Laceys Big Change

[Todd]

Mandi, this is still the story I think that really started to show your abilities as a writer. You did a fantastic job on this one.

[Kovalchuk]

Wow! That was such a great story! It was fun to read, had a good storyline, and had very few inconsistencies. Your stories are really awesome Mandi!

P.S. I'm repping you for that

[Abby_Cullen]

Thank-you, very much, Russian, I'm glad you took the time to read it!

Thanks to you too Todd!

[legobaby]

I got up quite early in the morning just to read the ending and it was FANTASTIC!!!

EDIT:
47th post for me (my house number)

[Abby_Cullen]

Aww. glad you liked it so much!

[Eclipse]

Well this is the last story in the completed section that I had to finish, I just finished it and well it was phonomenal! I have not read any of your unfinished stories yet but this is by far your best one on this part of the forum. I too like Rance, was very impressed when I saw you wrote the first part at 12 and the second part at 15, my mouth basically dropped. I pretty much agreed with everything Rance said. Also yes, I even cried when I was reading Lacey talking to her Dad's tombstone, my eyes were watery by the end of the first sentence, tears streaming by the second sentence, and by the end of that pragraph I was pretty much sobbing. I am a pretty sensitive guy but that is only the second time that I can recall crying over a story I was reading, so very well done young lady!
It is a shame you do not want to make a sequel but, I can kind of understand you wanting to keep it original to teasure your original work to remember forever. I do have one qeustion for you though....was any of this at all based off anything in your life, besides fantsies, or based off anyone elses life you knew? Just wondering because this was the type of infantilist story that was very realistic to the point that this all could seriously happen.

Anyways thank you so much for the story sweetie. I think you have inspired me to write a story of my own. Just wait until you see mine, I have a very realistic plot planned like your story was, but totally different.

EDIT: Now I know where you get the copius amounts of rep from, these wonderful stories! haha!

[Abby_Cullen]

Awwwww! Thanks Eclipse! Yes... seems I could write better when I was way younger, than I do now, it's kinda pathetic, lol!


All of my stories have a truth quality to them, however I don't reveal what those are. Places - events - people - emotions; they are all based on something. Whether it be fantasy or my life. I've said before, if you took the right parts from my stories, you would know who I am, what I think, feel, and what my life is all about, and on that fact alone, is the reason why I don't reveal which parts are true, and which are fiction.

Again, thanks for the compliments! I can't wait to read your story!

[renegade-a]

i think your a perfect writer but
if you think you used to writ better when you were younger its probly cuz u had a bigger imagination

[ThatKid]

lol i haven't even read the whole story...I haven't even read past page 1 and it is already amazing...I just wish I could write like that....lol...if you could do better when u were little u must of have been perfect.

Edit: ok I finished reading it and...wow .....to think that you wrote most of it at age 12....that is just astounding....and I got a little teary-eyed in some parts to....you are just an outstanding writer.

[Abby_Cullen]

Thanks, ThatKid... and I don't think it's that renegade, I'm thinking it was because I had way more time back then, than I do now.