BabyLand (a poem)

KittyKat · 13-05-2008

This is one of my first AB poems....

Babyland

Come with me
To BabyLand.
Please, hurry up
And take my hand.

It won't take long
I promise you so.
Once you come in
You'll never want to go.

In BabyLand
Everyone can be
Whatever age
They choose to be.

For babies there are
High chairs and cribs,
Crinkly diapers, pacifiers,
Bottles, and bibs.

For toddlers there are
Stacking toys and sippy cups,
Coloring crayons, blocks
And even Pull-Ups.

In BabyLand
Mommy and Daddy are there
To cuddle with you
And always care.

After grabbing a plushie
And getting a hug good-bye
Say farewell to BabyLand
Until next time.

diaperedbabygirl · 13-05-2008

Very good poem

Kenshin Himura · 13-05-2008

So simple and yet so sweet, nice job.

Maverick · 13-05-2008

*Wants to go to Babyland* Nice job. ^_^

Night · 13-05-2008

Nice poem, KittyKat

KittyKat · 14-05-2008

Thanks! I really appreciate all the positive feedback.

James · 15-05-2008

Nice poem i really like that!

Pramrider · 17-05-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maverick

*Wants to go to Babyland* Nice job. ^_^

Awww......yes, I agree.......take my hand and let's go!

~Pramrider

fifigal · 26-05-2008

You mentioned that this was one of your first AB poems,would you please share some of your other works?

Jade · 26-05-2008

This poem made me smile, I could just picture babyland so bright, soft and wonderful

Wish i had some writing talents

Guess il just leave it too the pros

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KittyKat Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: California, USA Age: 19 Posts: 155 Threads: 10 Reputation: 5	BabyLand (a poem) This is one of my first AB poems.... Babyland Come with me To BabyLand. Please, hurry up And take my hand. It won't take long I promise you so. Once you come in You'll never want to go. In BabyLand Everyone can be Whatever age They choose to be. For babies there are High chairs and cribs, Crinkly diapers, pacifiers, Bottles, and bibs. For toddlers there are Stacking toys and sippy cups, Coloring crayons, blocks And even Pull-Ups. In BabyLand Mommy and Daddy are there To cuddle with you And always care. After grabbing a plushie And getting a hug good-bye Say farewell to BabyLand Until next time.

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fifigal Regular Join Date: May 2008 Location: St.Louis,USA Posts: 151 Threads: 7 Reputation: 7	Very sweet. You mentioned that this was one of your first AB poems,would you please share some of your other works?

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diaperedbabygirl Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Mass, USA Age: 17 Posts: 321 Threads: 12 Gallery Uploads: 12 Reputation: 3	Very good poem

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Kenshin Himura Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Brandon, FL Age: 17 Posts: 1,067 Threads: 50 Gallery Uploads: 9 Blog Entries: 13	So simple and yet so sweet, nice job.

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Maverick The Little Nonconformist Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: New Jersey, USA Age: 15 Posts: 1,206 Threads: 25 Gallery Uploads: 4 Wiki Edits: 2 Blog Entries: 1	Wants to go to Babyland Nice job. ^_^

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Night The Reaper Of Dreams Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: The Darkside Of The Moon, USA Age: 19 Posts: 1,345 Threads: 32 Gallery Uploads: 37 Blog Entries: 3	Nice poem, KittyKat

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KittyKat Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: California, USA Age: 19 Posts: 155 Threads: 10 Reputation: 5	Thanks! I really appreciate all the positive feedback.

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James Regular Historical Donor Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Mississippi Age: 15 Posts: 436 Threads: 27 Gallery Uploads: 4 Wiki Edits: 1	Nice poem i really like that!

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Jade Lurker Join Date: May 2008 Location: Australia Age: 19 Posts: 124 Threads: 3 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 2	This poem made me smile, I could just picture babyland so bright, soft and wonderful Wish i had some writing talents Guess il just leave it too the pros