You wouldn't believe what happened! [Short Story]

Digital · 22-03-2008

Note : This short story is entirely satirical and unrealistic. Please do not take offence. If you do feel offended, please disscuss with me via PM why, and I will retheorise this story. If the admins consider this crude and bad taste, then remove asap.

Summary : A kid discovers about AB/DL/TBism. But everything goes horribly wrong. Or does it?

You wouldn't believe what happened!

Timmy was 15, sitting alone in his room, thinking about diapers.
You see, in his world, he wasn't a kid like all the others. he felt an urge to wear diapers, have a mommy, and wierd stuff! things that would really freak off his friends in real life. Not that he had many friends, but either way..
He turned on his computer, got on the magical world of the internet, and typed in youtube.com. He was trying to get his mind off things, so he thought maybe a funny video would do so.
In the YT search engine, he wrote ''Funny''.
Results came up, and basically for the next 2-3 hours Timmy indulged in watching people fall over bridges, getting cakes in their faces, and other slapstick humour. Going from one clip to another, through the jungle of the ''other video's'' section at the bottom right corner.
Then, what he was trying to evade, punched him right into his face.
The small square of doom with a collection of related stuff showed a video called 'Diaper dance'.
No, but I can't, and I don't know..I'm just a man..
Thoughts ran through poor Timmy's head, but his hand moved on his own accord.
*click*
9 seconds. Most people would find it funny, stupid, maybe the authors favourite word ever, ABSURD!
Timmy found it arousing. Sexy.
Looking around, making sure nobody was looking, he typed 'Diapers' in the youtube search engine.
Oh course, he found many videos of no interest, like ''Re : How to change diapers'' and the lot. But he also found clips of men, and women, wearing them.
Timmy then realised, he was not alone.
4 days went by, and our dear hero had found out this was a fetish. Thank to DPF, and Deeker, he found the ultimate purpose in life : To find a mommy.
He wanted it, he craved it. The idea of being in diapers 24/7! Oh the joy! And according to these sites, they're we're many hot blondes in their 20ies with blue eyes willing to do so!
But Timmy came to a realisation, the second one that week.
That can't be true.
The only resort he now had, was his imagination.
And deceipt. Fooling other people, to make them jealous, pleased for him! Acceptance, at that.
So, he found a site where many TBs like him hung. It was called adisc.org. His username was something innovative, and unthought!
It was diapers4evers15yobabyboi.
It also was rather long, but eh, who cared!
So, he went to the Diaper section, and wrote what he said was a true happening. It was called
''u wudnt believe wha hapnd!!''
And it went like this :
wow guiz this hot girl in my klass wuz weaarin a diper so i asked her if it was reall was and she told me she was a tb! so i tell her ya i am wun too.
so later...
she came to my house and diprd me, and fed me a baba, and changed me etc.
cool eh?
I dun kare if u dnt believe me, i know who ws tharr

What was wierd though, they didn't believe him!
It was completely ABSURD. Not everyone could have thought it was fake! Not everyone was also a member of the goodnites site, dpf or deeker, were he also posted it! And who was this Meow, Apple, or Dany G guy to tell him he was banned!

What went wrong?

__________________________________

This is 100% fiction, I KNOW WHO WAS THERE!!11

baby kiffer · 26-03-2008

Intriguing....it was an interesting art form that captured the important moments of the story....not too detailed, yet not too skimpy...

quattrus · 26-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dusk

And who was this Meow, Apple, or Dany G guy to tell him he was banned!

This made me laugh hard... now our forum mods have alter egos!

(let's hope they have some sense of humour too....)

Chromos · 26-03-2008

I like it- but I have to comment that you need to spend some time on Capitalization and grammar.

Ganymede · 26-03-2008

Good job! This is a great satire of the stereotypical portrayal of *bs/dls thanks to sites like deeker.

You're a regular Mark Twain

.

Digital · 27-03-2008

Quote:

but I have to comment that you need to spend some time on Capitalization and grammar.

That is very true, I am working on it. Matter if fact, I'll start by editing the story. I'll tell you people when it's grammatically ok. Thank you btw everyone for your comments.

woof · 27-03-2008

We need more satirical stories like this one. Good work.

dostuff12 · 29-03-2008

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chromos

I like it- but I have to comment that you need to spend some time on Capitalization and grammar.

I dont know if this was on purpose, but "capitalization" isnt supposed to be capitalized. lol.

Chromos · 30-03-2008

It was done on purpose.

Todd · 04-04-2008

Good job on this. Even I who have not been around very long and haven't read any of your stories was able to pick up on the obvious satire.

