"The Girl of My Dreams"

[RedApple]

That was a fantastic, well written, enjoyable story. It would be nice if there was a follow up from this

[Lone_Wolf]

Great story a bit long but great.

[emonkey0015]

Awesome! not too long either. it was good night-time writing. i think i wet myself like seven times reading it.

[Dark Bringer]

It was so good!!! I liked how the main focus is not so much about wearing diapers but about being honest and accepting yourself. I thought when it mentioned they did everything, I thought he was going to baby Kylie. I just loved her caring personality. I can't believe Kylie is a fictional character, she sounds a lot like the girl of my dreams.
And another thing I liked is how they were able to be intimate without being sexual. That was always something that bothered me when I was younger how it seemed like you could only be close to someone you're dating. And I now hate this idea I had that you couldn't see someone else naked or else it was a mature sexual thing. It was two kids acting innocently. I just think that too much stuff is looked at with a sexual angle these days. I feel like it discourages people from being close and open with each other.

[teddy564339]

Originally Posted by Dark Bringer

It was so good!!! I liked how the main focus is not so much about wearing diapers but about being honest and accepting yourself. I thought when it mentioned they did everything, I thought he was going to baby Kylie. I just loved her caring personality. I can't believe Kylie is a fictional character, she sounds a lot like the girl of my dreams.
And another thing I liked is how they were able to be intimate without being sexual. That was always something that bothered me when I was younger how it seemed like you could only be close to someone you're dating. And I now hate this idea I had that you couldn't see someone else naked or else it was a mature sexual thing. It was two kids acting innocently. I just think that too much stuff is looked at with a sexual angle these days. I feel like it discourages people from being close and open with each other.

Ha ha...what's so interesting about all of that is that this story is based so much on my own personal experiences and desires. I'm glad Kylie seemed real, because I based her (or at least, Eric's perception of her) on somebody that I knew and had similar feelings for.

In addition, the lack of sexuality is probably also related to my own complicated sexuality, which I won't get into here...but again, another thing that is based on my own personal experience.

So yeah...that was a really good post for me to read, because it makes me feel like I successfully got across my intentions for this story.

[llrahj]

هذه القصة كانت مكتوبة بشكل جيد للغاية
Translation: (This story was very well written!) I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for posting it!