"The Girl of My Dreams" - Page 2

garnetandblack2107 · 25-08-2008

Wow that was a long story, but it was worth it. I wish I could meet a girl like that.

teddy564339 · 25-08-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by DannyTheNinja

Great job mate. Along with Mandi's stories I think yours was really the kind that was believable, this is what ADISC's stories are trademarked by and I'd like to be the first to welcome you to the ranks. Even your grammar and punctuation were good, and that's what I usually beat on people for.

$rep++;

--Danny

Yeah, my stories always have a certain degree of non-realism, because to me a diaper story that is completely realistic isn't fun to write. I do try to make them believable, and I hope I did that with this one, despite its extreme unlikelihood.

*cier* · 26-08-2008

very nice story, i enjoyed it very much

Dakota13 · 28-08-2008

That was a fantastic story i really enjoyed reading it A++.

LinusBlueSnow · 01-09-2008

Great Story, I just wished that he'd gotten the girl in the end or at least got a girl. Overall, good story, grammar looked pretty sound to me and while I wished he'd gotten a girl, this was a great story and I hope to see more of your work.

Little Tyler · 01-09-2008

yeah! you've started to post your stories

juriev · 01-09-2008

Great story. I would of liked to see the guy get the girl, but it is your story to tell and it was GREAT!

teddy564339 · 01-09-2008

Well, I think the reason I decided not to have him get the girl in the end is that it would make the story even more unrealistic than it already is. I mean, just the idea of there being a girl like this in the first place is pushing it...so I decided to sway from the totally predictable and go with a decently happy ending, even if it wasn't as happy as it could be.

I think I'll post a few more of my stories, though...since some of them I think have endings that are happier. But I'll see.

Todd · 03-09-2008

That was really a very well written and thought out story. I truly enjoyed it.

Like you I do not believe that any story of this nature can truly be realistic as people do not get babied like this.

I do feel though that you did a great job making it about as realistic as possible. The one part of the story that I felt could have been a bit off was when the parents were confronted with Eric's need to visit the Doctor. I know I would have to know why before I took any child to the Doctor. I have a hard time believing that any adult wouldn’t care enough to find out what the problem was first and then deciding that a Doctor visit was the correct approach.

Still that little part didn’t detract from the overall story. Again, I thought you did a great job on the story and I sure hope that you decide to share some of your other stories with us as well.

genbaby · 04-09-2008

Actually this story probably could happe without a few details. I meant the bet thing is belivable.

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25-08-2008	#11 (permalink)
garnetandblack2107 Regular Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: South Carolina, USA Age: 16 Posts: 156 Threads: 8 Reputation: 2	Wow that was a long story, but it was worth it. I wish I could meet a girl like that.

26-08-2008	#13 (permalink)
cier Lurker Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: sca Posts: 10 Threads: 1 Reputation: 0	very nice story, i enjoyed it very much

28-08-2008	#14 (permalink)
Dakota13 Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Mich Age: 15 Posts: 97 Threads: 2 Gallery Uploads: 1 Reputation: 1	That was a fantastic story i really enjoyed reading it A++.

01-09-2008	#15 (permalink)
LinusBlueSnow Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: New Jersey Age: 20 Posts: 79 Threads: 3 Reputation: 1	Great Story, I just wished that he'd gotten the girl in the end or at least got a girl. Overall, good story, grammar looked pretty sound to me and while I wished he'd gotten a girl, this was a great story and I hope to see more of your work.

01-09-2008	#16 (permalink)
Little Tyler Lurker Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 71 Threads: 5 Gallery Uploads: 1 Reputation: 1	yeah! you've started to post your stories

01-09-2008	#17 (permalink)
juriev Regular Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Kansas, USA Age: 15 Posts: 60 Threads: 6 Reputation: 0	Great story. I would of liked to see the guy get the girl, but it is your story to tell and it was GREAT!

01-09-2008	#18 (permalink)
teddy564339 Teddy bears for life! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: North Carolina, USA Posts: 135 Threads: 10	Well, I think the reason I decided not to have him get the girl in the end is that it would make the story even more unrealistic than it already is. I mean, just the idea of there being a girl like this in the first place is pushing it...so I decided to sway from the totally predictable and go with a decently happy ending, even if it wasn't as happy as it could be. I think I'll post a few more of my stories, though...since some of them I think have endings that are happier. But I'll see.

03-09-2008	#19 (permalink)
Todd Lurker Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Denver Posts: 87 Threads: 1 Reputation: 7	That was really a very well written and thought out story. I truly enjoyed it. Like you I do not believe that any story of this nature can truly be realistic as people do not get babied like this. I do feel though that you did a great job making it about as realistic as possible. The one part of the story that I felt could have been a bit off was when the parents were confronted with Eric's need to visit the Doctor. I know I would have to know why before I took any child to the Doctor. I have a hard time believing that any adult wouldn’t care enough to find out what the problem was first and then deciding that a Doctor visit was the correct approach. Still that little part didn’t detract from the overall story. Again, I thought you did a great job on the story and I sure hope that you decide to share some of your other stories with us as well.

04-09-2008	#20 (permalink)
genbaby Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Maryland USA Age: 14 Posts: 1,303 Threads: 26 Wiki Edits: 5 Blog Entries: 6 Reputation: 6	Actually this story probably could happe without a few details. I meant the bet thing is belivable.