A Matter of Punishment - Page 2

blues_clues_baby · 23-09-2008

I thought this was really good, especially with the twist of going in reverse. Great writing kept me interested all the way through. Great job!

VR Wolf · 08-10-2008

Very nice, but maybe an epilouge is in order? or at least a flash back to kinda catch us up to speed. Otherwise excellent story

diaperdei · 08-10-2008

tricky to follow a little but it was a really nice story

kenshi · 07-11-2008

Didn't see that coming. I love when I can't guess what's going to happen. I loved the twist at the end I can't wait to read more of your stories.

PeeDiapers · 23-11-2008

Hmm...I wish you'd have made it longer. I like longer stories. But very good for what you have so far.

Fire2box · 23-11-2008

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Originally Posted by PeeDiapers

Hmm...I wish you'd have made it longer. I like longer stories. But very good for what you have so far.

(Massive Spoilers Below!)

I think I recall her saying it was supposed to be a short story. Also I feel if it was any longer it would only be about her getting diapers back or her parents still keeping her out of them. With the way it ends its up to the reader to guess wither she get's them back or not.

**njdiapers08** · 3 Weeks Ago

i realy did like the storrie

emurray · 2 Weeks Ago

i really enjoy ur storys. i think your a very talented writer

TechnoBaby · 2 Weeks Ago

I had never saw something like that before. Really cool. When they said "Pay attention, young lady," I tough it was a men and they were going to dress him like a girl.

**nanashi** · 6 Days Ago

interesting... with a twist!

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23-09-2008	#11 (permalink)
blues_clues_baby Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: nh,usa Posts: 159 Threads: 7 Gallery Uploads: 12 Blog Entries: 3 Reputation: 4	I thought this was really good, especially with the twist of going in reverse. Great writing kept me interested all the way through. Great job!

08-10-2008	#12 (permalink)
VR Wolf Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: California, USA Age: 15 Posts: 64 Threads: 3 Reputation: 0	Very nice, but maybe an epilouge is in order? or at least a flash back to kinda catch us up to speed. Otherwise excellent story

08-10-2008	#13 (permalink)
diaperdei Regular Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: colorado,USA Age: 14 Posts: 211 Threads: 17 Gallery Uploads: 12 Blog Entries: 6 Reputation: 6	tricky to follow a little but it was a really nice story

07-11-2008	#14 (permalink)
kenshi Regular Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: alberta canada Posts: 64 Threads: 2 Gallery Uploads: 2 Reputation: 1	Didn't see that coming. I love when I can't guess what's going to happen. I loved the twist at the end I can't wait to read more of your stories.

23-11-2008	#15 (permalink)
PeeDiapers Regular Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Minnesota, USA Posts: 93 Threads: 5 Reputation: 4	Hmm...I wish you'd have made it longer. I like longer stories. But very good for what you have so far.

3 Weeks Ago	#17 (permalink)
njdiapers08 Newbie Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: collingswood ,New Jersey , USA Age: 20 Posts: 11 Threads: 2 Reputation: 0	i realy did like the storrie

2 Weeks Ago	#18 (permalink)
emurray Newbie Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: B.C. Canada Posts: 16 Threads: 1 Reputation: 0	i really enjoy ur storys. i think your a very talented writer

2 Weeks Ago	#19 (permalink)
TechnoBaby Regular Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Caracas, Venezuela Posts: 122 Threads: 33 Gallery Uploads: 29 Reputation: 0	I had never saw something like that before. Really cool. When they said "Pay attention, young lady," I tough it was a men and they were going to dress him like a girl.

6 Days Ago	#20 (permalink)
nanashi Newbie Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: nowhere Posts: 15 Threads: 1 Reputation: 0	interesting... with a twist!