Baby Blake's Poems

[Atsu]

Alright so lately I've been writing poems ^_^

Well a few of my friends say I'm actually pretty good at poetry. So I continued to wright them. And now I guess I'm gonna post some ^_^ So every time I wright a new poem it'll be on this thread. Here are a few to begin with.

[Atsu]

I Am From...

I am from the North
From the capitol of michigan
To town near the hangout of the Crips
And moms gritz
I am from my parents
From Italy
To Africa
And of nothing else

I am from the world
From one continent
To another
And the Oceans that surround them
I am from God
From Heaven
To Earth
And when the time comes, back again

I am from myself
From body and mind
To soul and Spirit
And to myself
I am from the Worth
From the South
To the North
And to places no one has been

I am from the Fandom
From Fur
To Feathers
And sometimes other kin
I am from time
From young
To old
And to be young, the joy of it

I am from entertainment
From Board
To Video
And sometimes even imaginary
I am from friends
From close by
To far away
And to lose them, oh the sorrow of it

I am from this poem
From topic
To Topic
And the rythym of it
I am from this poem
From thought
To feeling
And... this is me

[Atsu]

Travels...

The wonderful winter time, washing away
Hanging woefully like the branches of a willow tree,
My feeling of fear and sorrow fill my already feeble brain.
Fables have been recited to me;
Huge pyramids, hole steaks, and heroes of heralds and knights.

These amazing and awe inspiring attributes of this unknown place
Are abrasive to my young mind.
And so we drive, passing bye people, historic places, Pizza Huts, and Peter Piper Pizza Parlors… We drive to Nevada.

Now arrived and settled in a new apartment, I begin to feel nauseous.
The nearly nine night drive was noxious to me.
Years pass by, youth groups, young friends, yelling in the house, and yellow school buses are now gone.
Back on the awful road we go, but now I am a big brother.
Two young girls, in their early-years come with us.
The awful road, that I have learned to abhor, has an aroma of absolutely dead skunk and already fertilized fields.

Attempting something, Asleep I fall.
As to avoid the awfully abrasive aroma.
But as soon as I sleep, sister Claire disgustingly sticks her sock in my face.
Awake with a slight anger in my attitude.
Arriving at an unknown atmosphere yet again…


Getting good, time spent growling and grieving here as made me grow.
But now, take my part, by plane.
I leave the truly tangible feeling of Texas.
Leaving every piece of my energy spent pasting together a new life.

And now… I chill.
Just chill…
Chilling in cool Cali.
I have made many a new marvels
Stories, statements, songs, sketches
Poems, partners, pizzas
Hope, honor, having friends
I hope to God I don’t leave soon…

[Atsu]

Why...?

The bay at the moon
The sweet cries of wolfs
Many feelings expressed
In such a simple
yet powerful howl

But the certain wolf
His cry to the moon
Is the one I hear most
For I feel him

Swift changes...
Pain, Happiness, Anger
Depression, Sorrow, Childness
Swift Changes

But I say, "Willpower is the key"
"Trust me"
"It will keep the changes at bay"
"And soon, day after day"
"It will soon go away"
"Willpower I say..."

Tears have fallen from my eyes
I'm really surprised I haven't cried him a river
His self-caused pain
Hurts me as well
Why won't you stop?

The feeling I get
I’m sure it relates to the sorrow felt
When six million deaths were dealt
To a certain culture

Falseness
Hypocrisy
Lies
Deceit
Pain
Harmful Words
We have shared these
With each other

But that doesn't stop the Brotherly Love
I have for him
I love him
Like family we are to each other
But... I still must ask...
What has become of you Gelid?

[Atsu]

(no title) Personification Assignment

Causing sorrow
Creating joy
Making treaties
As well as wars
Just a few common tasks I do

My penmanship can com in many varieties
Colors come from my tip
Red, blue, black
I come in many forms
Feather, plastic, or even metal

Some say I am mightier than any sword

I create only what people tell my to
And happily, I jot down many feelings on paper

Though useful as I may be
I have brothers as well
Their styles… Are different
Using staining ink
Or erasable markings
Cannot compare
To my sleek, elegant, permanent strokes and marks

Distinguished miracles can be caused at my hand
But what do you say I am?
I am nothing, but a simple pen…

[Atsu]

Hate Poem (this one isn't all that good as I forced it out last second)


Hate and segregation
Pointless slander and discrimination
Who would have known times like these were still around

Times like these
Remind me of the great Dr. King
And the people that flame and hate
A particular group

It even makes worse
When they have misunderstandings

Times like these
Hate wars
Fire against Fire
Flame against Flame
Trolls hate us for being different
But they misunderstand our difference

People like these
The remind me of the KKK
Dressed in white
Raising there fists to continue the fight
“White Power!” they cry

Sickening
The hate it just disgusts me
Calling us FurFags
Such a harmful word
Just like Nigger…
Sickening

Stopping them?
Ha! Impossible
They’ll never understand
Ignorance is their bliss
Let them keep it
For understanding and acceptence is ours

To stop the pain?
I say, “Ignore!”
I know it may be hard
When there’s a flaming cross at your door
Along with the shouts of their voices screaming
“God hates your kind!”
But just ignore
It will dissaparate in time

But no, God hates our kind you say?
Well just recognize
Look back at the book
Where do you see the statement
“God Hates…”?

Prove my point?
Why must you hate?
But don’t you worry
I forgive and forget these sins

But you don’t listen
You still only hate
You’re lucky you can Confess and Repent
Otherwise…
You’d be screwed…

[Atsu]

So comment if you would like, maybe gimme some pointers. Look out for some more poetry from me =)

[avery]

there's a lot of honesty in these poems. they're very open and unpretentious, and that's something you don't often see in poetry.

they're really really excellent, blake. keep it up!

[Celtic]

yeh I think thay are very good...I know it can be hard to make a poem I made one once. But anyway weldone

[snydead]

Great job. I really like the poem i think it's very creative.