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Old 27-02-2008   #1 (permalink)
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As the car pulled up to the resort I was filled with joy, 2 whole days away from home, thought phil. Phil and his family unloaded there luggage and had the valet service park their car for them.

“Welcome to Cast Away Bay” said the greater at the hotel.

As Phil’s parent checked in at the lobby, Phil decided to check out the lobby of the hotel. He went into the convenience store in the lobby and started to look around. Phil bought a pack of mentos breath mints. While paying for them he noticed a girl from his class in the store.

“Hey Lexie”. Shouted Phil

“Oh hey Phil, you’re staying here too? That awesome”!

“Ya, we should hock up later”.

“Alright mabey, I’ll talk to you later”.

Phil then went with his family to their hotel room on the ground floor. Phil put on his bathing suit and headed for the indoor water park.

While splashing around in the wave pool for about 15 minutes he saw Lexie over by the pools edge and decided to go say hi to her.
They talked for awhile and rode some water slides together. It was now 5 o’ clock and they both needed to get back to their rooms with there parents to go get some dinner. They said goodbye and parted ways.

Phil and his family went to a bar and grill in the hotel. Phil decided to order a steak dinner. The steak got to the table and it was HUGE.

“Wow that’s a big steak, I remember when you were only 6 and you were so picky with what you ate, now ten years later look at you, you’re eating a steak dinner.” Said his mom Carol.

“Mom it’s not like I haven’t ever had a steak before” Replied Phil.

After eating dinner he and his family went back to the room, while leaving Phil saw Lexie and her family come into the same restaurant. Phil bent over to tie his shoe and saw Lexie go by. He tilted his head up and noticed the white back of a diaper sticking up about a quarter of an inch out of Lexie jeans. Phil left in confusion.
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good start, keep it going, and maybe make the chapters a lil bit longer
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ya i know, that was just a preview, more comming soon
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When will you be posting the next part?
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IDK i have LOTS of stuff to do right now, but i'll make time!
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