The Odessa Conflict

[VR Wolf]

This is a story i made out of sheer boredom, it uses mostly diolauge, which im not very good at. Its the first actual story i have ever written. Id like your thoughts on it. There some small language in it, but not much and nothing to severe.

EDIT: Sorry, Took me till just know that i realized i posted my 2nd draft. I mostly skimmed it so i didnt really notice the missing parts, i put in the completed version now, sorry about the mistake.

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Odessa

It was the nearing the end of Operation Odessa, the Earth Federation’s assault on the Zeon held base of Odessa. Numerous units were deployed in an attempt to hold back the assault. Members of the 6th Zaku Regiment were deployed, Teams: 01, 03, 05, 06, 07, 08 and 09 as well as members from the 9th and 7th Strike Battalion. Commanding the Team 07 was Lieutenant Commander Charles Mac, a veteran of Operation British. Ensign Roy Brewer was also part of the unit, serving as second in command, a fairly exceptional pilot in his own regard, he preformed well and graduated on top at the Zeon academy though has never experienced an actual battle. Along side these two were Petty Officer 1 Keith Rhee and Mark Simmons, both Veterans of Team 07 though were not as experienced as most Zeon Pilots. A last minute addition to the team was Petty Officer 2 Min Tea, a young mysterious pilot who was new to the Zeon Military. Lcdr. Mac and Petty officers Rhee and Simmons received prototype Gouf mobile suits to aid them in the Battle while both Ens. Brewer and PO2. Tea where situated in standard Zaku II F-Types. They were all fiercely loyal to there country and to their cause. These soldiers will fight bravely and die honorably. May the soldiers and servants of Zeon drift forever in eternal happiness…



[Inside a GAW attack carrier]
-There are 5 people on this attack carrier, the pilot, the co-pilot, Charles Mac, Roy Brewer, and Min Tea. Mac and The pilot are in a dispute-
Lcdr. Mac: Pilot! Where the hell is the rest of our damn crew!
GAW Pilot: I don’t know sir, the Carrier should be en route, I will contact our ground forces.
Lcdr. Mac: Well hurry up with it damn you! That GAW should be right next to us!
GAW Pilot: There could have been some miscommunication at the base; it will take some time to contact my commander.
Lcdr. Mac: I don’t care what you think happened; I want to know why that GAW isn’t right next to us!
Ens. Brewer: Don’t worry sir, I’m sure we can take those new federations mobile suits; I don’t think those new suits could even match up to our Zaku’s, let alone those Gouf’s.
PO2. Tea: Even with a few new mobile suits Ensign, I don’t think a couple of Zaku’s and Gouf’s will turn the tide.
Ens. Brewer: -Sarcastically- You’re an optimistic one…
Lcdr. Mac: Any word on what the hell happened to the rest of our damned team?
Ens. Brewer: They might not have been be ahead of us, or-
GAW Pilot: Sir, the GAW attack carrier carrying Petty officer, Simmons and Rhee has been shot down. The carrier left preemptively and was caught in the crossfire of the battle. There are no signs of any survivors.
-There is a short moment of silence-
Lcdr. Mac: That is the price of war and they knew it well. We will proceed with the mission.
PO2. Tea: Sir, Odessa is already low on troops, I don’t think-
Lcdr. Mac: Our mission is to defend Odessa; under no circumstance shall we defy a direct order. Our lives are devoted to the protection of Zeon’s cause. We will fight to defend it, and die for it.
PO2. Tea: …
GAW Pilot: Sir I have received orders to relocate to a different drop zone, twenty miles south of Odessa.
Lcdr. Mac: Hmm, that will put us at a disadvantage in aiding our comrades.
GAW Pilot: Alright Lieutenant, We are almost at the drop point, I suggest you all get ready for the landing.
-The three pilots enter the mobile suit in the back of the GAW awaiting the order to exit-
-The GAW slows down and each mobile suit is given the signal to exit the carrier-

[20 Miles outside of Odessa]
-Captain M’quve appears on the screen of each of the pilots-
M’quve: Soldiers of the 6th Zaku Regiment, your mission has been re-assigned to aid in the escorting of supplies to Odessa. Your commanders will be transmitted further orders on your new mission.
Lcdr. Mac: Hmph.

[Inside Lcdr. Mac’s Gouf]
Lcdr. Mac: So we need to escort some transport trucks…
-The audio message finishes-
Lcdr. Mac: So this is commands idea of war?!
-Hits his fist against the side of one of the controls-
Lcdr. Mac: We will not surrender to that scum, not after what they did.
Lcdr. Mac: Sorry M’quve, I am tired of your political bullshit, I’ll show you how to win a war.

[20 Miles outside of Odessa]
Ens. Brewer: So what is the plan sir?
Lcdr. Mac: Escort a group of trucks to Odessa, supplies for the troops. We are to rendezvous at Checkpoint Alpha; they will be waiting for us there.
Ens. Brewer: Aw damn, I thought I was going to get a real battle, I have always wanted to shoot down some useless Fedi Pilots
Lcdr. Mac: You might just get what you want
Ens. Brewer: Hell yeah, Roy’s luck is finally turning around.
PO2. Tea: Yeah, our luck sure has changed…

[15 Miles outside of Odessa: Checkpoint Alpha]
-The three mobile suits arrive at the checkpoint-
Transport Officer: So they sent in three Zaku’s this time? Well its better then those damned tanks I suppose.
Lcdr. Mac: Cut the chat; let’s just get to the dammed base.
Transport Officer: Would it kill you to be a little nicer?
Lcdr. Mac: Not me, you.
Transport Officer: Okay, Okay. No need to get all angry.

