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Old 15-12-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Default Deeker vs. The *B/DL/Babyfur Community

Hello everyone! Thank you to Charlie F for the idea of this story.
I’m warning you now for mild violence, perversion, and multiple 4chan references.
Please keep in mind this is my first time writing a story like this, and it's meant for HUMOR because it's just the DRAFT, and I wrote it kinda quickly, so if anyone wants to rewrite it, feel free, because I have a feeling you’ll probably do a better job.
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Deeker.
The Enemy.
It was left to one to stop them for good.
And he was a Babyfur. A fox, to be exact. Diapers for justice, and ready to deliver a furry knuckle sandwich to the leader of Deeker, MFH, and bring revenge to the *B/DL/Fur community.
His name was Zack. And he was ready to kick some perverted ass.

Zack entered the building where the Deeker community held their nasty meetings, discussing “sightings” of little boys in diapers, and fapping over the pictures members gathered. Zack, being strong in his Babyfur cuteness, stepped into the room, and acted as cute as possible.
All members in the room turned around, some in the middle of their disgusting fapping, some covered in their own cum, and others filling out reports of their “Sightings”, where they most likely raped a boy in his diapers. Some of them even drooled just looking at the fox.
Zack opened his arms, as if asking for a hug. The members looked at eachother, as if a miracle had just happened. A fur-covered, diaper wearing, miracle. They summoned their leader, who came upon them through a puff of white smoke. He was disgusting. A large man; fat and with a stubbly beard. He looked at the fur, and walked tword him, arms reaching out and hands grabbing, just ready to take the whole fur in.
Zack let him come close, then he smirked and pulled out an M84 from behind him. None of the members saw it; as they were too distracted by his Babyfur-ness
MFH was shocked; Zack let fire. “Die, you pervert!” he shouted, as he fired multiple shots. MFH ran like hell away, but he was shot multiple times.
The members ran after Zack, trying to stop him; but Zack turned around and shot all of them, and killed them all.
MFH took this opportunity to run and call for /b/lackup ((That’s 4chan talk; it means calling in all from the /b/ board from 4chan—Katie)).
Zack turned around and threw his M84 down; for he was out of bullets. He reached into his diaper, and pulled out…a few grenades! He took the ring out of the first one, and threw it at MFH, knowing his fatness would slow him down enough to give time to set the grenade to explode.
It exploded, and blew up in MFH’s face, but it was still not enough. For he had the fapping power of his /b/rothers ((/b/rothers are the members of /b/--Katie)), powering him to a level of over 9000. Suddenly, the far left wall crashed down, and multiple 4channers flooded the room.
Zack was tackled down by Pedobear, and Mudkip used its watergun on Zack, making him soaked, and causing him to wet himself. MFH stood above Zack, and looked down at him.
“So what are you going to do next, little boy?”
Zack thought for a moment, and looked back up at MFH. “I’m going to get my revenge.” He said, and squeezed his eyes shut.
“What the hell?” MFH backed away from him.
Zack used his Incontinence Bomb, which caused a huge atomic explosion to blow up the place, killing everyone, including MFH.

The building was on fire, and in ruins. Zack emerged from the rubble, heavily wounded, and he looked up at the light shining down on him.

“I need a change, Daddy.” He said, and walked on.

He was a Hero never to be forgotten.
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Thank you for reading my story, and I hoped you enjoyed it!

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This story is....fucking awesome
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All hail the conquering Hero. Great story you should take more time and lengthen it.
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Awesome first draft. This is a good nugget of a story you could flesh out and make truly spectacular. Obviously this is the end of the story. I can't wait to read how it starts. Very good!
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That was cute.
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I'm a tad disgusted with the amount of hate this forum shows toward Deeker, nevertheless a good story, however.
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I'm a tad disgusted with the amount of hate this forum shows toward Deeker, nevertheless a good story, however.
I personally have nothing against Deeker, I just took a request.
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I'm a tad disgusted with the amount of hate this forum shows toward Deeker, nevertheless a good story, however.
UM people at deeker and other such sites make us look like freaks and pedos when a good bit of us aren't. How do you expect people not to show hate?
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