So I've been working on a screenplay now for a long time entitled "Canine Odyssey" (no connection to Homer) and finished it today at 90 pages (same length as Shrek). Tell me what you think. Canines in this movie have human like abilities.
Rivera Toomey - The protagonist of the film, he is a German Shepherd who often saves Durbis from getting in trouble.
Durbis McNulley - Rivera's jail mate and good friend. He is a overweight Mastiff/Bloodhound mix.
Satoru Najamata - The antagonist of the film, Satoru is a Akita who is a police detective that wants Rivera dead.
Marissa Flanegan - A owner of her own trash business, Marissa is a Saluki that becomes a love of Rivera's.
Akio Tarahashi - A accomplice of Satoru's, Akio is a Shar Pei who wants to prove he is intimidating despite his size and looks.
Jacklyn Flanegan - A sister of Marissa's, Jacklyn has a caring but almost too trustful of nature.
Now what I need help with is a logline that has a nice hook to it. It is one or two sentences long.