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That was marvelous! I was thinkng I should write sometihng like that a while back, but I didn't, but I am sure am glad somone did it justice! Your passion for the subject, leaps off the page, and you shoot down many of the false perceptions that people hold against us.
Your courage to write what you feel, and actually have the guts to make that an assignment, is super. I applaud you. This is a great first step for people who perceive us as freaks, or pedophiles, to understand what we think, and feel. You should totally submit this to a magazine, and post it on other places on the internet, so that other people can understand what the majority of us are really like. Maybe you can put that in the Wiki as well, and any time someone bashes us, we can direct them to that link. |
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It was an interesting piece of writing, and you deserved that "A".
![]() It was unique, in an unconventional sort of way, if you know what I mean. Your sentences were very fragmented and short, but it fit the subject at hand; it made it sound like the story was written from the perspective of a child (infantilist), and I thought that was very cool. Of course, I would have written it from an extremely analytical standpoint...but that's just me. I would have probably bored you all to death.
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