The Weekend, a completed story Writen for Lizzie - Page 2

baby jester · 14-09-2008

thanks Pramrider, in all reality, i wrote this story in two weeks, i pretty much staid up all hours of the night, and even in school once (or twice, i cant remember) i am very surprised that there arent more errors in it.

Takashi · 14-09-2008

Keep it up Jester. It was a good story and I hope to see more in the future and I hope to see your relationship with Lizzie continue to thribe.

Lizzie · 18-09-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by genbaby

Now i want to see this story from lizz's point of veiw.

I'm gonna do that sometime soon

Secret · 19-09-2008

Great story I really liked it, the flow of it was easy to read and the dialouge was strung together very well.

Kudos

baby jester · 19-09-2008

thank you secret, I really apreciate all the positive critisism.

ThunderMa14 · 19-09-2008

Nice story, it would have been cool to see more of the girls from six flags

. I loved how the girls from sixflags sat in the stroler XD. Keep up the great work.

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14-09-2008	#11 (permalink)
baby jester Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: charlottesville, virginia usa Age: 15 Posts: 319 Threads: 32 Gallery Uploads: 36 Wiki Edits: 2 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 4	thanks Pramrider, in all reality, i wrote this story in two weeks, i pretty much staid up all hours of the night, and even in school once (or twice, i cant remember) i am very surprised that there arent more errors in it.

14-09-2008	#12 (permalink)
Takashi Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Brandon, FL Age: 17 Posts: 1,194 Threads: 57 Gallery Uploads: 9 Blog Entries: 14	Keep it up Jester. It was a good story and I hope to see more in the future and I hope to see your relationship with Lizzie continue to thribe.

19-09-2008	#14 (permalink)
Secret Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Maryland Shhh its a "secret"! Age: 16 Posts: 602 Threads: 33 Gallery Uploads: 22 Blog Entries: 7 Reputation: 7	Great story I really liked it, the flow of it was easy to read and the dialouge was strung together very well. Kudos

19-09-2008	#15 (permalink)
baby jester Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: charlottesville, virginia usa Age: 15 Posts: 319 Threads: 32 Gallery Uploads: 36 Wiki Edits: 2 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 4	thank you secret, I really apreciate all the positive critisism.

19-09-2008	#16 (permalink)
ThunderMa14 Regular Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Connecticut, USA Posts: 117 Threads: 10 Reputation: 1	Nice story, it would have been cool to see more of the girls from six flags . I loved how the girls from sixflags sat in the stroler XD. Keep up the great work.