22-03-2008	#1 (permalink)
Digital Heart & Soul Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: In the shadowplay Age: 16 Posts: 334 Threads: 20 Gallery Uploads: 2 Wiki Edits: 1 Blog Entries: 4	You wouldn't believe what happened! [Short Story] Note : This short story is entirely satirical and unrealistic. Please do not take offence. If you do feel offended, please disscuss with me via PM why, and I will retheorise this story. If the admins consider this crude and bad taste, then remove asap. Summary : A kid discovers about AB/DL/TBism. But everything goes horribly wrong. Or does it? You wouldn't believe what happened! Timmy was 15, sitting alone in his room, thinking about diapers. You see, in his world, he wasn't a kid like all the others. he felt an urge to wear diapers, have a mommy, and wierd stuff! things that would really freak off his friends in real life. Not that he had many friends, but either way.. He turned on his computer, got on the magical world of the internet, and typed in youtube.com. He was trying to get his mind off things, so he thought maybe a funny video would do so. In the YT search engine, he wrote ''Funny''. Results came up, and basically for the next 2-3 hours Timmy indulged in watching people fall over bridges, getting cakes in their faces, and other slapstick humour. Going from one clip to another, through the jungle of the ''other video's'' section at the bottom right corner. Then, what he was trying to evade, punched him right into his face. The small square of doom with a collection of related stuff showed a video called 'Diaper dance'. No, but I can't, and I don't know..I'm just a man.. Thoughts ran through poor Timmy's head, but his hand moved on his own accord. click 9 seconds. Most people would find it funny, stupid, maybe the authors favourite word ever, ABSURD! Timmy found it arousing. Sexy. Looking around, making sure nobody was looking, he typed 'Diapers' in the youtube search engine. Oh course, he found many videos of no interest, like ''Re : How to change diapers'' and the lot. But he also found clips of men, and women, wearing them. Timmy then realised, he was not alone. 4 days went by, and our dear hero had found out this was a fetish. Thank to DPF, and Deeker, he found the ultimate purpose in life : To find a mommy. He wanted it, he craved it. The idea of being in diapers 24/7! Oh the joy! And according to these sites, they're we're many hot blondes in their 20ies with blue eyes willing to do so! But Timmy came to a realisation, the second one that week. That can't be true. The only resort he now had, was his imagination. And deceipt. Fooling other people, to make them jealous, pleased for him! Acceptance, at that. So, he found a site where many TBs like him hung. It was called adisc.org. His username was something innovative, and unthought! It was diapers4evers15yobabyboi. It also was rather long, but eh, who cared! So, he went to the Diaper section, and wrote what he said was a true happening. It was called ''u wudnt believe wha hapnd!!'' And it went like this : wow guiz this hot girl in my klass wuz weaarin a diper so i asked her if it was reall was and she told me she was a tb! so i tell her ya i am wun too. so later... she came to my house and diprd me, and fed me a baba, and changed me etc. cool eh? I dun kare if u dnt believe me, i know who ws tharr What was wierd though, they didn't believe him! It was completely ABSURD. Not everyone could have thought it was fake! Not everyone was also a member of the goodnites site, dpf or deeker, were he also posted it! And who was this Meow, Apple, or Dany G guy to tell him he was banned! What went wrong? __________________________________ This is 100% fiction, I KNOW WHO WAS THERE!!11

26-03-2008	#4 (permalink)
Chromos Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Davy Jones' locker Age: 19 Posts: 956 Threads: 42 Wiki Edits: 4 Blog Entries: 5	I like it- but I have to comment that you need to spend some time on Capitalization and grammar. Last edited by Chromos; 26-03-2008 at 11:06 PM.

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26-03-2008	#2 (permalink)
baby kiffer Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: USA Posts: 137 Threads: 12 Gallery Uploads: 9 Blog Entries: 3 Reputation: 5	Intriguing....it was an interesting art form that captured the important moments of the story....not too detailed, yet not too skimpy...

26-03-2008	#5 (permalink)
Ganymede Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Las Vegas, NV Age: 17 Posts: 212 Threads: 20 Gallery Uploads: 9 Wiki Edits: 1 Reputation: 7	Good job! This is a great satire of the stereotypical portrayal of *bs/dls thanks to sites like deeker. You're a regular Mark Twain .

27-03-2008	#7 (permalink)
woof Wait... what? Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Halifax, NS Age: 20 Posts: 525 Threads: 13 Blog Entries: 2	We need more satirical stories like this one. Good work.

30-03-2008	#9 (permalink)
Chromos Regular Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Davy Jones' locker Age: 19 Posts: 956 Threads: 42 Wiki Edits: 4 Blog Entries: 5	It was done on purpose.

04-04-2008	#10 (permalink)
Todd Regular Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Denver Posts: 89 Threads: 1 Reputation: 7	Good job on this. Even I who have not been around very long and haven't read any of your stories was able to pick up on the obvious satire.