"The Girl of My Dreams" - Page 6

Mouse · 24-07-2009

Good work spellongs and punctuation was nearly flawless and it was a truly enjoyable read. Please write more in the future

**crissy** · 24-07-2009

wow an great story,, really churned up some old emotions of mine

kj83 · 26-07-2009

great story, loved it!

diaperedteenager · 05-10-2009

Again great work boy howdy that was a long story...86 pages in word to be exact

168 double spaced!!! This is a short novel, lol.

Mazza · 11-10-2009

ive read this story about 15 times and i must say that it was worth reading every time

absolutely love your story

leaky · 11-10-2009

I hope some of this was true. The story was very sensitive and moving. The characters were well developed and true to life.

**spikerbond** · 3 Weeks Ago

Love the story dude, its one of the best i have ever read

teddy564339 · 3 Weeks Ago

It's been a while since I last posted...so I just wanted to say thanks to the people who put nice comments...I always appreciate hearing them.

gnd567 · 1 Week Ago

Great story. All of your stories are.

marksparktbdl · 6 Days Ago

nice story mate

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24-07-2009	#51 (permalink)
Mouse Regular Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 28 Threads: 4 Reputation: 0	Good work spellongs and punctuation was nearly flawless and it was a truly enjoyable read. Please write more in the future

24-07-2009	#52 (permalink)
crissy Newbie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: New York, USA Posts: 1 Threads: 0 Reputation: 0	wow an great story,, really churned up some old emotions of mine

26-07-2009	#53 (permalink)
kj83 Regular Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: USA Posts: 23 Threads: 1 Reputation: 3	great story, loved it!

05-10-2009	#54 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Age: 17 Posts: 986 Threads: 298 Blog Entries: 14 Reputation: 1	Again great work boy howdy that was a long story...86 pages in word to be exact 168 double spaced!!! This is a short novel, lol.

11-10-2009	#55 (permalink)
Mazza Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Australia, South Australia Age: 16 Posts: 531 Threads: 19 Gallery Uploads: 6 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 7	ive read this story about 15 times and i must say that it was worth reading every time absolutely love your story

11-10-2009	#56 (permalink)
leaky Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: USA Posts: 2 Threads: 0 Reputation: 0	I hope some of this was true. The story was very sensitive and moving. The characters were well developed and true to life.

3 Weeks Ago	#57 (permalink)
spikerbond Newbie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: minnesota, us Posts: 6 Threads: 2 Reputation: 0	Love the story dude, its one of the best i have ever read

3 Weeks Ago	#58 (permalink)
teddy564339 VIP Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: North Carolina, USA Posts: 521 Threads: 33 Reputation: 47	It's been a while since I last posted...so I just wanted to say thanks to the people who put nice comments...I always appreciate hearing them.

1 Week Ago	#59 (permalink)
gnd567 Regular Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Virginia, USA Age: 18 Posts: 127 Threads: 6 Reputation: 1	Great story. All of your stories are.

6 Days Ago	#60 (permalink)
marksparktbdl Regular Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: uk/hastings Age: 14 Posts: 23 Threads: 5 Reputation: 0	nice story mate