Bad Times - Page 3

**centende** · 13-03-2008

do you like poke'mon?

Atsu · 14-03-2008

Somewhat, the games are awesome, and I watch the show from time to time. But I'm a total Digimon fan ^_^

Izzy · 15-03-2008

Digimon! Digital Monsters! Digimon are the Champions!

genbaby · 15-03-2008

I don't remember but like one second of an episode of digimon. DO they still air that?
I like pokemon. Yu gi oh is ok for those that know that and my two favrotes are naruto and if you can't gusse the other look at the avi.

Chromos · 15-03-2008

Good story Blake! It gave me an idea for my next story..

Atsu · 15-03-2008

Glad to hear Chromos, I'll be looking forward to your next one.

Chromos · 15-03-2008

In that case, I'l give you a sneak peek! (Don't tell anyone, ok? It's supposed to be a secret..)

It's hard to explain, but I want to write a story about a boy whose parents find out he's a TB, and over reacts, and send him to shrinks thinking there is something wrong with him. The more the story goes on, the more the boy doubts his own sanity, and it will eventually lead to..

Whoops, I almost gave away too much..

Atsu · 16-03-2008

That sounds good, can't wait.

*Todd* · 31-03-2008

It was a good story and for the most part it was well written. There were some little mistakes I noticed but nothing that really had a negative effect on reading the story. I think with a little more proofreading it would be a top notch work.

Atsu · 03-04-2008

Thanks for the tips, I'll actually proofread it soon, I also must get back to writing number two =\ as that was been WAAAY delayed

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13-03-2008	#21 (permalink)
centende Regular Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: usa Posts: 63 Threads: 5 Reputation: 0	do you like poke'mon?

14-03-2008	#22 (permalink)
Atsu Have Hope Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxnard, California Age: 16 Posts: 977 Threads: 34 Gallery Uploads: 12 Wiki Edits: 3 Blog Entries: 1	Somewhat, the games are awesome, and I watch the show from time to time. But I'm a total Digimon fan ^_^

15-03-2008	#23 (permalink)
Izzy VIP Silver Donor Historical Donor Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: New Haven, CT, USA Posts: 188 Threads: 9 Gallery Uploads: 6 Wiki Edits: 2	Digimon! Digital Monsters! Digimon are the Champions!

15-03-2008	#24 (permalink)
genbaby Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Maryland USA Age: 14 Posts: 1,320 Threads: 26 Wiki Edits: 5 Blog Entries: 6 Reputation: 8	I don't remember but like one second of an episode of digimon. DO they still air that? I like pokemon. Yu gi oh is ok for those that know that and my two favrotes are naruto and if you can't gusse the other look at the avi.

15-03-2008	#25 (permalink)
Chromos Beep-Beep-Click Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Davy Jones' locker Age: 19 Posts: 1,011 Threads: 43 Wiki Edits: 4 Blog Entries: 5	Good story Blake! It gave me an idea for my next story..

15-03-2008	#26 (permalink)
Atsu Have Hope Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxnard, California Age: 16 Posts: 977 Threads: 34 Gallery Uploads: 12 Wiki Edits: 3 Blog Entries: 1	Glad to hear Chromos, I'll be looking forward to your next one.

15-03-2008	#27 (permalink)
Chromos Beep-Beep-Click Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Davy Jones' locker Age: 19 Posts: 1,011 Threads: 43 Wiki Edits: 4 Blog Entries: 5	In that case, I'l give you a sneak peek! (Don't tell anyone, ok? It's supposed to be a secret..) It's hard to explain, but I want to write a story about a boy whose parents find out he's a TB, and over reacts, and send him to shrinks thinking there is something wrong with him. The more the story goes on, the more the boy doubts his own sanity, and it will eventually lead to.. Whoops, I almost gave away too much..

16-03-2008	#28 (permalink)
Atsu Have Hope Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxnard, California Age: 16 Posts: 977 Threads: 34 Gallery Uploads: 12 Wiki Edits: 3 Blog Entries: 1	That sounds good, can't wait.

31-03-2008	#29 (permalink)
Todd Lurker Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Denver Posts: 89 Threads: 1 Reputation: 7	It was a good story and for the most part it was well written. There were some little mistakes I noticed but nothing that really had a negative effect on reading the story. I think with a little more proofreading it would be a top notch work.

03-04-2008	#30 (permalink)
Atsu Have Hope Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Oxnard, California Age: 16 Posts: 977 Threads: 34 Gallery Uploads: 12 Wiki Edits: 3 Blog Entries: 1	Thanks for the tips, I'll actually proofread it soon, I also must get back to writing number two =\ as that was been WAAAY delayed