So, I had some free time today and worked on redrawing the whole thing on bigger paper. I still have yet to color but I'm satisfied with it in black and white right now. I was going to pick up some prismacolor coloring pencils the other day but they are a bit too expensive for me to afford right now. Instead I got some cheap markers and marker paper and might fiddle around with that. I have some crayola pencils but I'm not sure I want to use those.
So here's the old and new drawings, what do you think: