A Puppy Story [Babyfur]

[Xane]

Okay, so here's my first story, hope people dig it. Opinions welcome of course.


On the outside of the house was a tricycle, laid to it’s side. Yard toys were strewn about the lawn, the plush grass beneath the draolf’s feet crunched below. The hybrid was convinced to baby-sit for his friends little brother. And by the looks of the yard, it was apparent a little cub lived inside.

On the interior, were the cub’s parents, the huskies were getting ready for the soirée. A blue-gray husky worked his paws to button up the vest on his suit, already having finished the other part. “Honey, you almost ready?” The male called out to his wife. Across the hall, a small husky of the same coloration was playing on the floor with some cars, vrrooming noises coming from the pup as he played contently with the toys of his youth.

The caretaker soon clacked on the front door, looking to come inside and meet his charge for the night. A female wearing a black evening gown answered the door. “Kaji! Come on in. We’re just getting finished real quick.” The draolf was allowed entry into the home of the huskies. Inside were tall ceilings, a chandelier hanging down in the entryway of the home. “Max is playing in his room. I left you some money for pizza in the kitchen. He can stay awake for a little while longer than his usual bedtime, but not too long.” The draolf replies with a simple nod. “Don’t worry, I’ll make sure he goes to sleep at the right time.” He will recognize the parents wishes.

The tall draolf soon stumbles upon the pups room. Looking inside, he watches Max play around with his toy cars, speed sounds still emanating from the young puppy, not realizing that someone else is watching him at the moment. The puppy’s right ear tip seems to be flopped down, while his left ear is perked up straight. The husky pup wears a pair of shorts, buttoned above his tail, and a shirt with a cartoonish baseball, mitt, and bat on it. Max’s father taps the draolf on the shoulder. “Excuse me there, big guy.” He says, moving into the room as the caretaker moves aside. Brandyn kneels down and picks up Max, giving him a tickle on his little tummy. Giggles come from the four year old as he’s picked up and brought over to a changing table. Laying down as his father wants, Max picks up his shirt as his father moves to undo the button on his shorts. The puppy’s diaper now in plain sight as the shorts are brought down to his feet.

Blue-gray and white paws reach down below the table and bring up the necessary supplies, wipes and new diaper. As the two are set to the side of the table, another paw is brought to Max’s torso. Velcro noises ring through the room, and the garment is removed from the puppy. The wipes are opened with ease as his father has done this before, and a quick cleaning of Max’s area finishes. The puppy moves his paws through the air watching his toy car as a distraction while his father completes his duty. The white diaper is opened with crinkles as Max’s legs are brought up and placed under his bottom. The garment flipped up to cover the front of the boy, tapes opening up with ripping sounds and the diaper secured on the young boy. “Alright champ, all done.” The older husky bids to his precious pup.

“Alright there, Kaji. This one’s all yours.” Carrying the small boy over, black nose rubbing against the puppy’s muzzle before he’s placed down. “Okay, numbers are over on the fridge, plenty of juice and soda for you in there too. You guys have fun.” Paws reach down to straighten his vest before shaking Kaji’s hand. And with that, the parents are gone. The puppy stands on the comfy carpet in his t-shirt and diaper, looking up to his caretaker for the evening. The small child smiles wide before saying something. “Hi!” He calls out to the much taller male. He looks down to the cars before squatting down and placing the red racer he had been playing with down with it’s companion cars. “Hello, Max.” The black draolf responds, a calming voice coming from the young adult. “I’m Kaji.” Small paws pad over to the caretaker as Max’s head looks up to look at Kaji’s eyes. “So, what do you want to do, little guy?” The blue puppy looks around the room, before laughing and running between Kaji’s legs, diaper crinkling all the way. Of course, as a puppy runs, the speed can easily be matched by an adult just by walking a bit briskly, and that is exactly what the guardian does, stopping around a corner as Max hides, his tail sticking out in plain sight without his knowing. “Oh! Where could he have gone? Max! Max! Where are you?” Calling out in a sing-song voice to the puppy. Max’s only response is wagging his tail and muffled giggling. The living room is given a good looking around, before the tail is noticed, the attempt by the puppy is admirable, even if he didn’t know that he wasn’t covered all the way. “I think I see him!” He calls out to the room, accompanied by louder giggling from the child. As quietly as he can go, Kaji starts to make towards the couch, before he is engulfed in a flame and appears before the husky. “Found you!” He calls out.


Max’s eyes immediately go wide as Kaji appears before him. A light squeal erupts from the boy before he tries to flee away. “Max, it’s okay.” Arms reach out to grab the child before he can get away. “It’s just me. I’m sorry I scared you.” He says, giving the puppy a tight embrace. The small creature in Kaji’s hands shakes from fear, though after a while, he calms down enough to where he lies still. Whimpers from the puppy ring out as he is still scared a little. “Listen, buddy. I’m here to make sure you are safe. I will never hurt you.” The tall draolf continues to comfort the pup in his arms. Closed eyes open finally as the whimpers stop and the pup gazes into Kaji’s eyes. Searching for the sincerity in his caretaker’s. A pair of wings wrap around the two as Max wraps his small arms around Kaji’s chest as much as he can. Head nuzzling against the black draolf fur before the embrace ends and the pair will enjoy the rest of their night.

[Jeffy]

Very well done Maxxy! n.n

[BabyGrizzy]

Very cute! I'd love to read more! Perhaps next time a story about the struggles of two teen boyfurs in love? Those are always cute.

[Xane]

Originally Posted by BabyGrizzy

Very cute! I'd love to read more! Perhaps next time a story about the struggles of two teen boyfurs in love? Those are always cute.

I could do that, I actually have an outline along the same lines. I think you've just given me the gumption to take it further. XD

[NoahKokoro]

Aww that's such a cute story! I'd love to hug the little husky!

[Xane]

Oh, I should also say that critiques of my works are welcomed. Tell me what you liked about the story, what you didn't, how can I make the next one better? All that stuff.

[NoahKokoro]

Originally Posted by Xane

Oh, I should also say that critiques of my works are welcomed. Tell me what you liked about the story, what you didn't, how can I make the next one better? All that stuff.

It was really good, but it had alot of potential to continue on to be a great story. So, the only thing is that you just ended it right after the story could have developed more.

[stonemask55]

I love it very cute. The only thing I would do is lengthen it and have more verbal interaction between Max and Kaji.

[Xane]

Originally Posted by NoahKokoro

It was really good, but it had alot of potential to continue on to be a great story. So, the only thing is that you just ended it right after the story could have developed more.

Yeah. I kinda ended it abruptly, I'm thinking that this one instance would be a part of a serial short story. A little taste to start off, more later.

My next project is a very small story about The Blitz. It's not really babyfur-ish. But it deals with the taking of innocence from a child, through things that did happen in history. Of course, knowing me it's going to be furry-ised. Think Maus. Kind of like that, but a little bit different.

[NoahKokoro]

Originally Posted by Xane

Yeah. I kinda ended it abruptly, I'm thinking that this one instance would be a part of a serial short story. A little taste to start off, more later.

My next project is a very small story about The Blitz. It's not really babyfur-ish. But it deals with the taking of innocence from a child, through things that did happen in history. Of course, knowing me it's going to be furry-ised. Think Maus. Kind of like that, but a little bit different.

Can't wait! ^ ^