your stories.

09-04-2009	#3 (permalink)
JackV Newbie Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: New Jersey, USA Posts: 3 Threads: 1 Reputation: 0	I'm a crap speller and I wrote this on a I phone so it does not allow me to paragraph or have a spell check on with the story "No no please anything" James screamed "uh, uh, uh" she calmly said she walked over and Jame's kicked her she did not even stutter. She pinned him down and ripped off his clothes. and Jame's started crying she slid the diaper under him and went to the draw and brought out a blue Onesie. James was still sobbing to notice she place it on him and strapped it under his diapered bum. "That's a good baby" She coed She picked him up and walked down a to a room that read incubator as they went in Jame's notice other boys his age sucking a pacifier and some that were three she placed him in crib and shoved a pacifier in his mouth and turned a knob that said (Age set 5) Jame's slowly felt tired and the started to suck the pacifier he slowly went to sleep. When Jame's woke up he was shocked to find he had wet and soiled his diaper Jame's immediately started to cry then he realized what was happening to him he tried to regain control but all he did was cry harder. 6 nurses came in and picked each kid up and took them out and led them down to a hallway that read came in Take Home his mom was standing his mom was standing there with the boy he panced and that boy's mom. Then Jame's noticed a stroller he struggled as the nurse placed him in it and toke off his onsie to expose his still wet a solid diaper and a short T-shirt James cried in embarrassment sobbing like a baby he now was his mom had actually put him up for adoption before his neighbors moved and they were moving here so they could live with there new soon in his brought up town. Come on baby let's get you changed after we get home Jame's was rolled out by his new brother and and mom to his new home.

09-04-2009	#4 (permalink)
satyrical The Writer Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: NS, Canada Age: 21 Posts: 1,038 Threads: 13 Blog Entries: 5 Reputation: 39	I would suggest that perhaps writing a story on an iPhone would not be the best idea. I can barely tell what it's about.

09-04-2009	#6 (permalink)
Pojo No more cakes, sorry. Donor Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Virginia Age: 19 Posts: 6,538 Threads: 108 Wiki Edits: 121 Blog Entries: 15 Reputation: 93	That's it the shortest story I have ever read. Oh, and iPhones do have spell checks...

10-04-2009	#7 (permalink)
baconbit Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Maryland USA Age: 15 Posts: 1,651 Threads: 30 Blog Entries: 6 Reputation: 13	You need to use gramme and paragrahs. No writting story's straight on here please get on you computer and use MS word or open office. Oh and this sory is so unrelistic and flawed.

10-04-2009	#8 (permalink)
Mesmerale Simply Mesmerizing Donor Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Maryland, USA Age: 17 Posts: 2,347 Threads: 21 Gallery Uploads: 3 Wiki Edits: 1 Blog Entries: 3 Reputation: 70	I've got to agree with everything said about this already. For some reason, I've really been in the "Editing" mood lately.. Some here might have already noticed that on other threads. ^_^ So I really want to edit this and post it.. Not sure if that'd be a great idea though. It wouldn't be a habit or anything. It'd be kind of like a "Get out of jail" card. One use only, then you're on your own.

10-04-2009	#10 (permalink)
Dreamaker Clever Title Pending Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Ireland Age: 16 Posts: 766 Threads: 55 Gallery Uploads: 12 Wiki Edits: 40 Blog Entries: 42 Reputation: 17	What do you mean the iPhone has no spell checker or paragraphs? It does. You use the "return" button (to the right of the spacebar) to make a new line. The spell checker goes from word to word. FYI, more than half my posts have been written on my iPod Touch.