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Old 22-06-2008   #21 (permalink)
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YAY! awesome poems blake ^_^

I giggled at your romantic nose membranes ^_^
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Right... Well, I've been through deep thoughts and very meaningful situations to me the past few weeks and I just want to say there's going to be a lot of incoming poems to be added in this topic when I get back to my mothers. I'm currently at my dads for the weekend and my mom has assured me the internet will be back by Monday. So, to all that actually read(or even enjoy) my poetry, just know that there is more to come soon.
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I do actually have one that I can clearly remember for some reason. Maybe because it's so short. So here it is...

Idea

It is me
It is you

It is the enemy
It is the hero

It is the government
It is the people

It is the poor
It is the wealthy

It is us
It is them

It is what they make it
It is what we make it

Just kinda how I felt of the idea. Not the idea of an action or a reaction. Not the idea of power or pleasure. But rather just the idea of having an idea. The idea in itself.
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Difference

Power of love
Essence of kindness
Touch of care
Thought of faith

A kiss
Such a simple yet powerful thing
Confusing thoughts
Why does it matter so much?

Power of friendship
Essence of hope
Touch of a brother
Thought of difference

Emotion
Such a weird feeling
Confused yes…
Why does he matter so much?

Power of the mind
Essence of thought
Touch of him
Thought of him being more than a brother

Thoughts
Why did they taunt me so?
It was wrong to think of him that way
Now I know better.
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Hurt

Word of advice
Never get too close
Be cautionary

Just a little hurt, couldn't pull himself away
Worry not about him, he'll be fine
Direct your own path, do what you will
Just know that it hurts him to see you go away
Shows him that he was blind
Proves that he was wrong to try and heal

Feeling the fire
It's in his heart
Bearing the chill
Waiting for you to jump off that tall spire
Moving from simple fun, eating candy together like sweet tarts
To deep love, so deep, no one would dare try and steal

But now you're leaving
He just wants to say it hurts
Just to see you go, it kills
His heart begins bleeding
Bleeding like those oh so familiar cuts
But his last words are, "You don't have to bleed with me"
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Rings of Three

One tried to help, tried to show
But two won't listen, won't help themselves
Pent up in their own discord, disbanding the connection of three
One tried to help, But the rings are broken
And now they must leave.


This one is actually very old and I found it while I was searching through my documents and cleaning them up.
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Happiness?

Never asked, Never wanted
But I got it, gotta keep my sharp tongue blunted

What I have, it matters not
Because I can’t give it up, or he’ll fire that shot

Can’t get away from it
Unsure if it brings benefit

Who cares?
Why does it matter?

Why are you even reading these pairs?
Why have I been putting my rhymes on a silver platter?

Why does it seem I speak with flares?
And why does it seem my attitude is getting flatter and flatter?
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