Spring Break

[brantxman]

Nice job!

[Todd]

I just finished reading this and really enjoyed the story.

I felt you did a great job with it and only wish you would have continued a little further into her life. Did she continue to relax while at college or did she gibe up that part of herself and relax only while back home? I would love to read more.

[blues_clues_baby]

That was a great story, I love the cabbage kids comming into it, my sister used to have them growing up and trated me like one also cause i was super small as a kid. Thanks for the memories. Good writing.

[Jag]

Not bad. I liked this story. It just really reflects on the innocence of youth.

[Lone_Wolf]

Really great story, i wish it could have been longer

[goodnitesgirl]

Originally Posted by blues_clues_baby

That was a great story, I love the cabbage kids comming into it, my sister used to have them growing up and trated me like one also cause i was super small as a kid. Thanks for the memories. Good writing.

Thanks Glad you liked it. I had some when I was growing up too but my parents tossed them one day while I was at school. I still remember how upset I felt and sed some of those emotions when writing the story.

[jeep]

That kind of reminds me of myself.

[Diaperdl102]

very nice story

[TenaTim]

Hi Goodnites Girl,

thanks for the great story. Would you allow me to translate it into german (with some modifications, since we have no spring break in Germany, and, regrettably, no Goodnites), and put it on a german tbdl story board? Of course with a credit to you as the original author?
Greetings,
Tim

[goodnitesgirl]

Originally Posted by TenaTim

Hi Goodnites Girl,

thanks for the great story. Would you allow me to translate it into german (with some modifications, since we have no spring break in Germany, and, regrettably, no Goodnites), and put it on a german tbdl story board? Of course with a credit to you as the original author?
Greetings,
Tim

Yeah that would be fine