The Great Outdoors

snydead · 21-04-2008

Hope you like this story!! and sorry if it's a little confusing

On a summers day a 17 yr. old kid named Adam was sitting on the porch of his house under the nice warm sun. Adam thought to himself what it would be like to be alone in nature, to get out and a way from stress. And to be surrounded by good looking trees and a nice little stream nearby that is surrounded by white, yellow, and purple flowers.
Just then Adam had decided to hop in his nice red sports car and drive somewhere that is as beautiful than what he had thought.
Adam had driven 8 miles until he reached a deadend. He got out of his car and saw beautiful looking trees. To Adam the trees looked like a big flower with pink petals (i'm not sure what there called). Adam then decided to go on a walk and see the surroundings.

As he was walking he saw no roads or houses near by so he thought to himself that it seems peaceful here. Just then Adam came across a small stream that is surrounded by white, yellow and purple flowers. Adam said out of amazement "This is the same place that I was thinking of. I love it here!

" Adam had decided to stay over night near the small stream. Adam got out his cell phone and called up his parents and asked if he could camp out alone and his parents said that it was alright.

Adam stood near the stream and started to remember that he needed some supplies for the night. So he walked back to the car and drove over to a nearby store.
When he came inside the store he decided to get some beef jerky, ham, and some burger buns and he said "This should make a good sandwich" As he was walking down the aisle he came accross a plastic package with big white lettering that said depends. Adam looked around to see if anyone was looking at him. Then he grabbed the package off the shelf and went over to the cashier and placed his things on the counter. The cashier saw the plastic package and started to smile as she had putted down the price on the cash register. She said "that'll be $17.85 please"
Adam gave her the cash and started to walk to the door. Suddenly the Cashier said "Wait! I was wondering if you would ever like to get togeather and talk sometime!" Adam Said "Sure, What's your name?"
"My name is Ada and I already know who you are you sit in front of me in Econ. class in school. I guess that you haven't really noticed me.."
Adam said "sorry for not noticing but I would like to get to know you more better. See you at school to set up a day to talk byez."

Adam had left the store and drove back to the deadend and headed straight to the stream.
When Adam came to the stream he noticed that it was going to be dark soon and it was still hot out. So Adam decided to open up his plastic package and grabbed out a diaper. He took off all of his clothes and had placed on the diaper. He thought to himself that since it's still going to be hot out I mine as well stay only in my diaper and use my clothes as a bed.

Adam was getting a little hungry so he put togeather his sandwich and began to eat.
After eating Adam leaned back on his clothes and then he felt something hard under his back. so he reached in to his pants pocket and grabbed out a pacifire and placed it in his mouth (He forgot that the pacifire was still in his pocket). Adam just layed there in only his diaper with a pacifire in his mouth while he was looking at the stars in the sky. Adam said to him self "there is truly beauty in nature.

THE END

snydead · 22-04-2008

This is a fantasy of mine. It makes me feel happy

LinusBlueSnow · 22-04-2008

Nice little short story. Usually people try to make stories longer than a few paragraphs, but this was nice. For the tree do you mean like an actual pink flower (like a rose?), or do you mean magnolia or cherry tree? Any thoughts on a sequel?

snydead · 22-04-2008

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Originally Posted by LinusBlueSnow

Nice little short story. Usually people try to make stories longer than a few paragraphs, but this was nice. For the tree do you mean like an actual pink flower (like a rose?), or do you mean magnolia or cherry tree? Any thoughts on a sequel?

when I write stories I don't know how to describe details very well, I like to keep the reader thinking what the details are actually going to be, so basicly there creating there own details.

If I get few more good replies maybe I'll create a sequel to the story.LOL!!!

Otherwise I can start out fresh with a new story.

betagame · 21-06-2008

Great story

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21-04-2008	#1 (permalink)
snydead Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: USA, Wisconsin Age: 19 Posts: 356 Threads: 9 Gallery Uploads: 9 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 1	The Great Outdoors Hope you like this story!! and sorry if it's a little confusing On a summers day a 17 yr. old kid named Adam was sitting on the porch of his house under the nice warm sun. Adam thought to himself what it would be like to be alone in nature, to get out and a way from stress. And to be surrounded by good looking trees and a nice little stream nearby that is surrounded by white, yellow, and purple flowers. Just then Adam had decided to hop in his nice red sports car and drive somewhere that is as beautiful than what he had thought. Adam had driven 8 miles until he reached a deadend. He got out of his car and saw beautiful looking trees. To Adam the trees looked like a big flower with pink petals (i'm not sure what there called). Adam then decided to go on a walk and see the surroundings. As he was walking he saw no roads or houses near by so he thought to himself that it seems peaceful here. Just then Adam came across a small stream that is surrounded by white, yellow and purple flowers. Adam said out of amazement "This is the same place that I was thinking of. I love it here!" Adam had decided to stay over night near the small stream. Adam got out his cell phone and called up his parents and asked if he could camp out alone and his parents said that it was alright. Adam stood near the stream and started to remember that he needed some supplies for the night. So he walked back to the car and drove over to a nearby store. When he came inside the store he decided to get some beef jerky, ham, and some burger buns and he said "This should make a good sandwich" As he was walking down the aisle he came accross a plastic package with big white lettering that said depends. Adam looked around to see if anyone was looking at him. Then he grabbed the package off the shelf and went over to the cashier and placed his things on the counter. The cashier saw the plastic package and started to smile as she had putted down the price on the cash register. She said "that'll be $17.85 please" Adam gave her the cash and started to walk to the door. Suddenly the Cashier said "Wait! I was wondering if you would ever like to get togeather and talk sometime!" Adam Said "Sure, What's your name?" "My name is Ada and I already know who you are you sit in front of me in Econ. class in school. I guess that you haven't really noticed me.." Adam said "sorry for not noticing but I would like to get to know you more better. See you at school to set up a day to talk byez." Adam had left the store and drove back to the deadend and headed straight to the stream. When Adam came to the stream he noticed that it was going to be dark soon and it was still hot out. So Adam decided to open up his plastic package and grabbed out a diaper. He took off all of his clothes and had placed on the diaper. He thought to himself that since it's still going to be hot out I mine as well stay only in my diaper and use my clothes as a bed. Adam was getting a little hungry so he put togeather his sandwich and began to eat. After eating Adam leaned back on his clothes and then he felt something hard under his back. so he reached in to his pants pocket and grabbed out a pacifire and placed it in his mouth (He forgot that the pacifire was still in his pocket). Adam just layed there in only his diaper with a pacifire in his mouth while he was looking at the stars in the sky. Adam said to him self "there is truly beauty in nature. THE END

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22-04-2008	#2 (permalink)
snydead Regular Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: USA, Wisconsin Age: 19 Posts: 356 Threads: 9 Gallery Uploads: 9 Blog Entries: 1 Reputation: 1	This is a fantasy of mine. It makes me feel happy

22-04-2008	#3 (permalink)
LinusBlueSnow Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: New Jersey Age: 20 Posts: 82 Threads: 3 Reputation: 1	Nice little short story. Usually people try to make stories longer than a few paragraphs, but this was nice. For the tree do you mean like an actual pink flower (like a rose?), or do you mean magnolia or cherry tree? Any thoughts on a sequel?

21-06-2008	#5 (permalink)
betagame Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Bay Area Age: 15 Posts: 577 Threads: 107 Gallery Uploads: 2 Wiki Edits: 188 Blog Entries: 6 Reputation: 6	Great story thumbsup: