The Beach

[Siege89]

Just a dumb short story. Idk I wont work on it or anything, just kind of how I feel right now. so yeah here goes


I went to the beach today, It seemed like a really good idea at the time.

I asked all of my friends to go with, But they where all so busy. I decided to go alone. When I showed up at the beach it was starting to get cold outside. Most of the other people at beach where leaving, if not all.

But I grabbed my towel, and my shovel an bucket anyways. An found a really good spot, It was really easy. There no one left on the beach but me. I set down my towel, an took my shoes off.

Ahhh the warm sand felt so nice at first. I just stood there for a while and wiggled my toes. An the sun felt so warm on my hole body.

After a while it started to rain, But its was that great warm rain. I didn't move, I just stood there, The feeling was so great.

Then it started to get really cold. I opened my eyes. I couldn't see anything, There was water all around me. But its not raining anymore, I was drowning.


hmmm maybe this should be more of a blog, being it so short, but I'm just now editing this last part in, I feel as thought its a cheap thread

[diaper degraw]

cool i love short things like this

[Siege89]

thanks, Its normal shorter, Its a saying i have. My friends will sometime asking me if I'm swiming when i looked depressed. Cause for a long time when anyone ask me how I was feelin I said"I feel like my feet are on dry ground, an my heads under 1000 feet of water"

[Laram]

Woah. Thats A Good Short Story, But I Didn't Expect The Ending To Be That.

[babykalie]

love it!!

[Eric88]

Like it as well got me hooked and then finished it off with a bang..

[richbaby]

It may be a cheap thread but it was still a good read.

[Siege89]

yeah I know I put that in ther, I just read it. Mind you i posted this 4 weeks ago, at 5am and now I see what I did wrong and feel like a Jacka$$

[Martin]

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