"The Girl of My Dreams" - Page 3

ThunderMa14 · 27-09-2008

Nice job, the plot flowed smoothly, and it ended well.

A+

**Craig** · 28-09-2008

Brilliant story!! It sure was different than most others. My heart sunk when I found out that Kylie was going out with Josh but although it's probably not the perfect little relationship and ending everyone was expecting and probably hoping for it was still a beautiful ending. Well done!

Craig.

bigpapa22 · 18-10-2008

i read that story word for word, and loved every part of it. i actually found myself in the part of Eric. I'm not into wearing diapers, but I'm more of a daddy figure, with girls, but for some reason reading this story felt different to me. Like it was very calming and actually took away a lot of my own problems. And i actually felt some pain when Eric came out and told her how he loved her...and she rejected him. That part of the story would have made it so much better if she would have fallen for him...it actually disappointed me. But anyways thank you for the story I really enjoyed it!

Ganymede · 19-10-2008

Agreed with the above. I really enjoyed this story, but I felt really close to Eric after he was rejected by Kylie, honestly I felt depressed and it seemed unusually too real for me. Would've loved to see them together, but the rest of the story was great.

BabyGrizzy · 19-10-2008

Absolutely awesome. 'Nuff said.

diaperdei · 20-10-2008

its just....amazing, the end nearly brought me to tears, this story is just...beyond words

teddy564339 · 20-10-2008

I'm glad that a lot of people felt and enjoyed the emotional aspect of the story, because that's the reason I wrote this story. I wanted people to feel the emotions Eric did. In fact...a lot of those feelings were actually inspired by my own feelings in a similar situation...so I used that to create the story. When I wrote it, I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to word things correctly and that it would come across forced or fake...especially because I think sometimes I get too repetitive in stories. So, I'm very pleased that people enjoyed that aspect of it. Thanks for the comments.

**diaperedteenager** · 01-11-2008

Amazing, just wounderful! I have never read such a great stroy. I loved the realisticness of the feelings felt by Eric.

**diaperedteenager** · 04-11-2008

I actually though, in the beginning that the story was real! Then reading on, realized thta it wasn't. GREAT STORY!!!!

teddy564339 · 04-11-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by diaperedteenager

I actually though, in the beginning that the story was real! Then reading on, realized thta it wasn't. GREAT STORY!!!!

That's nice to hear.

Like I said, I actually used some of my own past experiences and feelings to create the story, so I'm glad that it came across in it.

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27-09-2008	#21 (permalink)
ThunderMa14 Regular Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Connecticut, USA Posts: 117 Threads: 10 Reputation: 1	Nice job, the plot flowed smoothly, and it ended well. A+

28-09-2008	#22 (permalink)
Craig Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Manchester, England Age: 15 Posts: 149 Threads: 6 Gallery Uploads: 27 Wiki Edits: 6 Reputation: 3	Brilliant story!! It sure was different than most others. My heart sunk when I found out that Kylie was going out with Josh but although it's probably not the perfect little relationship and ending everyone was expecting and probably hoping for it was still a beautiful ending. Well done! Craig.

18-10-2008	#23 (permalink)
bigpapa22 Newbie Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: United States Posts: 1 Threads: 0 Reputation: 0	i read that story word for word, and loved every part of it. i actually found myself in the part of Eric. I'm not into wearing diapers, but I'm more of a daddy figure, with girls, but for some reason reading this story felt different to me. Like it was very calming and actually took away a lot of my own problems. And i actually felt some pain when Eric came out and told her how he loved her...and she rejected him. That part of the story would have made it so much better if she would have fallen for him...it actually disappointed me. But anyways thank you for the story I really enjoyed it!

19-10-2008	#24 (permalink)
Ganymede Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Las Vegas, NV Age: 17 Posts: 228 Threads: 21 Gallery Uploads: 9 Wiki Edits: 1 Reputation: 7	Agreed with the above. I really enjoyed this story, but I felt really close to Eric after he was rejected by Kylie, honestly I felt depressed and it seemed unusually too real for me. Would've loved to see them together, but the rest of the story was great.

19-10-2008	#25 (permalink)
BabyGrizzy Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: California, USA Age: 15 Posts: 560 Threads: 60 Gallery Uploads: 21 Wiki Edits: 5 Blog Entries: 1	Absolutely awesome. 'Nuff said.

20-10-2008	#26 (permalink)
diaperdei Regular Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: colorado,USA Age: 14 Posts: 211 Threads: 17 Gallery Uploads: 12 Blog Entries: 6 Reputation: 6	its just....amazing, the end nearly brought me to tears, this story is just...beyond words

20-10-2008	#27 (permalink)
teddy564339 Teddy bears for life! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: North Carolina, USA Posts: 201 Threads: 17	I'm glad that a lot of people felt and enjoyed the emotional aspect of the story, because that's the reason I wrote this story. I wanted people to feel the emotions Eric did. In fact...a lot of those feelings were actually inspired by my own feelings in a similar situation...so I used that to create the story. When I wrote it, I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to word things correctly and that it would come across forced or fake...especially because I think sometimes I get too repetitive in stories. So, I'm very pleased that people enjoyed that aspect of it. Thanks for the comments.

01-11-2008	#28 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Age: 16 Posts: 172 Threads: 45 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	Amazing, just wounderful! I have never read such a great stroy. I loved the realisticness of the feelings felt by Eric.

04-11-2008	#29 (permalink)
diaperedteenager Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: That Place, USA Age: 16 Posts: 172 Threads: 45 Blog Entries: 13 Reputation: -1	I actually though, in the beginning that the story was real! Then reading on, realized thta it wasn't. GREAT STORY!!!!