But if I do post it under a new thread its not violating the rules unless it violates the content rules which none of them do, because the only other person I told these two are my girlfriend and she finds them cute and thinks I should share them, plus I'm looking for constructive criticism on my writing because I might take it up as a hobby, let me know because I don't want to cause problems on a site I enjoy.
Let us clarify: is this a story or a memory? How is it structured? Even with first person narration, it can still be a story based upon your experience if you are writing it to be one.
It is a story based off my memories in the first person and structured parts and chapters with each part containing 2 chapters, sorry I really hate being a pain like this I just want to make sure I'm following the rules