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Broken Dream 1

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Shoved off and crushed, fall to the floor
Broken in the dirt as the rain begins to pour
Beaten and bloodied and ragged and sore
Given up, trying doesn't matter anymore

Bathed in the mud, soaking up the pain
Given up again for trying in vain
Pitched from the place his soul was slain
Tears and mud and blood make stain

Lightning in a sky dark and bleak
Finding gone from him all that he seek
Leaves him down and somber, so meek
His shredded soul leaves his body weak

He hardly moves, can barely grope
Wonders how he'll ever cope
Suddenly... there! A glimmer of hope
The clouds part way, down comes a rope

He pulls himself up, hand by hand
Back into a promised land
He's on a beach, in the sand
Not lying there, he can suddenly stand

The sun is shining, away clouds break
He'll keep on living, for life's sake
Bearing any toll his dreams make
Doing whatever it may take

To see the day his dreams come true
He knows now what he wishes to do
He sees a boat, and takes the cue
And sails off on seas of blue


  1. binkygirl's Avatar
    Wow that is Really good! The imagery is beautifyl
  2. StacyAnn's Avatar
    very well put together. Imagery and everyhting was very well put together.. Good work A+
  3. ShortGuy's Avatar
    It actually made my eyes a bit misty. - the Adult Baby / Diaper Lover / Incontinence Support Community. is designed to be viewed in Firefox, with a resolution of at least 1280 x 1024.