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Old 14-09-2008   #11 (permalink)
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thanks Pramrider, in all reality, i wrote this story in two weeks, i pretty much staid up all hours of the night, and even in school once (or twice, i cant remember) i am very surprised that there arent more errors in it.
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Keep it up Jester. It was a good story and I hope to see more in the future and I hope to see your relationship with Lizzie continue to thribe.
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Now i want to see this story from lizz's point of veiw.
I'm gonna do that sometime soon
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Great story I really liked it, the flow of it was easy to read and the dialouge was strung together very well.

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thank you secret, I really apreciate all the positive critisism.
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Nice story, it would have been cool to see more of the girls from six flags . I loved how the girls from sixflags sat in the stroler XD. Keep up the great work.
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