Little Poetry

Tafshin · 10-08-2008

Quantum Blue,
Looking up at you,
Into the reflection of the inner me.
The child within me,
Yearning to begin anew.
So soon will this seem to fade?
Or shall I deem this bond sour-proof?
Clockwise we let our emotions curl,
Next to a powdered duck-shaped poof.
Confidence in my purpose,
Has been cultured, evolved.
Tempered shall your technique be,
As much as my resolve.

~Shin "C-B" P.

Cubby · 10-08-2008

wow that was really good
you get my two thumbs up on that one

Tafshin · 10-08-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mandy_Jonas

wow that was really good
you get my two thumbs up on that one

*scratches his head* Heh, thank you so much n_n.

I was feelin' in my zone a little tonight, I guess.
Do you know if anyone ever posts non-AB/TB/DL stories? Or if they're allowed even

Cubby · 10-08-2008

yeah you can ive seen a couple on here

Tafshin · 10-08-2008

Interesting. I guess I might have to pump out a few short stories pretty soon. I'm tired of being a lazy writer T_T

Cubby · 10-08-2008

oh well im sure they will be really good i cant wait

Tafshin · 10-08-2008

w00t, me neither. Thanks for the support xP

Cubby · 10-08-2008

no problem ^^

Atsu · 10-08-2008

Very well done ^^

10-08-2008	#1 (permalink)
Tafshin Regular Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The Internets Age: 21 Posts: 206 Threads: 10 Blog Entries: 4 Reputation: 7	Little Poetry Quantum Blue, Looking up at you, Into the reflection of the inner me. The child within me, Yearning to begin anew. So soon will this seem to fade? Or shall I deem this bond sour-proof? Clockwise we let our emotions curl, Next to a powdered duck-shaped poof. Confidence in my purpose, Has been cultured, evolved. Tempered shall your technique be, As much as my resolve. ~Shin "C-B" P.

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Cubby Lighting Designer Join Date: May 2008 Location: Texas, USA Age: 14 Posts: 609 Threads: 15 Gallery Uploads: 4 Blog Entries: 17	wow that was really good you get my two thumbs up on that one

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Cubby Lighting Designer Join Date: May 2008 Location: Texas, USA Age: 14 Posts: 609 Threads: 15 Gallery Uploads: 4 Blog Entries: 17	yeah you can ive seen a couple on here

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Tafshin Regular Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The Internets Age: 21 Posts: 206 Threads: 10 Blog Entries: 4 Reputation: 7	Interesting. I guess I might have to pump out a few short stories pretty soon. I'm tired of being a lazy writer T_T

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Cubby Lighting Designer Join Date: May 2008 Location: Texas, USA Age: 14 Posts: 609 Threads: 15 Gallery Uploads: 4 Blog Entries: 17	oh well im sure they will be really good i cant wait

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Tafshin Regular Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: The Internets Age: 21 Posts: 206 Threads: 10 Blog Entries: 4 Reputation: 7	w00t, me neither. Thanks for the support xP

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Cubby Lighting Designer Join Date: May 2008 Location: Texas, USA Age: 14 Posts: 609 Threads: 15 Gallery Uploads: 4 Blog Entries: 17	no problem ^^

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Atsu Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxnard, California Age: 16 Posts: 890 Threads: 33 Gallery Uploads: 10 Wiki Edits: 2 Blog Entries: 1	Very well done ^^