[13 Miles Outside of Odessa]
-The Zeon Transport Officer sends a private message to Lcdr. Mac-
Transport Officer: Hey, what gives? You’re supposed to be escorting us to the safe zone in sector 9.
Lcdr. Mac: Well orders have changed.
Transport Officer: What do you mean? Odessa has no chance! There is no way were going back there, I’m lucky enough I even survived leaving the first time.
Lcdr. Mac: Alright coward. I am giving you one of two options: you can follow my lead and assist our Zeon forces, or I can kill you right now.
Transport Officer: You wouldn’t dare destroy another Zeon officer.
Lcdr. Mac: A coward like yourself wouldn’t be missed.
Transport Officer: You’re serious…
Lcdr. Mac: We won’t let Odessa fall because of you fools…
-The Transport officer relays the message to his convey, they reluctantly agree-

[3 Miles outside of Odessa]
Transport Officer: -Sarcastically- Well thanks for holding my hand, I couldn’t have done it without you.
Ens. Brewer: Just get the damned supplies to the troops, and try not to get shot in the ass on your way back.
Transport Officer: Hell, you should be damned grateful for what I’m doing
-The Transport trucks head out to the Odessa base-
-A sharp whistling noise and then an explosion is heard, the transport convey was destroyed-
PO2. Tea: No!
-Lcdr. Mac notices the faint outline of what seems to be a Mobile suit-
Lcdr. Mac: There is a mobile suit in the Hills, Team, evasive actions.
-The Mobile suits scatter missing the guntanks second volley-
-Two Federation GM’s appear in the distance-
Ens. Brewer: Aw hell yeah, some actual combat.
PO2. Tea: I would be more enthused if we were not on the defensive ensign.
Ens. Brewer: Don’t worry; this is just like the simulations.
Lcdr. Mac: This is not a simulation; don’t start underestimating the enemy and get cocky. I guarantee you won’t be in my unit long.
PO2. Tea: Roy, look out!
-A Federation GM attacks Ensign Brewer, though he evades the attack and counters with his heat hawk, destroying the mobile suit-
Ens. Brewer: Hmph, see there not that tough.
-Ensign Brewer raises his machine gun to the second GM, the GM pilot’s reaction were to slow and was taken down in the hail of bullets.
Ens. Brewer: Now I would really appreciate if you two start help-
-The enemy mobile suit, a guntank, notices Ensign Brewer left his Zaku open to attack and fires at his Mobile suit-
Lcdr. Mac: You damned fool…
-Lcdr. Mac raises his Gouf’s rifle and fires three rounds into the cockpit of the guntank disabling-
Lcdr. Mac: You okay there ensign?
Ens. Brewer: My damned Zaku has been immobilized, I can’t move.
PO2. Tea: You should be thankful that you’re still alive; most Zaku’s can not take that kind of hit.
Lcdr. Mac: You made a foolish mistake and now you will learn from it.
Ens. Brewer: He got a lucky shot.
PO2. Tea: Sir, behind you.
-Mac looks behind him but see’s nothing-
Lcdr. Mac: I don’t see-
-Out of the sky another GM appears with its beam saber, it cuts Lcdr. Mac’s Gouf in half. It then raises its beam gun at Ensign Brewers Zaku and destroys it-
PO2 Tea: No, I won’t let this happen again!
-Petty Officer Tea raises her heat hawk at the slicing its shield then cutting the GM in half-
-Tea looks over to the remnants of Ensign Brewer’s Zaku-
PO2 Tea: Why… Why did you have to do that…
-She looks over to the Odessa base, most of the buildings are in flames and the mobile suits are having a difficult time fending off the relentless federation attack.
PO2 Tea: I need to finish my mission, I will succeed this time.

[Odessa Base]
-A Zeon pilot appears on Min Tea’s screen-
Zeon Pilot: Pilot, finally some reinforcements. Where are the other teams? Where is the rest of your team?
PO2 Tea: They’re not coming; I’m all that’s left.
Zeon Pilot: What?! How does M’quve expect us to defend this base with so few units?
PO2 Tea: It doesn’t matter now. I won’t leave you and I won’t leave Zeon.
Zeon Pilot: Glad to hear that, help those Zaku 1’s reinforce the southern border, there getting hit bad.
-PO2 Tea boosts over to the crumbling Odessa base, she fades away in the distance-

Lack of intelligence on the Federations new mobile suits, accompanied with poor surveillance and the improper organizations of the Zeon military forces doomed Odessa.
Petty Officer Min Tea joined with the remnants, of the 6th Zaku regiment and the Eagle Strike Force in a vain attempt to defend the lost base; there were very few survivors from Odessa, most of whom retreated and were captured shortly thereafter.

-The battlefield is littered with fallen mobile suits, federations mobile suits can be heard in the distance.
-A lone Zaku carrying a GM Shield and Beam saber is seen walking in the distance, the Zaku is heavily damaged with the only distinguishable marking a faded and scratched “7”-

???: Odessa, I will return…

[BabyGrizzy]

O_O Intense! I want more!