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Old 09-06-2009   #1 (permalink)
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Okay, here's my next short story. Emphasis on short. I like these small stories, exercising my creativity. Though I could be convinced to make another chapter if people ended up liking this.

It's not babyfur or *B related. It is furry though. To those of you who've read A Puppy Story, this is the one I talk about in the comments of that story.

Anyways, hope you like it. Feel free to give opinions and critiques.

Xane


Clouded blue skies above, the perfect setting for the cubs to go out and play. The small schoolchildren were being assisted by their teacher on the merry-go-round. The sound of laughing cubs in the air as the younglings played with glee. Many of them wearing their little school uniforms, the boys in their collared shirts, tucked in and held by belts to their shorts. The girls wearing their tartan skirts and both genders displaying their school crest proudly on the breast of their shirts.

A pair of tabby cat boys swing on their respective swings next to each other. The pair competing amongst each other trying to see who can achieve the highest height during their playtime. At the park, another pair of children join in, they had been with their mother the entire day, having heard some bad news. Though the warm maternal figure had not the heart to tell her boys that their father would not be coming home. A handkerchief reaches up to caress her crying eyes as some more mothers come to consol her. The two boys have not a care in the world, for them, this day is just a day off of school. The protective nature of their mother sheltering them from the cold, harsh evils of the world at the moment. For now, these two brothers can play and be merry, there will be plenty of time for them to find out what had occurred in Africa.


“It’s alright, Margaret. Your family will take care of you in Gloucester. Right now, you’ve got to focus on those two precious boys, they’re the only thing you’ve got left of your Benson.” A collie woman bids to the mourning widow. Sniffles erupt from the collie mother, her heart is broken, but she does know she must be strong for her boys.


The twin beagles look to each other, before taking to the jungle gym. The two boys in their matching outfits hang from their legs upside down. One of the playing schoolgirls stops in her tracks to lie down on the grass and look into the sky. Up there in the clouded sky is one single black figure, the winged machine emblazoned with the Nazi swastika. “Look, mummy. An aeroplane in the sky!” Rings out the girl pointing out the smaller aircraft. “Yes, sweethear….” The last word cut off as the woman realizes what is overhead. A shrill scream from the feline erupts as she is taken aback. She knows what is about to happen. “Everybody! To the shelters!” He screams as she picks up her daughter. Air raid sirens start to wail as everybody starts to panic. The mothers, fathers, teachers and headmasters scramble to take hold of the children as they panic.


The children can only cry from the panic while the older children assist the grown-ups with the smaller kids. “Mum, what’s going on? Why didn’t the sirens sound faster?” One asks to his mother, the female of course does not know why. One after another, the bombers show themselves from the clouds above, flying overhead as their hatches open and prepare to drop their deadly payloads on the public below.


It’s March, 1940. Another air strike on Britain is accomplished by the Nazi War Machine.
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Wow, that was well written and amazing. You really captured the grim mood and feelings of the characters and setting.
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Wow, that was well written and amazing. You really captured the grim mood and feelings of the characters and setting.
Why thank you, kind Noah. XD

Next one I make is actually gonna be longer, something that will take more than an hour to write. It's gonna be a lurve story.
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What He Said.
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